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 LaBellaLuna2

Joined: 5/23/2008
Msg: 26
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Posted: 6/13/2008 5:23:56 PM
Ok OP, you aren't getting much attention because you are just too nice!

I took a stab at making some edits Maggie-style. If you like them, they are yours, and if not, I guess you get what you pay for! LOL

I tried to stick with your words and thoughts and took literary license just a couple of times. It could use more detail, but live with it a while and see how it works for you.


I’m a truthful, passionate, laid-back, reliable, sort of person. I love nothing better than to meet up with friends and maybe go do some line dancing or have a go at Ten Pin Bowling. I am not very good at either of them but an outing with me can always guarantee a hearty laugh! Last year, I was really thrilled to fulfill one of my life long ambitions to visit Australia. I spent Christmas and New Years 2006/7 just lapping up the sunshine, something that all of us Glaswegians don't see enough.


I would love to meet a funny, truthful, and laid-back guy. Someone who could show me how to win a game of Ten Pin Bowling, but wouldn’t be too upset if I beat him (loser pays, right?) I am searching for someone willing to learn new things with me, such as line dancing. What do you say to some Karaoke? It doesn’t matter if you can sing or not, as long as you are up for some good laughs. A serious side is important too, and of course a little passion couldn’t hurt!




I hope this helps and I wish you good luck!

BTW, what is your favorite song to line dance to and how about karaoke??
 glesgagal

Joined: 7/29/2006
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Posted: 6/14/2008 4:34:58 AM
hi Maggie,thanks a lot for your help, have added your words and also my fav songs so hopefully things might improve lol

thanks again Glesgagal
 LaBellaLuna2

Joined: 5/23/2008
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Posted: 6/14/2008 5:01:12 AM
OP,
I am not Maggie. I am Cathie. Maggie is a regular reviewer on this forum who sometimes reworks a profile for someone as I have done for you here.

I took a lot of time to paste your profile into Word so that I could do a spell and grammar check. What I posted back in the box was the results of those edits. I see you chose to use a couple of my suggestions which you typed into your original profile which is great if they suited you. What I didn't see was the edits on your spelling and grammar. Is there a reason you did not use them because I really think it would be a good idea for you? All you would need to do would be to copy and paste. Do you know how to do it? If not, feel free to message me privately and I will help.

Good luck!
 glesgagal

Joined: 7/29/2006
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Posted: 7/1/2008 2:52:15 PM
Having changed my profile, I now find I have had no messages since putting new profile up,wot else can i do ?
 browolf

Joined: 4/7/2007
Msg: 30
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Posted: 7/1/2008 5:01:14 PM
stuff you've got in interests are pretty generic and not that exciting in the scheme of things.
Sure they might be accurate, but you gotta stand out from the crowd in this game. Even women cant afford to be seen as generic. Ya gotta put in lots on things, it dont even matter how silly they seem. if you like it put it in. but try to stay away from things only women would like. I dont think teddybears would go down well. put if you one eared teddybears, thats kind of different. People would be falling over themselves to ask why you like one-eared teddybears. see what I mean?

Im not sure how to spell teddybear. but i know kareoke is wrong.
Its karaoke.
 glesgagal

Joined: 7/29/2006
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Posted: 7/2/2008 11:45:47 AM
thnx for comments,have added a few new interests, things lookin any better ??
 cyndiw37129

Joined: 9/1/2007
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Posted: 8/3/2008 11:42:44 AM
how do i get my profile reviewed
 ~Maggie~

Joined: 3/12/2008
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Posted: 8/3/2008 12:42:36 PM
In the profile review forum; upper left hand corner you'll find *new thread* click on that and just ask for a review.

Hope this helps : )
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