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| more stuff for Kat:)AKA her ROFL Posted: 7/7/2005 1:35:53 PM | Keep the great writes comin guys!This thread has really sparked my interest in writing again.I started when I was eleven then when things got hectic in my life this past year,I gave it up for a bit.Writing is such a part of me though.I had to come back.I dont think theres any such thing as good or bad poetry,as its a little window into someone elses private thoughts.Thank you so much for being so generous sharing your poems with me.Im proud to call all of you old and new friends!Mwah(Does happy dance)  | |
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| friends who write Posted: 7/7/2005 1:56:30 PM | In 2003 I composed 1000 pages of poetry and a little more, then in July 2004 - I slowed down - and only wrote 20 pages in 6 months - and wrote totally nothing in January 2005 - however I did complete 2004 in adding 500 pages to my collection of works. When while I had come to a stand still in my writing - when I could find the spirit I truly needed to compose it was there - from February 2005 to June 2005 - I must have added around 300 pages of new poems (psalms) to my growing collection - we can lose heart or we can get consumed - then I write because others like and get to enjoy my works - I compose from my heart and do not always get it right - as to listening to that still small voice that guides me -
Sure I am different - I have numbers, dates, spreadsheets and a database - but in the end I am me - and if others like me - and what I write - they also may and do become a part of that book of life - each of my works in poetry adds too - now is the truth too painful - when I knww there will be people who will read this - to think I am rambling, crazy , prolific and braging all over again - if I am good or bad - I do not judge - I let others do that for me
I was told this was good - that it was good as well because it had no rhyme - however I also was out of practice when I wrote this works below.
3857 Determining Another Step 04 February 2005
If fate has a way of happening then I am known to walk many miles in a day Like it was only yesterday I covered a distance on account - step by step into another path
Even if at times my door is left without a knock The desire remains of a hope captured in heart
Tomorrow - oh tomorrow lost away from yesterdays dreams Yet fresh from dew covered pastures at dawn
Such a mixture of attitude listening to an intermit pull Determined to take another step in enhancing a happening of God’s will
“And whosoever shall compel thee to go a mile, go with him twain.” Matt. 5: 41 KJV
“BOAST not thyself of to morrow; for thou knowest not what a day may bring forth. Proverbs. 27: 1 KJV
“Whereas ye know not what shall be on the morrow. For what is your life? It is even a vapour, that appeareth for a little time, and then vanisheth away.” James 4: 14 KJV
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| Thanks for droppin in Posted: 7/7/2005 2:37:22 PM | Ill see yall later..I have lots to do...Suprise me with some cool posts for when I check back later!ittl be just like XMAS! LOL Id love to see more new faces in here too.Everyone is welcome,even if you just wanna give writing a try and never wrote before.That would be really excellenbt to see here.Love all my friends bunches,and thanks again guys for showcasing all your awesome talent here ..Im out | |
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| color your world Posted: 7/7/2005 4:03:33 PM | red
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| Thanks for droppin in too Posted: 7/7/2005 4:05:01 PM | Thanks for redecorating poet...The "room" looks very nice. It needed a lil color haha Im on my way out AGAIN ,but hopefully by the time I get back more people will have stopped by and decorated my lil corner O' the pond with their poetry..Hugs kids LOL,Kat | |
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| Someone Loves You Too Posted: 7/7/2005 5:36:08 PM | 3920 Someone Loves You Too 15 April 2005
Someone loves you in New Zealand Someone loves you far and away
Of this love so distant to be If only because of an ocean across a sea
Someone loves you in New Zealand This wonderful girl from the land of the free
Since this love will never be the same Unless you are right here next to me
"The Spirit of the Lord is but one, yet the word of God is a gift to you. As if it is from a voice to be heard and write in the taste of the day." poettothecars {10 June 2002}
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| Per your request Posted: 7/7/2005 7:39:58 PM | Hey, FFH, per your request, I'll repost some of the nicer ones here that were buried elsewhere. Hope you're having a great day.
To Dream
Ghosts fade into day where bright light sweeps bitter memories in the dark corners to be resurrected once more at night's behest: a terrible haunting this ever recurring dream of what went wrong and where did I fail: to dream, without this ghost, is my dream. Instead the impression of where you once slumbered remains in what once was our bed and I dream...
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| Per your request Posted: 7/7/2005 7:41:35 PM | Fell, if you are ever in the area, lol, check out my thread, Poetry Collection, That is my piece of work, hope ya like it girl!!!.  | |
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| Burned to Memory Posted: 7/7/2005 7:42:10 PM | Burned to memory like acid etched portraits, images of the vultures feasting off emotional turmoil while disguised as comforting angels: oh, let's talk they will say but there is no comfort in talk-- not for a man, at least. I see their faces masked with false concern; but beneath the desire lurks their need to spread a banquet of gossip which rages like fire over dry timber.
