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Posted: 10/2/2008 5:38:25 PM | You should take out the first sentence - the one about the headline not being funny. It doesn't add anything.
I also think your profile should be longer. You write well, and it was interesting to read. A longer profile will help weed out a lot of the dubs. That's all I've got... | |
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Posted: 10/2/2008 9:57:15 PM | Dear Winernotreally,
Yes! Someone flagged the swimsuit shot. I received an auto-generated nastygram from POF about it.
The long term thing has been mentioned before, so I will look at it seriously again.
Thanks for stopping by!
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Posted: 10/2/2008 9:58:36 PM | Dear Writtenbyhank,
Thanks so much for your feedback. Actually I'm searching for a better headline so I can take out the first sentence.
Thanks for the compliment!
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Posted: 10/3/2008 12:34:13 PM | Okay, let's brainstorm about headlines. (You don't have to take any of these, just trying to get you thinking in the right direction.) The things that stand out about what you have in your profile are: Liberal, Christian, serious hiker, practically nothing you don't do in terms of physical activities.
"Climb every mountain, ford every stream." -- don't laugh, I really like this one.
"Rock walls are for sissies." -- heh, maybe a little aggressive.
"Care to give me a hand?" -- as in, a hand climbing. Okay, not so good.
"How about a hike on roller blades?" --- Hmmm.
I'm trying to avoid any Jesus references as they may be too irreverent for your tastes.
"There may be cheese at the top." -- probably the only thing that would motivate me to climb another mountain. Possibly not useful for you.
Have I asked you before why you don't post more pics? You're gorgeous, it can only help. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2008 9:50:10 PM | How about "Lewis looking for Clark?" Maybe a little obscure for some.
I have to agree with Ursula's last sentence. A little Catherine Keener-ish. I'm far enough that I can get away with saying that. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2008 10:11:52 PM | Dear UrsulaMajor,
U R 2 Funny!
Those headlines had me roflmao.
I would consider "care to give me a hand" but someone might think "job"
Thank you much for saying I'm gorgeous! I'm truly stunned and delighted. I had posted other photos. Perhaps you didn't read in the above comments what happened.
I posted a photo of myself standing in a waterfall in Nepal, while wearing a one piece swimsuit. Someone flagged that photo as nudity. POF removed all my other photos.
As soon as the profile review thing calms down, I'll post the photos again.
Thanks again for your very thoughtful feedback.
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Posted: 10/3/2008 10:13:30 PM | Dear McGuffin,
Thank you so much for the compliment! I didn't know who Catherine Keener was, but I googled her image. Wow! I'm very flattered.
Thanks so much for stopping by and offering feedback.
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