Ok OP, you aren't getting much attention because you are just too nice!
I took a stab at making some edits Maggie-style. If you like them, they are yours, and if not, I guess you get what you pay for! LOL
I tried to stick with your words and thoughts and took literary license just a couple of times. It could use more detail, but live with it a while and see how it works for you.
I’m a truthful, passionate, laid-back, reliable, sort of person. I love nothing better than to meet up with friends and maybe go do some line dancing or have a go at Ten Pin Bowling. I am not very good at either of them but an outing with me can always guarantee a hearty laugh! Last year, I was really thrilled to fulfill one of my life long ambitions to visit Australia. I spent Christmas and New Years 2006/7 just lapping up the sunshine, something that all of us Glaswegians don't see enough.
I would love to meet a funny, truthful, and laid-back guy. Someone who could show me how to win a game of Ten Pin Bowling, but wouldn’t be too upset if I beat him (loser pays, right?) I am searching for someone willing to learn new things with me, such as line dancing. What do you say to some Karaoke? It doesn’t matter if you can sing or not, as long as you are up for some good laughs. A serious side is important too, and of course a little passion couldn’t hurt!
I hope this helps and I wish you good luck!
BTW, what is your favorite song to line dance to and how about karaoke??