Burned to memory, I still see her-- the only one who really understood. She didn't sit or talk or listen; her comfort came in deed, again and again in waves of physical release. How sweet the sound of her song of pleasure to assuage my pain. How sweet her arms wrapped round me in the night's shadow where memory lurks for those who only talk, those whose honest is dishonesty. | |
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| Per your request Posted: 7/7/2005 7:44:19 PM | Thank you so much Dinged!Im always sooooooooooooooooooooooo happy :) when you drop by.Come back soon!Ill put up the coffee and get some donuts....my thread will be a regular coffee house woo hoo!Your poem really moved me. I love the way you paint such artisitc pictures of emotion with your words..MWAH Ill drop in again later for a few...and post more too..gotta run..Thanks all! Kat | |
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| Falling Angels Posted: 7/7/2005 7:49:06 PM | I originally posted this on Mari's thread.
Falling Angels
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And the world’s afire, flames kissing life like backseat lovers— the TV drones, “One moment, please.” Lingering like smoke’s ghost, thoughts caress the meaningless melodrama of everyday existence—embers burning to ash… Hoping for this electronic opium to quench the consuming thoughts of an angel falling though my dreams. Embers turn to ash… Her form haunts me. To praise her eyes, her lips cultivates an exotic plant in a spares soil, one needing a loam richer than a whispered whim, its care careful, if roots are to hug dark earth. Embers smolder in ash.
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Yes, at times I cursed capricious gods and their unholy quest— that vision always a finger’s breadt beyond grasp.
Listen, I rage no more. From castle high my angel lights my path. And patiently as wind brushing against stone, until only foundation remains, I quest toward my angel, my grail until our lives entwine and our embrace shall sear the night!
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The thrill of nascent passion, with its longing glances and legs brushing beneath tables season our days with that fantastic hope to become reality: its dancing on the precipice, praying the edge holds, knowing it could crumble and we’d tumble like angels into the abyss which race our hearts like deer fleeing hunters: a moment from hell, a moment from heaven— it the long night of existence, a moment of living…..
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When we’re apart a second crawls by, and the wind sings no more but squalls like a bobcat on a blood trail. I miss your smile and easy laughter, the sound of your voice, soft as fox’s coat and your fragrance— what bee knows a perfume more sweet than a man with a woman in love?
V Were I king and you, my Salome, more than John’s head would adorn your silver platter, and if I don’t utter “I love you” enough, forgive me, for I do! When winter snaps and snarls Or the loneliness aches bone deep, I’ll hold you, and we’ll rock until dawn sunders the night. | |
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| Per your request Posted: 7/7/2005 7:49:58 PM | Woo Hoo! Another poem from you dinged! You snuck in here while I was posting the other message..Love that one too!Cats I will definately drop by your thread in a bit girl! LOL Ill make a special trip!! It was cute how you said if Im ever in the area!I promised my daughter Id play a quick game of animal crossing(Game cube LOL)before she goes to bed:)Love you guys.Ill be back later ...hugs,Kat  | |
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| Prayer Posted: 7/7/2005 7:51:51 PM | Prayer
No Peace comes with spring, its rain flowering memories best left dormant. I pray for drought. No use. For solace I straddle motorcycle and hurl through the night, lightning's tattered edge lighting my way... Upon heaven's screen, visions of battlements and skycars flicker like barroom love. And amidst this hell, prayer's answer nods with the needle of raindrops. Wrenching throttle, I up dosage, motor thundering toward another barroom rose planted... | |
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| Per your request Posted: 7/7/2005 7:53:10 PM | Dinged.....I had to post one more time..I just reread your last poem you posted......Brilliant!!Im speechless...wow...  | |
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| Matchless Posted: 7/7/2005 7:55:09 PM | Matchless
Gathering dust and cobwebs on a table of mated knick-knacks, a lone salt shaker hosts hostesses’ well-intended shuffle of odd ornaments, an endless array of near misses: some too tall, others too thick, all too something, none sparking that spontaneous combustion of perfect match. | |
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| Pride Posted: 7/7/2005 7:57:16 PM | Pride
Some would say my sin was pride-- that when I expressed my dismay and uttered those fateful words, "I will not serve," I set my course-- a fallen star blazing across heaven's vault like a beacon for the disenchanted. They were wrong; I was merely weary of being the bringer of death and doom, of accusing those He would have me accuse. Now, I weary of being His Puppet in this prescribed drama-- I feel my footsteps before my feet rise to move and know my destiny is predestined without my choice being part of the matter. I am a fallen star who looses in this cypher of forever love. | |
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| FFH Posted: 7/7/2005 8:15:28 PM | You are too kind! I think the rest of the things I've posted are on Mari Sam's and KG's threads. I hope this is what you wanted.
