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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 7:56:05 AM | Oh Little Boy Black and Blue, Who was it that did this to you? Who raised a hand at innocence? Did they proclaim their eminence- At a child's expense? Is this your beloved mother's psalm, This stormy song beneath your calm? The one who nourished you from birth. Were you more trouble then you were worth? Oh was it her who did this to you, Little Boy Black and Blue? Was it your father, that loving soul? Did the alcohol cause him to lose control? Was his patience tried and taunted- By the boy he never wanted? Oh was it him that did this to you, Little Boy Black and Blue? Oh Little Boy Black and Blue, The autopsy confirms it was true. You were sodomized and strangled. You were beaten, broken, mangled. You must've screamed in agony, As bloodstained hands brought you more misery. Oh was it someone you never even knew, Little Boy Black and Blue? | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 7:58:13 AM | No, Why do I need anything published, I know my feelings and so do the readers. I write what's in my heart, I write what's in my soul. I don't need a wee book to know how I feel right love!
Thank you for your kind words though. | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 8:10:33 AM | | no not at all thats not what i meant i meant you could make lots and bring a lot of peoples attention to things they should realize are happening and do something about......and by the way now u hvae made me cry lol but it's all good it's a very touchy thing that last one wow...it was so powerful | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 8:51:33 AM | I am sorry Love for making you cry, my heart and my arms go to you in mind to hold what you have hidden so well. For you I will give you 1 more from my heart.
I see you standing there waiting for your love In the breeze you look so fair like the sun so high above In your eyes, too strong to weep to see nothing's arrived In your heart your tears did seep from emotion that you've thrived Of your pain met the covered sky as rain, began to fall from sleep There you gave your final sigh Then for you, nature did weep With your back to the clouds, you started your walk and followed your lonely road As your foot hit the ground, you started to talk to the person that never showed Every word you pressed to speak to you he did not reply Again of him your ears do seek no sound to hear, but a cry A cry that you could only hear, to you that is so near Can only be so far away, so far away as the sky | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 8:59:45 AM | The only thing I gain out of my poems is comfort. I write poems about what I feel and who I meet. Give me some time and I will write one for you and maybe about you. If you would be so generous as to letting me. Did you know that the only person that finds it powerful is you ,"The Reader". That is my only gratification. There is no book that I could write or papers I could authorize that would bring me the most joy as to find someone like yourself that would renew my spirit to write again.
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| For you SXY_Chic_20 Posted: 7/28/2005 9:49:30 AM | Was it the words that made me think about SXY_Chic_20 all night or was it the smile that she brought to my face when I saw her E- Mail message that seem to shine so bright.
Yes I feel so confused, How could it be? She stole my Heart away with the stroke of her computer keys. We chat, we talk its just not the same, there should be no reason I get so excited when I see her chat name. We are in a private room, designed for two, sometimes I think they designed one especially for me and you. We are chatting for hours when I realize, Oops, I'm on the computer, I was lost there for a while, but Her words they really make me smile.
Communications is the key to unlocking my heart, It's funny the computer has enable us to get thus far. Cyber space is strange and that is true, But guess what; It Scrolled My Heart a Road Directly to you
Sorry , but it was on short notice to myself ~lol~ | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/28/2005 1:07:59 PM | Thank you for your thoughts, Sometimes when I write it's at the weirdest times. My mom passed away about 2 years ago and while we are standing there listening to the thoughts from everyone I sat there and teared and wrote a poem about her. I visit her often to talk or just to read my poems to her.
This is the poem I wrote for her:
I look back on these years To see how far I've come and grown, I take a trip down memory lane, And what I see has shown ... That every step I've taken, You have been there by my side ... From infancy to adulthood, We've stood the test of time. You cradled me and nurtured me, Through all these many years; You held me and did comfort me, Through happiness and tears. You'd pick me up when I would fall, You'd dust me off and then, Encourage me to get back on That horse and ride again. Your constant care and loving, And your warm inviting heart, Has always been a treasure that I knew would n'er depart. If I could be "just half" the person You have been to me ... Then you have taught me well dear mom, For in my heart I see ... A woman whose most gentle soul, Embraces me each day ... A woman whom I dearly love, Much more than words can say. | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/29/2005 7:00:38 AM | this is about my niece
La Petite Ange
Ta innocence est pure Et je veux que tu rest comme ca Mais tu devois grandir Je ne peut pas arreter ca Tu est ma petite ange, Cem Je veux regarder et garder toi tous les jours Mais tu as une maman pour ca Je va etre la plus bonne tante De tout ta vie Mais ca c'est pour toi a decider Alors je veux dit que tu devois REster innocent pour maintenant | |
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| A thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/29/2005 7:25:28 AM | Your poem,"My Small Angel" was beautiful, Obviously I don't speak french but I went to a translation wensite in order to understand it. Wow great job luv.
