| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:08:25 PM | you're swimming in it that sea of morning glories a purple blueness | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:09:06 PM | this purple blueness this sea of tumoil this whirlpool of life
oooops sorry drea.....doubled up there so did a quick change ...you have 15min to amend
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:10:07 PM | oops missed that
new york times, wall street such stark manipulation still a little thrill
I am too slow lol
the whirlpool of life magical in its giving the pain and the joy
EDIT: while I would love to take the seas, wind fire one..I give and let some one else..but, I may steal the line for later use LOL LOL | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:11:38 PM | your swimming in it eddys you soul away down seas, wind, rain, fire, earth | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:21:11 PM | seas, wind, rain, fire, earth elements of truth and life joined reality | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:23:17 PM | joined reality awash the mind it burns bright words and thoughts abound | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:24:55 PM | words and thoughts abound spilling from the page's edge falling on the floor | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:26:30 PM | falling on the floor like the barbers cutting work but hair will grow back | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:33:02 PM | but hair will grow back long sensuous tresses to assist knight up tower
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:35:36 PM | to assist knight up tower needs no help he's a manly man every girlneeds her hero | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:37:56 PM | assist knight up tower his math skills were very poor he lost in the count | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:40:05 PM | he lost in the count numbers like words jumble up dislexia hurts | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:45:16 PM | dislexia hurts yet angels follow the same flexing rebellion. | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:45:58 PM | dislexia hurts Really? I did not know that. I am dyslexic. | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:47:08 PM | flexing rebellion reaching out to save souls which were dead and gone | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 5:58:29 PM | which were dead and gone dropped in their prime, beaten into submission | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:01:32 PM | into submission I rage against my bound hands aching to strike back | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:01:52 PM | into submission i implore my mind to go it never listens | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:03:28 PM | aching to strike back luke hand me light sabre now avenge the lost world | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:06:38 PM | it never listens my timing is at best off left with my self pity | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:09:20 PM | avenge the lost world brave new travelers retreat never give up hope | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:10:11 PM | avenge the lost world sirens calling from the deep sailors give their souls
nite ed, more the morrow honey x
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:12:33 PM | sailors give their souls for a tot of rum, 8 bells who tolls bells for you | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:13:58 PM | Sailors give their souls To the mermaids of the sea Oh sweet sweet decent! | |
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| Haiku #3 Posted: 7/5/2008 6:19:51 PM | oh sweet sweet decent men like that are hard to find they exist but find them | |
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