longte
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Posted: 12/25/2004 5:19:41 PM | Ok Im back and ready to play again
Merry Christmas everyone | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
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Posted: 12/25/2004 5:21:54 PM | Where Demons Fear to Tread
In the dark recesses of your mind, if you dig deeply you may find
The story I’m about to tell…… Of love and hate Of peace and hell
It was white silk that she wore…. when she came up to her door
White silk that gleamed of inner light .. A rose of beauty to my sight
She was a walking talking dream, straight from my mind as yet unseen
Until that night she opened wide.. her door, and let me slip inside
Her beauty was beyond compare White silk deep tan and golden hair
A body to make Venus blush And in my mind the first dark rush
She never knew how many days I had searched for perfect prey
Finding those who live alone Seeking love by telephone
And You You call me physcopath But really I’m much more than that
You’ll never understand the skill, required to give me one more thrill
The emptiness I feel inside ……….. Until I reach and take my bride
You’ll never know just how I feel….. when life for her becomes so real
The first quick glimpse of dark surprise The fear and knowing in her eyes
She cries She reaches out for life To find it captured by my knife
Her life and death belong to me ….. You’ll never know the ecstasy
And as I walked out through her door It was red silk that she now wore
Must go
I'm having someone for dinner
Sleep well | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 28 | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 1:00:39 AM | Shall we Dance.... Shall we Play or do you think it's time
To see what we can scrape out of the gutters in my mind
This has already been posted but I just found this thread again
I'll throw a few in here just to keep it alive
We can talk of roses .... and lovers now entwined
But I dont think we'll find them ... In that part of my mind
Dragons old and Knights so bold and Wizards we will find
Songs of Joy and Love of Life are also in my mind
Dancing men and virgin Queens and living by the shore
Battles won and battles lost and heroes by the score
We're starting to dig deeper now.. the rose has lost its smell
There's Lust and Self-delusion and other things as well
Here's Greed and Envy coming now.. emerging from the mud
And Vampire wings and other things that seem to thrive on Blood
Shall we Dance.. Shall we Play Or do you want to share
As from the Darkness way beyond there now emerges FEAR
Sleep Tight Children | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 29 | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 1:03:42 AM | Rainbow
Look inside a rainbow and tell me what you see
Colours light and colours bright – is that what you see
When I look inside a rainbow --- here is my answer true
I see the rainbow’s colours --- but not the way you do
When I see the violet ---- it’s like the faeries eyes
The first time that we saw them—down by the riverside
When I see the yellow it reminds of the gold
Buried by the leprechauns --- in those days of old
And when I see the pink I cannot take it in
For I feel the smell and texture of my lovers skin
And when I see the orange it reminds me of the night
We fought it hard together --- the bush fire burning bright
And what is it that I see when I see the blue?
I see a love that’s broken --- that once I thought was true
And when I see the red it reminds me of the rage
In her voice and on her face --- the day she went away
And when I see the green it reminds of the trees
My friends and my companions --- in those times of grief
So look into a storm at night --- and tell me what you see
Grey of cloud and lightning bright --- is that really all you see
Longte | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 1:08:36 AM | Very nice indeed longte, congrats. I really appreciate the extra insight 
Kim ¦¬] | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 31 | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 1:27:39 AM | Hi Kim
Im going to keep this thread alive and throw some bits in here
They will probably turn up in other threads as well if I think they suit it
I'm just deciding what my Favorite poem that I wrote is | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 32 | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 7:16:12 PM | I gave up on deciding my favourite
FLIGHT
Early Morning.... Beside a meandering stream
Through the early morning mist
You see something out of the corner of your eye
As I glanced into the summer sky
A silent glimmer caught my eye
Was it an eagle flying high
Or just a heron gliding by
The flash was gone....That burst of light
That first had brought it to my sight
So now I looked with all my might
A burst of purlpe... red and blue
Of luminescence.... pure chartreuse
Of gold and silver filled my view
An iridescent burst of wings
The glow that comes from ruby rings
The hush as when an angel sings
Twas these and many other tyhings
So now I know what I have seen
Now I know what fills my dreams
For the glimmer which had caught my eye
Was the first flight.... of a butterfly | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 33 | |
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Posted: 1/22/2005 4:36:28 PM | Just a touch of sensuality
Have to try to keep the romantics happy
WISHES
Why do you come to me in dreams
