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Posted: 7/17/2009 4:18:51 AM | Autumn comes later (altering to fit my needs and the 5-7-5 stance!!!...lol)
breezing blood rushing warmth of
mild summer's dream | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 6:52:52 AM | a mild summer's dream
quiet twilight before dawn
hope of a new day
(hammy...love you sweets...wishing you, your matt and the kids continued happiness...always!!...mwah!) | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 7:08:47 AM | hope of a new day.
hope for a new day.
hope is a new day.
(i hope basho will excuse me for borrowing a version of his 3 line repetition.) | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 7:34:32 AM | hope is a new day
an egg full of promises
cracked and leaking | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 8:03:11 AM | cracked and leaking
possibilities ,dreams,adventure,and opportunities
all scrambled together w/ joy | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 8:43:27 AM | scrambled together
floating overhead with joy
celebrate sunset
morning janny, Haiku is written in three lines with specific syllables for each line.
The pattern is 5 - 7 - 5.
There are other Haiku rules but this forum game gently overlooks those.) | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 9:03:52 AM | so helpful...........gently???
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celebrate sunset
with a prayer silently said
a tear softly shed | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 10:06:50 AM | a tear softly shed
for the beauty of it all
what will today bring?
(('morning)) | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 10:36:16 AM | what will today bring
rising up, high on tiptoes
search the horizon | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 11:51:56 AM | search the horizon
and pray your ship will come in
but vain orison | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 2:06:33 PM | But vain orison
Vodka, gin, rum, triple sec
Mmm my long island | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 3:38:17 PM | Mmm my long island
frozen glass and shake it up
creates best Iced tea ..... | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 5:55:29 PM | creates best Iced tea ....
frozen glass on sunny beach
enjoy the weekend | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 7:35:54 PM | enjoy the weekend
work-a-day week's second act
reenergizing
gizzerman - like the mention of a season or including a cutting word are not expected .. and I like the word: gently. *smile* | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 8:01:26 PM | thanks, expat57
reenergizing
creating this -a days dream
please, come and join me | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 9:21:42 PM | please, come and join me
in this free for all spirits
spontaneously | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 10:35:17 PM | spontaneously
Share laughter deeply with friends
Burdens quick to fall | |
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Posted: 7/17/2009 11:36:42 PM | Burdens quick to fall
clumps of blueberries ripen
tumble into pie!!! | |
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Posted: 7/18/2009 12:16:10 AM | tumble into pie !!!
succulent juicy delight
I'll take a large slice ~  | |
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