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Posted: 7/20/2004 6:05:52 PM | hi there goat!.......yeah I had to post more tragic words....it seem it's all I know!....lol
really love your poems!.......I can't put words together like that........your are so down to earth and mine......well not even close to earth.....more like hell....LOL.....I am glad that you don't mind me postin here with you, and the words that you use about my poetry....well lets just say that they blow me away!.....you have a way with words that's for sure......
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Posted: 7/20/2004 6:23:09 PM | Maybe we're too close to our respective poems to see them as others do. I think my stuff is crap and I love yours, and you poo-poo yours and praise mine. Seems we're at a deadlock here, Goth.
You have rythm and style and grace. And your poems are great, too. You continue to leave me breathless with every post. I did say to keep 'em coming....right? I did say that somewhere, I swear I did.... | |
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Posted: 7/20/2004 6:33:47 PM | LMAO!...yes you did!...can you see if we made a poem together it would be something like this.........
the haunted herbs that grow
on the edge of the grave yard at night
will let you parolized
and never seeing daylight!
not a very good example , but you with nature and me with night vision so to speak!...LOL
I love post and seein what you write and its about real life things, where mine is also, but ppl have to put there self in another place in there mind to understand mine.....
but maybe you will get a chuckle outta this!.......thanks, and have a good one goat!...your one of a kind!....and I like that!....... | |
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Posted: 7/20/2004 6:58:45 PM | Put said herbs in the mix
A concoction you could fix
Of grass and twigs n' such
I doubt if you would drink it
And if you did, like it much
The thing that struck me most
Would be that it would make
Some fine compost.
Would it look something like that? | |
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Posted: 7/21/2004 3:41:17 PM | your words cut like a sword
left with me are thoughts of betrayal inside,
when you knew that I was trying
to get out of the pitch black that I reside.
I have tried everything to
show you devotion,
and all I got was upset
with all kinds of emotion.
may these words linger in you mind
and captivate you,
letting you know the torment
that you can do.
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Posted: 7/21/2004 9:16:05 PM | Gasp. Long day. Too tired. Can. Only. Write. In. Sentence. Fragments.
I dunno what I have in store for today, as I finally was able to sit down after beng on the go from 6:30am. Goth is still placing her gems here...that's great. She's a talented soul.
Now let me ruin the moment by posting this:
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My cheese has a blue fur coat
It's plush and wonderous
That PETA hasn't
Gotten a hold of it
And painted it red
My tub of yogurt
Also bears the same fur
Like stale chinchillas
Huddling together
For warmth
In the darkness of
The fridge
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Spontaneous poetry. Dangerous when agitated. Now I'll have to spend some quality time cleaning out the fridge. I wonder if I can make a pair of slippers out of all the luxurious blue fur that's in there?
Tomorrow, then. | |
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Posted: 7/22/2004 1:43:00 AM | Still really love your poetry goat!.......but had to laugh when you said about also bears the same fur like stale chinchillas.......I have the critters!.......lol......they are great too!....very people oriented!.......but if anything in your frig resembles this, yes by all means clean it out!......LOL......
keep um comin!......
until tonight, maybe I can whip something else up for this thread.........lol | |
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| Re: GoatSmell's Own Poetry Thread
Posted: 7/22/2004 6:40:05 AM | | well you two....... just really have a repoire that is quite refreshing to watch and read . Keep responding to one another. And for all our sakes, please keep writing. Thanks...Goat, and Gothic | |
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Posted: 7/22/2004 7:14:11 AM | | why thank you txgent!....I didn't actually realized that other people was reading this thread!....LOL.....but we will keep them comin!...... | |
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Posted: 7/22/2004 2:05:00 PM | the poison that I have runnin
in these veins
runs wild in me
to cause all kinds of pains
a vixen is what I'm called
only by a few
to the rest they wouldn't
have a clue
I won't back down
or crumble under fear
cause it's my manner
to let you wondering my dear
Goat this in no way has anything to do with you!.........I love your poetry!.......and I love chattin with ya!......hope that you post a new one tonight for all to enjoy!.....see ya in a bit!