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| thank you for the poems you wrote. Posted: 7/29/2005 7:33:17 AM | Desolation, Wide open space, Between the trees and me, Emptiness and me, Confusion and decisions, Feelings hard to define, And I say to myself, Just a little longer, Coldness seeps Its way in, I am falling deeper, Into what I fear most, As I reach out, There is nothing there, As possible there was something once, Only to be gone, And I say to myself, Just a little longer, The sun drops, The last inch of light falls, The squirrels more likely to be huddled up, But not me, Something I never possessed, And I say to myself, Just a little longer, Then the sun has gone, Darkness spreads its wings over me, I see nothing so no one sees me, Feeling of bitterness only, And I say to myself, Just a little longer, An Owl peers down, With question in her eyes, She doesn't have a hope, In helping me, As she doesn't see my pain, Spreads her wings, Passes me by, And I say to myself, Just a little longer, The soft earth, Seems the only thing holding me up, Even then I could slip, And wondering takes me, To why and how I got here, Without even knowing it, Yet no one notices, As they didn't see before, So I say to myself, Just a little longer, Shimmering in the darkness, I see two moons, Reflecting off a stream of thoughts, Ongoing forever more, Along a rocky road, Slowly giving in to finding a way out, I take the plunge under the river, Then the wind carries a whisper, Gently on a breeze, 'Just a little longer.' | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:33:20 AM | This forum is amazing...I love this poetry and I'm not much for poetry...wow !!! | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:35:21 AM | This forum is amazing...I love this poetry and I'm not much for poetry...wow !!! | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:37:56 AM | Only because you 2 are here though. (it;s why it is amazing)  | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:39:37 AM | good poem...I'm amazed.. | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:40:28 AM | well thankx !!! you have anymore ? | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:44:20 AM | A touch of skin soft and slippery, With the hint of sweat. We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets, As the wind flowed from the window above us. Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance, To abandon all of our uncertainties. You began your work on my lips, Probing gently as if drawing sex, From a deep well of longing and need. Then heated tongues met in the midst, Of hot and quickening breath. And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts. Then intoxicated with those spirits, Our clothes found resting place on the floor. Piece by piece, Until there were no hiding places, For the two glistening and wanting bodies. Hunger revealed in this hot moment. Then skin meshed with skin, As the floor became the stage. You moved atop of me easily, And lowered yourself gently. Kissing me as I was filled with you. As a gasp broke the kiss, Your hands stroked the stray strands, Away from my forehead, then became entangled. Our slow rhythm gave way, To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion, As I arched my body for your comfort, And you threw me into ecstasy, With the strength of your blows. You left me screaming and soaked, In oblivion again and again, As you growled my name from the back of your throat, And our bodies both demanded more, Each giving to the other, High on the fluids of foreign substance. I grasped, then released you, Grasped then released you, In effort to relieve you of your control. The taste of your skin between my lips, Was like no other. To hear your cry of mercy, When my teeth met your warm skin, Was more breathtaking than you knew. Yet I still released the control to you. As you wound your hands in my hair, And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut, You moved with one final and breaking blow, Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss, Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries. I welcomed the weight of you to crush me, As you collapsed on top of me, Still hot and burning, And I glowing like an amber, Casting a welcome light, Should you seek my gifts again
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 7:48:37 AM | wow that is really good, never thought of it that way... !!! sounds good | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 8:09:08 AM | | OMG!!!!!WOW!!!!!!that was amazing | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 8:22:37 AM | | VERY impressive thor! | |
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| wow !!! Posted: 7/29/2005 8:57:24 AM | Thank you all! I have a whole slew of them in my binder that I have written over the last 22 years. I just never thought that I would ever meet people that shared a passion for poetry as much as I. I hate to admit it but when I was young my grandfather used to make me read poetry and short stories to help my studdering. I don't studder today mind you, so I think it worked.
I enjoy my writtings because it's my only way that I can think of to get my feelings on paper. Maybe someday I will find someone that cherishes poetry as much as I do. | |
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