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 fun_time_jo
Joined: 1/16/2012
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Message 71 "my ability to write good poems that people enjoy reading". Do many others share your view on that ?

Your Little Blue Pill on your profile isn't poetry, it's simply a smutty limerick. W.H Auden it ain't !
 TheHappyChappie
Joined: 7/3/2009
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Posted: 7/6/2012 10:15:45 AM
A pansified boy from Khartoum
Took a lesbian up to his room
But they argued all night
As to who had the right
To do what
What with
And to whom.

Stunners, please feel free hammer my inbox.

(But not Khartoum boy stylee)
 SuzanneXanderCage
Joined: 1/10/2010
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Posted: 7/6/2012 10:17:40 AM
Wow that was a long reply thank you GP but i agree with Jo there is a difference between poetry and a ditty or limerick. Obviously your quite a romantic but you might be going out on a limb stating a nice poem makes your profile pic more attractive, i use to have a very funny profile and i got many comments saying how i had made their day but it didn't make me any more appealing than before, I think a lot of people on pof have had it rough and been treated badly and only the naive and vulnerable would be swayed by poems but hey i may be wrong
 fun_time_jo
Joined: 1/16/2012
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Posted: 7/6/2012 10:21:37 AM
^^^^^
That's really beautiful. Your words intoxicate me. Please be mine. x
 Graffiti_Poet
Joined: 1/2/2011
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Posted: 7/7/2012 3:16:58 AM
Graffiti, just out of idle interest , what's the average weight of these women, so captivated by the rhythmic word?


I have been asked some strange questions about my poetry in my time TheHappyChappie but that one is up there with the strangest of them.

fun_time_jo, apparently some people do enjoy my rhymes or at least they say they do but they might just be humouring me, who knows. Thank you for your critique of my work, all feedback is appreciated both positive and otherwise and will hopefully lead to me becoming a better writer. (NB. FYI, a Limerick has a fixed structure and rhyming pattern, 5 lines with an a,a,b,b,a rhyme scheme. A bit like the one TheHappyChappie did below your post but thanks all the same....GP)

teddiesue, I'm not so sure you have to be naive or vunerable to enjoy verse or like to smile at an amusing thing you read but my very verbose reply was more about the chemicals the brain produces and how to make or increase that happening in someone than it was about poetry itself. Still, thanks for you thoughts on my advice whether you think it helped others or not. Cheers........GP
 essexbob
Joined: 5/14/2008
Msg: 81
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Posted: 7/7/2012 5:02:09 AM
bait isnt big enough?
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