| C'Mere, I'll do ya'.
Posted: 11/2/2008 11:28:50 AM | You do a great, honest job of reviews so I hope that you get a chance to look at mine. I'm thinking it's a little too long.
Thank you. | |
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| wyzeman
Posted: 11/2/2008 1:54:05 PM | | Merci. As soon as I get done disposing of my latest victim, I'll take some smiling pictures, and I will pay someone to create a personality for me, hopefully one bubbly, fun, and maybe they'll make sure I know how to swing dance or something. Seriously though, thank you. You're the first person to confirm my fear that I look like a handsome Charles Manson. | |
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| C'Mere, I'll do ya'.
Posted: 11/2/2008 2:03:54 PM | | OK - I made some changes in an attempt to do as you suggested ... Let me have it! | |
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| LiaLooksAgain
Posted: 11/2/2008 2:07:33 PM | I'll take crack at this one..
do you realize that you posted a picture of your big ass stuck up in the air?
Just curious. Why would you do that?
Wrong end. You are a pretty woman and you need better pics.
Your interests lead me to think that our first date would be at the Happy Meal playground.
This Week's Lesson: Beauty Is Skin Deep, but Superficial and Shallow are to the Bone!
That statement was obviously written for one person.
Get rid of that.
8. Mental health issues are in the eye of the beholder...or the serial fisher!
list's suck
I got bored and just read the first half. | |
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| trirunner
Posted: 11/2/2008 3:11:55 PM | I can't lie because seperated is my status right now, if it said divorced how would it look?
thanks, value the input | |
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| trirunner
Posted: 11/2/2008 4:06:49 PM | There's not much that you can do about that, bro.
At least you're honest.
You're not divorced. You're still fvcked up.
I'd keep with the honesty, if I were you.
You're not divorced. | |
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| Randy3512
Posted: 11/2/2008 4:45:59 PM | | Hey Pandy,I'm in line..Do me... Take no prisoners,Give me whatcha got! | |
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| lialooksagain
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:06:05 PM | Dayum, and they tell me *I* sound like a ballbuster.
Sweetie, you sound like you're gonna be that chick who finds fault with everything a man does. This totally belies the description of yourself as sweet. Get that list off your profile NOW before any other men see it.
Ease up.
You might be looking for a man in theory, but you've got barbed wire up all over your profile that says "leave me alone". Guys like to feel needed every now and again... so show your soft side.
and I agree with Brawny on your butt pic... not a good angle for a dating site profile.
Your bone structure is great and you have a wonderful smile... get more flattering pictures up, I have a feeling you are way better looking than your photos indicate.
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| devil163
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:11:24 PM | | not bad ... but it needs some spice, after you get more pictures up, list some interests or personality quirks that set you apart. You sound very nice, but very bland. | |
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| jonas albrecht
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:14:05 PM | I'm sure you're not as unhinged as your profile makes you sound.
It's cool to have a little bit of an edge, but you missed the mark and headed into serious weirdness.
Tone it way down and add more pictures (hopefully without cartoons, stuffed animals or any kind of toy) | |
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| shels40
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:19:09 PM | 1) lose the dog pic. It's cool that you have a dog... lots of people are pet freaks... but maybe put "playing with my labrador retreiver" as a interest keyword , or something of that nature. Guys see dog and cat pics and immediately wonder if they're gonna someday wake up in your bed with dog ass in their face. It's just best to leave pet pictures out of the equation altogether.
Your last pic is great, you are a really pretty woman. I think you need more pics that show that. The one with the silly face is OK... but I wouldn't make it your main.
Text? Not nearly enough about you. Give us some interests/ personality traits that make you interesting and real and not like a thousand other women here. | |
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| simply steven
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:22:24 PM | your pictures are either underexposed or underexposed... the only clear one has you making a weird face. Get new pics.
Text? It's garbled and reads like a giant run on sentence. The content is pretty good, but the form is horrible. Rework it to make it an easier read. | |
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| Arinna
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:25:20 PM | refer to my last post... it covers your profile as well re: dogs and skimpy personal information.
You are pretty in your main photo, but your smile looks really stiff and forced. I'd consider putting up one of your last two, and /or getting some fresh ones .  | |
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| funguy431
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:26:41 PM | I like the additional information... very good.
I'd also suggest that you format it a little better. As is, it's in choppy little sentences that seem disjointed. | |
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| suitablematch
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:29:33 PM | Lose the picture and get new ones fast. This one makes it look as though you have no chin at all.
I'd also reword the bit about crosswords.... the way it's worded makes you sound like a key character in an Agatha Christie novel.
The rest of your text is pretty good as is | |
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| ranks76
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:33:11 PM | I like most of your profile... your text is good and describes you well... your pictures demonstrate some of your interests and are clear and well exposed.
The two things I'd change? your tag line and the "quotes" portion.
They make you sound like you've attended "effective auto salesmanship 101" and took entirely too much to heart  | |
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| lialooksagain
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:34:51 PM | Thanks so much! I appreciate the honesty...You Rock!
Lia | |
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| LiaLooksAgain
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:35:32 PM | Thanks for the honesty...ouch about the butt though... | |
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| wyzeman
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:36:04 PM |
Merci. As soon as I get done disposing of my latest victim,
don't forget to bleach the ax (so, I watch CSI! it'll pay off when I pull off the perfect murder someday)
I'll take some smiling pictures, and I will pay someone to create a personality for me, hopefully one bubbly, fun, and maybe they'll make sure I know how to swing dance or something. don't go too overboard... I'm not sure we can handle you all bubbly :P
Seriously though, thank you. You're the first person to confirm my fear that I look like a handsome Charles Manson.
how cool is it that I have people thanking me for insulting their profiles?
You are very welcome... hope it helps! | |
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| trirunner
Posted: 11/2/2008 7:38:10 PM |
I can't lie because seperated is my status right now, if it said divorced how would it look?
thanks, value the input
I wasn't suggesting that you lie... more that I was informing you that there isn't much you can do to get any more interest as long as you're not divorced. Changes to your profile won't help.
Frankly? women don't want to get involved with men who have unfinished business. YOu are wasting yoru time here until you divorce. | |
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| devil163
Posted: 11/2/2008 8:02:25 PM | Well for the pictures its kinda hard, i'm usually the one taking the pictures and i'm not much of a fan of being taken in a photo... but anyway i'll try. I'll putt more interests but what did you mean by "personality quirks"? if you meant by qualities or details that would set me apart from other ppl well i though i already did so i might need more help for that part.
Thanks pandy :hug: you've been a good help
Edit: i upgraded my interests just hope i don't sound like a nerd. | |
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| LiaLooksAgain
Posted: 11/2/2008 8:26:22 PM |
Thanks for the honesty...ouch about the butt though...
it's not that you have an unattractive butt just that NO butt should be displayed quite that way on a dating site  | |
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| trirunner
Posted: 11/2/2008 8:27:41 PM | I get that part, but how does my profile look other than being a fvcked up seperated guy? Your input is valued
Thanks | |
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| C'Mere, I'll do ya'.
Posted: 11/2/2008 8:40:31 PM | Hey,Pandy! Pleeeeeez gimme an honest assessment. I get alot of views but no messages and no one chooses me for their fav's list. I'm getting more disappointed by the moment....THX!  | |
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| C'Mere, I'll do ya'.
Posted: 11/2/2008 8:45:49 PM | pleeeease do me..
obviously there's something horribly wrong with my profile.. how about i get a review rather than an ignored message? | |
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