| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/7/2008 4:33:15 PM | cheshire, I appreciated your input.
You saw more as more than an angst teenager, which is not what I'm trying to accomplish at all. As far as the life flight is concerned I'd rather not post the whole story on my profile as if to seek sympathy and make people feel bad for me or shy away because I've had such a horrible thing happen in my life...
But to make a long story short, I was life flighted because my brain was bleeding. I had fallen in my shower on December 4th of 06' and taken to the hospital and given a cat scan, afterwards the staff at the hospital told me everything would be fine and that my head would just hurt for a few days. I awoke the next morning, didn't go to school, and eventually had the hospital call around eleven a.m to tell me they looked over my cat scan and found an abnormality. From there I was taken in a helicopter to children's hospital located in Columbus and put in intensive care for a week while they did tests and evaluations.
It turns out my brain had hit my skull when I fell in the shower and caused a hemorrhage, it stopped bleeding on its own but I still have an inch by an inch of a half located on my left frontal lobe. I actually go back to the hospital Tuesday for a checkup and follow up to see if any of the blood has absorbed.
Overall a lot of people have bashed my profile, saying that perhaps I'm too blunt and such..but I've got to be blunt and honest to try to find a person that is perfect for me because since that incident I've learned to appreciate life more and am completely aware that no one can make me completely happy, only I myself am capable of that. | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/7/2008 4:35:23 PM | And veloise...
I do recall Crazy posting this: "I take pride in completing my in degree, in looking after my family, in serving my country... you take pride in listening to music. Awesome."
He serves his country, and he wants us to recognize him for it. | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/8/2008 6:07:31 AM |
I can be narky etc but most my posts are in humour You are the embodiment of hilarity.
though i am also not posting this to split opinions. I have probably read about a million forum posts in my life, assuming ten for every one I have made. You have done nothing special with your neat little tag on disclaimer. Seen it all before.
I can be narky etc but most my posts are in humour and i only pick on A-holes - my last post was a bit harsh with the army speal i just get bored hearing his speal on 'i'm mr successful Army lad.' Well good for you buddy thanks for telling us 1000 times, very useful hearing the same thing 24/7.
I do not bring it up that often. There are some posts detailing my experiences with being shot at though, feel free to read them.
Are you are quite done trying to assasinate my character? Anything else you want to say about me? About my work? About my willingness to die? About the dreams? How about you go and dig up some of my posts on that and make fun of me for dreaming about mortars and rockets? I am sure that would show how hilarious you are. | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/8/2008 7:42:57 AM | ^^don't forget the clowns with chestpacks chasing you down. While I agree with the OP Uncle that you do bring up the military in your defense a lot I think the fact that you ARE in the military and proud of that fact is justification enough. And OP your attempted assassination of his character is testament to yours. You say you only pick on azzholes where there is a root to every problem honey. You aren't by chance an activist too are you?
EDIT: Nevermind...I got my ansswer. | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/8/2008 8:32:24 AM | "I do not bring it up that often. There are some posts detailing my experiences with being shot at though, feel free to read them.
Are you are quite done trying to assasinate my character? Anything else you want to say about me? About my work? About my willingness to die? About the dreams? How about you go and dig up some of my posts on that and make fun of me for dreaming about mortars and rockets? I am sure that would show how hilarious you are. "
Not much else to add, i decided to post extremely about you so you can perhaps have an angle of what it is like to see from the other side of the coin (what it is like to be bashed instead of doing all the bashing which you seem to do quite well). When bashing people it is easy not to think about how the other person will react and a lot of your posts tend to be digging against people for the hell of it. I get the gist that you are an alpha male that has a high opinion of yourself, fair enough and i see you have a demographic :)
I don't read your posts except the ones i see on profile reviews and every now and then its like here he goes again on his self negative abuse for your own gratification and i don't check every thread. You wasn't too bad here but it was one too many posts of un-necessity for my liking, i guess it was more of a build up thing with me.
At the same time you have a good ability to review well i suppose it depends on your mood at the time on how you post. Not sure..
Well if you want to bash people then fair enough but, just don't expect everyone to be quiet when people retaliate.
Also like in an early post you made - i was just using your personality as an over generalisation :) - though if i have caused offense to you then i apologise i don't get a kick out of bashing people unless i dislike someone and i do not dislike you, just annoys me seeing you bash others for the hell of it which in turn stirs up others to bandwagon at times and the boring posts that some reviewers say with lines such as,
"Ya can't have a go at a reviewer, read the forum rules they are just giving you an honest review"
lol, pretty funny.... but yeah i will do every1 a favour and shut up now...
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/10/2008 12:38:51 AM | From your profile, the only thing I'm getting is -
1. Your paragraphs look like lists.
My apologies if you've elaborated but they look like unsustantiated lists. To be honest, I lost interest within a line.
2. Ok so music is a huge thing to you.
You have this awesome opportunity to tell the world what you're all about and most of 'about you' is about other people's music. | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 6/10/2008 1:54:04 AM | | Just a coupla suggestions from an older guy. 1st, beautiful eyes, consider skipping some of the history; leave room for some mystery. Tell us what you are looking for in a guy; the main things that attract you. Lotta guys may consider you to be young; just as lotta girls consider me old. May or may not be so; but advise us of your maturity, and your interest in mature guys; or rather guys who are mature. Someone who is sensitive to you. Great eyes. Mike | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 7/9/2008 2:58:41 PM | i was kind of hoping this thread died its death. Fair play with the last guys deleted comment, i guess he was just after a..... "me love u long time message".
No dis-respect to crazytimes on that note for the record, although i hear he does jack of to 12 year ol porn materail 
this narrow minded message was brought to you by Smurfs ---- um.... what one can do with one female :) | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 7/30/2008 7:21:19 AM | I enjoyed reading your profile. It was long, but so are novels. We read novels because we want to know and enjoy the plot. So in this case I don't think it's a bad thing. You wanted a no BS view of you and I think you attained that. I may be a tad bias because I think you are adorable and amazing. I also have a thing for someone who has the independence to be themselves. I respect that.
To be blunt, to hell with all of these childish guys trying to nay say your profile. You see, they are actually so insecure about them selves that seeing a girl with the fortitude to put herself out there like you have done is somehow an affront to their honour. So they must look for the near negligible details that anyone with a working cerebellum would be able to process as having a more profound meaning than the appearance of a simple word.
I will be honest, I haven't read all the post in this thread. I caught just enough of some of these guys BS and a few insubstantial responses to get an idea and felt the need to make my observations on that. If I have time I will go back and attempt to read them. For now, the sun is up, it's time for me to go to bed.
Blessings and all that happy junk,
Nick | |
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| I want a critc, but please not too harsh.
Posted: 7/30/2008 8:02:12 AM | | OP: I think your profile is wonderfully age appropriate. Even though I've got some years on you, I'm not so blinded by my so-called wisdom to realize your profile isn't supposed to APPEAL to me or geezers of my ilk. People your age are going to be very responsive to your cuteness, wit and interest in art/writing etc. I think your pictures are more Myspace/Facebook-y than what the geezers are used to and don't recognize that's kind of how you crazy kids do this picture thing. It's not any worse than the pictures i see of 40 year olds with teased bangs, frizzy perms and tapered mom jeans cuddling a teddy bear. That gives me way more of the icks than some 19 year who does the myspace tilt in her photos! | |
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