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Posted: 7/22/2004 6:14:03 PM | Goth! Loved it! I'm glad you posted an explanation, otherwise I would've said I have that effect on a lot of people. Well, it's partly true....I do have that effect on most females. But I love your poems...they rhyme! I find that so hard for my lazy ass to do. I lack the discipline you do, Goth. Glad to have you here. I mentioned that to you before too, right? Yuh...I think I did 'er somethin'....
Hi there, Txgent! Glad to see you in here. Thanks for the kind words, though I know Goth deserves them much more than I do. I'm surprised people come here and actually read my stuff...Goth's poems are very readable, but mine....well, mine are kinda like bathroom-wall stuff.
Ergh. Today I have the attention-span of a gerbil. Must be the end of the week or I'm having a stroke. Either way...
I had an interesting ride home today. I mentioned back some time ago that you really see a lot of stuff motorists don't. Today was no exception.
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Leaping Jockeys, Floundering Bras
Rain spilled on the asphalt
Pinning the litter to the ground
Vehicles slopped by
Casting water all around
I pedalled my way to Circle
Gasping as I went
Running over the leftover crud
Feeling oddly spent
I saw something white
Lying on the street before me
It's telltale shape belied
What I'd known it to be
Gonch, freshly flung
From some moving car
Lying on the wet, sodden ground
A black road it did mar
I didn't check it for streaks
As I was moving too fast
But ahead on the road
I knew it wasn't the last
Another pair of tighty whities
Was ahead of me once more
Followed by a sock or two
Could there be anymore?
Further ahead still
Was a black bra so lacy
It was size C, maybe more
And meant to be more racy
There was another
And another yet still
Gonch and more socks later
I've nearly had my fill
I realized soon what was going on
There was a Goodwill store nearby
With boxes open and wind was up
Gonch was blowing across the lawn
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Ogh! Crappy! Why do I punish you fine people with this stuff? Beeeeecaaaauuuseeee Iiiiiiii lllllllooooooooveeee yoooooouuuuuuu!!!!
Tomorrow, then. | |
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Posted: 7/22/2004 6:23:19 PM | BRAVO!!! to you Goat and yes of course to you too Goth, It makes me smile to read your wonderful words and smil'n right now is very hard to do so PLEASE keep 'em com'n....
be watching tomorra...
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Posted: 7/22/2004 6:33:04 PM | Tink!! You're here too? Wow, this is becoming like one of those coffee houses by the university where people wear black clothes and listen to poetry and snap their fingers instead of clapping.
Er...I mean, thanks.
Goth *is* good, isn't she? She keeps this thread alive.
Keep smiling. We will make you smile if you don't.
You DON'T want that to happen. So smile. | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 2:38:11 AM | WOW Tinka you come here also?.........so glad that you like the poems!......thank you for the praise!......we will keep em comin!......
goat when you was sayin in your poem about the black bra, at first I was thinkin was that mine?.....LOL......as always I loved it!......your words are put together so fine!....never stop letting us enjoy them!......*snapping* fingers as I read your poetry!....lol
I will try to whip up something tonight for just you goat!.......so lets see what I come up with!.......this could be fun!.......until tonight my friend(s)<------because this place is getting very active!........lol
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Posted: 7/23/2004 5:50:47 AM | goat you are more than welcome
in my world of the abyss
for we know that it makes
some people wanna hiss.
we were brought together
because of this thread
and now there are people who
thinks we should wed.
the friend that I found in you
with words of dark
can only get better
with all of this spark!
goat you are a very good friend....and I want to say THANK YOU!.........
MUUAAAHHHHSSSSSS<--------------TO YOU! | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 7:24:56 PM | Goth! Again! Lovely! Dark! And! Lovely! Like a tall pint of Guiness...bless you and bless your prescence in this thread. People think we should wed? What is this...high school? I'm sure I left that behind in 1986. Feh.
I will state for the record that Goth is a talented and lovely woman. I appreciate every post she makes here or anywhere around here. She has earned the GoatSmell Seal of Approval (tm).
And, here's my meagre contribution of the day:
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Poutine! Why Dost Thou Smite Me So?