When you’re not here the silence screams
To hold you and to touch you
to kiss you and caress you
to look into your eyes so true
and tenderly make love with you
I want to hold you oh so tight
make love with you throughout the night
and show to you how you are worth
more than the treasures of the earth
I want to kiss you everywhere
your eyes--your lips--your cheeks--your hair
And when I kiss your other lips
and tease you with my fingertips
I want to see your body flush
with that pre-orgasmic rush
And on the nights you come with me
we’ll reach the heights of ecstasy
Enjoy | |
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Posted: 1/22/2005 4:51:44 PM | Enjoying it very much Longte. Passionate and erotic...I like.  | |
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longte
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Msg: 35 | |
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Posted: 1/23/2005 3:01:23 AM | Too Sad Too Common
Face is hidden by the night
Just the body is in sight
Tight black boots up to her knees
And though she's tense she looks at ease
The skirt is short and seems to flare
The blouse is tight as if to dare
Her straining breasts to reach the air
And now she glides out of the night
To bring her beauty to your sight
You see the cascade of her hair
Frame the face thats Oh so fair
With pouting lips beyond compare
With invitation in her smile
She says "Come stay with me a while"
Eyes dark and deep as liquid coal
She looks at you for you're her goal
She's just here to play her role
"See My breasts, they're here for you
See my legs? Have them too
Take my lips and take my grin
There's only one thing you cant win
My mind is Lady Heroins" | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 36 | |
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Posted: 1/24/2005 4:21:07 AM | Where will we go now
Where will will we go
Maybe enough social conscience for a while
It thought the last poem may have got some comments??????????????? | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 37 | |
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Posted: 1/24/2005 4:30:42 AM | Ive posted this somewhere else here as well
But I enjoy it
TRUE BEAUTY
I stood beside a jewellers stall
And at the back --- beside the wall
there was rare beauty to behold
a rose of chrystal -- silver --- gold
A rose of beauty standing there
magnificent --- beyond compare
A showpiece to the jewellers skill
remember it? ---- I always will
Then i thought of another rose
thought of the garden where it grows
and knew as memories flashed on by
its true beauty is -- that it can die
And bring to these old eyes a tear
when it blooms again another year | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 38 | |
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Posted: 1/24/2005 4:57:25 AM | Something for the romantics out there
I could give cut flowers to you
If thats what youd like me to do
No matter how very hard you try
One day cut flowers must wilt and die
So I would really rather give
You blooms which know how to live
So take this bud.. now nurture it
And just like our relationship
One day we'll see what comes of it | |
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Posted: 1/24/2005 8:30:01 AM | Hello!
I love reading your writing :), Your words are BEAUTIFUL 
Amy | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 40 | |
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Posted: 1/24/2005 9:07:49 AM | hi Amy
Glad you have joined us
I have read your work and it is great
It comes from your heart
It tells what YOU want it to
Thats all we ever try to do
there are many Wonderful poets in here
There is a forum here called "dead rhymers"
Look at it if you want any good advice
longte | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 41 | |
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Posted: 1/25/2005 8:22:37 AM | Theres another contest here they say
A chance for us to go and play
A change for us all to find
The darkest alleys in our minds
A chance to hear the music play
As the ship just fades away | |
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Posted: 1/25/2005 10:54:53 AM | | It may just be me but your words do draw me into the tale. The visual is definitely there. It's a welcome escape from monotony. Carry on with the entrancement. | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 43 | |
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Posted: 1/26/2005 9:14:41 PM | Thanks for the kind words
I wrote this for a Very Very special young lady
In Dreams
In my dreams you come to me
and say ‘Fulfil our destiny
and speak to me of love and life
and help me come to realise
that I am perfect in your eyes’
In dreams I watch your eyes so bright
and filled with love of life so right
And all the pain has gone away
and everything you do and say
shows happiness now rules your day
In dreams I watch you passing by
and tears start rolling from my eyes
But do not worry, hold no fears
and as the days turn into years
realise that they are happy tears
In dreams I see you live your life
free from nightmares pain and strife
into your dreams I cannot see
or tell if there’s a place for me
So go----fulfil your destiny
In dreams by now you’ve realised
that you are perfect in my eyes
that since the nightmares gone away
you can smile by night and day
Since you’re free- -perhaps you’ll stay | |
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Posted: 1/26/2005 9:27:33 PM | One word: WOW.