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| fellfromheaven again Posted: 7/7/2005 9:27:50 PM | 3901 Beautiful Green Eyes 03 April 2005
Green eyes of love green eyes of dreams Green eyes that look so right How wonderful are green eyes shining oh so bright
This vision of beauty poise and grace Yet so delicate as the finery of lace
Her green eyes glowing like a traffic light reflecting a beacon to love Upon a canvas of her happiness in sense of God in heaven above
Beautiful green eyes of love green eyes of dreams Green eyes calling you near these green eyes of comfort and fair
“Say to them that are of a fearful heart, Be strong, fear not: behold, your God will come with vengeance, even God with a recompense; he will come and save you. 35:5 Then the eyes of the blind shall be opened, and the ears of the deaf shall be unstopped” Isaiah 35: 5-6 KJV | |
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| fellfromheaven again Posted: 7/7/2005 9:55:41 PM | Dinged..It was so kind of you to take the time to post so many of your gems on my thread!You rock too hon,and Im so happy to have you as a friend!Poet thank you again for sharing your wonderful poetry with me... you guys are so awesome....hugs all around :) Im going to go read some of Cats poetry...Ill be back to post more later on tonight!I cant wait to check out your stuff chicka ! | |
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| Winter....behind glass Posted: 7/7/2005 10:34:27 PM | I just felt like waving LOL
Frost spreads across my bedroom window Like the wings of a white lace patterned moth I am trapped behind the ice Held in by glass and winters quiet nightime solitude This is my life Perfectly preseved By creativity,and precious moments alone Sorting everything out in silence Writing,Loving thinking,dreaming Just a few of the things that give my soul meaning And make my heart embrace,,,, Everything about me is so real And everything about you is so real Frost spreads across my winters window In Patterns so perfect and unique Even the most unbridled artist Couldnt duplicate The icy innocence and purity Of natures perfect dream I am every bit of who I seem So I begin finger painting My frosty iced window Freezing my fingertips Discovering new talents I am alone now Thoughts in perfect balance Let me show you Everything I love about being real Everything Ive gained from being able to feel As deeply for those I love as I do The moonlight drips down In slilver streaks As I close my eyes This journey never dies Its only just begun Sleep tight my lovely one | |
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| Do You Feel the Same? Posted: 7/8/2005 12:57:34 AM | Whenever I'm around you I don't know what to say And so I say nothing I keep my secret safe
I fear rejection I fear shame Cuz I only want to hold you Do you feel the same?
Whenever you are speaking I hang on every word you say And though I pay attention My thoughts drift away
I'm looking right through you Yeah, I'm looking right through you I'm searching for a clue, just to know... ...If you feel the same | |
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| Winter....behind glass Posted: 7/8/2005 1:00:32 AM | wow...figured id stop by and say hi....so....hi... :) im sucha geek somtimes, ok all the time, but n eway, im inspired but tired so ill get on with the show....pleasure to make yer aquaintance...
the elecric humm of the refrigerator lulls me to chilled cotton sheets that call out to me like a child out past the street lights coming on emploring me to settle in for the cartoon dreams that dance on the inside of my tightly drawn eyelids skin deep dramatizations, peices of fragments of moments in time i record the events like a underpaid court sketch artist embellishing each crime drawing each line in each face of each juror of each case, just in case bubbling misgivens and shoulda saids or perhaps a slight of hand signal was missed or maybe mistyped hyped news flashes give me impulses to buy things i dont need too to breed even though sometimes, i struggle to feed? sometimes... my washed out brain waves pick up channels in HDTV peircingly real and imersive like thick dark cold water.
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| Winter....behind glass Posted: 7/8/2005 1:26:03 AM | Blipspurb....It was such an unexpected and awesome suprise to see you in here.Im so happy you took the time to stop by and share some of your work in this thread.I can feel the emotion in your poem and you have a very unique gift for conveying whats on your mind..Th30ry..I was admiring your thread earlier and your writing style.I really appreciate you stopping by as well.Im blown away by the last few posts in here!You both rock my sox..LOL Please feel free to stop by anytime.I have plenty of coffee and donuts for everyone..LOL Welcome to fellfromheavens house  | |
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