| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/4/2009 8:25:22 PM | oh oh oh, i'm going to regret that remark 
wow, another freak you go first, pleased to make your acquaintance :) take a pic and upload it to flickr, there's about a couple of dozen of us ;)
that seems like very good advice you go first - I don't really want to say 'hey I'm going for a masters eventually and I have some in the bank', but there must be a subtle way to say I'm doing ok and thinking carefully about my future, I'll have a muse on the language. I've been single for three years now apart from the odd dalliance, just want to come home to a house that isn't empty and live happily ever after - I don't seem to be very creative when I'm single
Regards
Lonely, a few extra pounds (smokes and drinks) | |
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| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/4/2009 9:26:28 PM |
I updated the thing, with a little more detail of my education etc - it seems to end a little abruptly, I'm trying to figure out how to round it off, let me know your opinions pps, I'm glad I came for a little critique :) | |
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| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/5/2009 10:35:22 AM | Looks a hundred times better than that first time I read it. There's probably a few more ways to make what you want/do sound more appealing, but I'm not in a nitpicky mood today. Much.
Nice improvement. | |
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| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/5/2009 10:50:46 AM | Get rid of all pics but the main one, when you act like a total goof in the pics, then are totally glum in the profile - the ladies stay away in droves (apparently). It's just too confusing. And the whole "make me laugh - please!" thing? Aargh.
You seem to be honest, but it's hard to take you seriously ("I'd like to run my own business someday - that runs itself").
In truth if this is who you are then your charms are just not transferable to online dating - perhaps. You have a sense of humor, try using it more positively, in person and on here. You'd prefer us to be beautiful, and we'd prefer you to be George Clooney - both are unrealistic attitudes online and in life.
Good luck! | |
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| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/7/2009 4:34:52 PM | | i don't think this is particularly fair lsbf. I think cultural dissimilarities play a part here. My dreams and aspirations are realistic. A company that runs itself. I just stay at home in my dressing gown catching bugs - people ask me questions, it works. | |
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| Just redone my profile and now i feel sick
Posted: 11/7/2009 4:42:07 PM | i've removed the beautiful bit, as it seems to get everyone's goat. Crikey, I don't know what's wrong with wanting a beautiful partner, even though I do look like a goat. | |
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