That's another amazing poem, Longte. But this one has a different quality to it. . . . . . it's hard to explain it properly, but it "sticks". Do you know what I mean? It has something to do with the emotional power and the crafted language, as if a beautifully intricate piece of pottery was being molded on an urn.
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 45 | |
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Posted: 1/27/2005 2:47:19 AM | Thanks PK
Yes it flows nicely
Wrote it quickly and never changed a line
Sometimes that just happens | |
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Posted: 1/27/2005 6:11:59 PM | | Longte...gave me a huge *sigh* a good one. | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 47 | |
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Posted: 1/28/2005 3:05:44 AM | A Very Serious Look at CHIVALRY
Where have the tales of chivalry gone to from these pages?
The tales of Knights and Maidens fair and Magic through the ages
It seems the Knights are resting now or maybe gone away
The field is now the Dragons.... If we want to play
Maybe we will play the game and speak of something new
We will speak of chivalry from the Dragons point of view
We Dragons are a fearsome lot... or so the stories say
Awesome teeth wicked claws and breathing fire all day
If that was all there was to us then surely you would find
That Dragons would no longer.. come easy to your mind
When Merlin needed wisdon he went into his cave
He went to visit Dragons... not to Knights so brave
And look how many Virgins came knocking at my door
Just hoping for a Knight to come.. so they could see some sport
The Knights would don their armour and clamber on their steeds
Then wander through the countryside bragging of their deeds
Think what sort of Hero a Knight could really be
300 pounds of armour soon brought them to their knees
Yes they lived the purest lives... It could be no other way
To try and get their armour off took them half the day
And if a "mighty armoured Knight" ..more through luck than skill
Slew a "fearsome Dragon" he'd want to show his skill
He would cut the head of and parade it through the town
But think of when the battle was the other way around
and the "mighty Knight of chivalry" lies roasted on the ground
What then does the Dragon do with the morsel he has found?
We will try to look at this from a modern point of view
You have no can-opener and a tin of Irish Stew
I REALLY enjoyed writing this
Commenters will be gratefully incinerated | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 48 | |
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Posted: 1/29/2005 11:10:18 PM | PEACE
On a cold dark winters night
When everything is calm and quiet
but chaos comes into your dreams
and in your mind the silence screams
Then use your thoughts to reach for me
As calmness comes then you will see
that even though I’m far away
my thoughts are with you night and day
I’ll be there to sooth your fears
wipe from your eyes the useless tears
Just use your mind to take from me
a night of pure serenity
Sleep well | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 49 | |
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Posted: 1/30/2005 1:41:53 AM | Will you walk with me in Sunshine?
Will you walk with me in Rain?
Will you look into my eyes?
Cause there you see my pain
Will you hold my hand in Summer
During a lightning storm?
Will you hold me as the wind howls?
To keep me safe and warm
Will you hold me when my cheeks
Are glistening with tears?
Will you hold me close at midnight?
To help allay my fears
Now I see you turn away
There's some things you wont do
But in your heart you know for sure
That I'd do them for you
Yucky
It didnt start out to be a sad one | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 50 | |
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Posted: 1/30/2005 3:07:00 PM | Thanks Dragon
I'll probably come back to it one day but not just yet
Did you figure out where my cave is?
Just bought up there
Im in China so much I thought I may as well have a base there
Never realised you were just a short swim away
This will be the first spring festival Ive missed for ages
But too much happening in Aus | |
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