Poutine is truly evil stuff
But yet it’s sorely tempting
Burger King called me
From the battlements
With promises of
Never being
Hungry again
An cavernous stomach
Packed with
Cheese curds
Gravy
And fries
Dr. Atkins would not approve
Bugger the good doctor
I’m starved
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Ola!! It is done like dinner! I must now feast. Poutine and beer....it's so Canadian like...like getting drunk and arguing about politics.
Tomorrow, then. | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 7:48:22 PM | sounds like your very hungry!....lol.....but that sounds like my kinda meal!......LOL
yeah I heard that we should wed, so I figured I would say something about that!....lol
never was really good at keepin my mouth shut!....lol
thank you goat for all your praise and acceptance and of course YOUR SEAL OF APPROVAL!
what more could a girl ask for?...........lol
you continue to bring life to this thread, and I just throw in some dark words that contain some fallen angel dust over them.......but I will try to keep up with you my friend......if I fall behind give me a cyber *smack* on the um......well just give me one!.....LOL
until we meet again........... | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 8:09:48 PM | Well, don't praise me too quick. There was a grammatical error in my last poem due to a last minute change. "An cavernous"? Leaping, creeping JeeZUS! If I were editing myself, I'd have a great big red pen out now.
Fallen angel dust is hard to come by. Consider yourself blessed, Goth. No smacks on the arse or elsewhere required. | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 8:23:31 PM | Goat and Goth once again you was just marvelous...
mmmm pooooooutine, AND BEEEER!!!! think i might have to take a drive, already have the beer just need the poutine....truly no time tho....too much packing to do....
i'm off to snoop around a thread or two
hoping i find that all is not in an uproar
makes me sick like the flu
and feel like kicking in a door
so please all do get along
cuz i'd hate to have to hurt a few
by way of singing them a song
but i will...so don't temp me to... | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 8:28:26 PM | Tink!! Your first poem! And right here in this thread!
I like it. It's speaking to me...it's telling me to bike to BK and get some more poutine. But biking to BK and back would neiutralize the effects of the poutine. Fate is a cruel sister. | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 8:47:34 PM | why thank you oh master of poetry himself...
i think it's rubbing off on me
so just sit here and let me see
if i may come up with one more for thee
if it's good we could be the poetic three
off the box dang cat
got tape on yer tail
and be'n a brat
so don't you wail
i'll have to get the bat
and they'll put me in jail
so off the box dang cat | |
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Posted: 7/23/2004 8:55:22 PM | Now that's very...uh....Theodor Dreiselish. I like it! Poetry inspired by the pure mundanness (is that a word?) of packing boxes.
I was trying to come up with a small ode to the expired blue cake in the toilet, but the words haven't come yet. Perhaps they will with enough beer and bran. Perhaps tomorrow.
Thanks, Tink! You've got the spirit! | |
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| Re: GoatSmell's Own Poetry Thread
Posted: 7/24/2004 9:24:37 AM | Tink loved your poems!....they are great!.......I wish you would kick in a few doors and start to sing so things would cool off a bit!....LOL
Goat again your words........ohhhhh your words!......they are from the heart and breath takin as always!......you are such a great goat!.....LOL
after a night
of demonic words of hate
please tell me that a
miracle will be my fate
all the gloom
that's in the air
will hopefully die
and he will care
this girl is gothic
as you all know
but without him
she needs him to
make magic flow
so would you take
this mutilated soul
and join me again in our
passionate evil that is our goal
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Posted: 7/24/2004 12:53:51 PM | thanx ms. gothic and back at you...this one you have written above makes me kinda sad or maybe kinda scared....it is very powerful....puts pictures in my head....OH MYYYY....
keep it up they are GRRRRREAT!!
now where is that mr. goat?? Goooooat!!! Where are you??? cummon i need my fix today...already had my poutine and chicken, now just need a little eye candy to complete the mix...
off in a world of hardened bliss
sealed this fate with a kiss
trying to figure out this emptiness
if it only took just one wish
yup that's my entire input at the moment, lame but it's my 2 cents, now i must go and pack away... | |
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