xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 276 | |
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Posted: 2/11/2005 9:56:43 AM | Hi JacQio here is a something i just came up with....
I saw her standing there
sipping a glass of wine
at a glance our eyes met
we lost all sense of space or time
Through our eyes our souls
spoke to each other without
saying a spoken word
Two souls that knew at last
they found each other
our hearts beating rapidly the
the only thing to be heard
Her hair long and dark
she tossed back behind her
neck as i approached near
She smiled shyly and tried
to look away blushing
from ear to ear
Both overcome by this moment
we stumbled for words
happy though we reached this day
we stood there motionless
finally able to come up with words to say
We both looked at each other
and at the same time said
with our eyes gleeming
"Don't say a word
we've already talked many nights
while i was dreaming" | |
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Posted: 2/11/2005 11:36:16 AM | WOW!!! I love it! This one is definitely a breath taker...  | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 278 | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 280 | |
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Posted: 2/11/2005 1:28:34 PM | OOOOO this is exciting chucky...do I sense love in the air...my oh my the ladies on here are going to be sad...love your writings chucky! Keep it up! Awesome!  | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 282 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 12:09:04 AM | | thanks for your compliments Charming and i'm liking JacQiO a awful lot she is a real sweetheart we have been talking | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 284 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 11:25:53 AM | Tempers flaring
when will the pain stop
everywhere i turn another
dark corner seems to crop
Shattered feelings like
broken shards of glass
dig deeper into my skin
how much longing will
this tormoil last?
Pictures on the mantel
fade like the memories
that were in them
So many changing faces
so many feelings hurt
from all those years
way back when
So much tears shed
so much much bad
blood flowed ominous
and red
Yet i still
keep fighting like the
pictures on the mantel
weathered but intact
your face is still there
though my memories
begin to fade to black
Fade to Black | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 285 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 2:51:38 PM | Had to do the poem over again because i notice spelling errors..sorry the perfectionist in me
Fade To Black
Tempers flaring
when will the pain stop
everywhere i turn another
dark corner seems to crop
Shattered feelings like
broken shards of glass
dig deeper into my skin
how much longer will
this tormoil last?
Pictures on the mantel
fade like the memories
that were in them
So many changing faces
so many feelings hurt
from all those years
way back when
So much tears shed
so much much bad
blood flowed ominous
and red
Yet i still
keep fighting like the
pictures on the mantel
weathered but intact
your face is still there
though my memories
begin to fade to black | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 4:01:46 PM | Very intense analyzation babe; your words of expression are portentous lessons of what I've been through...and great reminder of what I wish to not feel ever again...and I know with
each new day and experience discovered, those painful memories WILL in fact...
fade to black. | |
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~Jim~
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Joined: 11/10/2004
Msg: 287 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 4:20:48 PM | ~ A Frail Old Angel ~
One night I had a dream, it left a tale to tell
I dreamt I saw an angel, poor thing he wasn't well
His body bruised and battered, his wings ripped and torn
I saw that he could barely walk, he looked too tired and worn
I walked up and I asked him, "how could this be?"
He turned and paused a bit, these words he said to me...
I am your guardian angel, a great task you can see
You have run amok of your life, look what you have done to me
These bruises are from shielding you, in times of dire ill
Those drugs you used so dangerously, I have for you the bill
My wings you say are ripped and torn, a noble badge I bear
So many times I've flown for you, from evils unaware
Each mark has its own story, of deadly evil destroyed
You've made me wish more times than once, that I was unemployed
If only you could make it, standing on your own
Please don't fret or worry, you are never alone
I am here to watch over you, until my powers fail
Please try to remember, I am getting old and frail
I could hardly believe what I had seen, let alone how much he cared
I wept on his broad shoulders, and left him in despair
When I looked at myself the next morning, and thought "why should I even try?"
Then distantly I thought I heard a frail old angel cry.
~ unknown | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 4:31:17 PM | | idocman: I think I've heard that frail old angel cry myself...really liked it!! | |
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~Jim~
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Joined: 11/10/2004
Msg: 289 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 4:39:00 PM | | Believe it or not, my "ex" sent it to me! We remain friends, (somehow!) and it was sent to me at a time when it really made sense to me. | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 5:01:34 PM | | That was nice of your ex...it is possible to remain friends, (somehow--in some shape or form! lol). I'm sure it will make sense to many as it has you and I thus far. | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 291 | |
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Posted: 2/12/2005 5:12:31 PM | | Idocman i liked the poem you put up very deep. And as always jackie your words touched me in a meaningful way | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 293 | |
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Posted: 2/13/2005 7:56:00 AM | I love it Jackie when you express your feelings and i also would like to touch you more in a meaningful way too | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 295 | |
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Posted: 2/13/2005 3:53:09 PM | | my eyes light up whenever i see you too baby another thing we have in common | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 297 | |
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Posted: 2/14/2005 10:07:36 AM | Valentine's Day
Waking up to another Valentine's day alone
you look out from your windswept curtains
reflecting on your past
longing for the days when your heart
was full and a love you thought would last
Valentine's day is like any other day now
tedious and void of anything meaningful
because your soul has disappeared
along with the love you known so many years
Is'nt it ironic that she left
you on Valentine's Day?
Another year you forgot to
show her she was special.. did
you expect her to stay?
So guys if you want to keep
your happy home, show
her how much you care on this
special day, or you might wind up
heartbroken and alone on
Valentine's Day
Happy Valentine's Day everybody | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 299 | |
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Posted: 2/14/2005 10:58:19 AM | thanks indigo i hope you know that the poem was improvished and not about anything that happened to me
Jacqio love you babe | |
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Posted: 2/17/2005 3:10:24 PM | | hey baby!! it's been awhile...got some new words for your girl? | |
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