| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/17/2005 7:25:05 AM | Evil angel...you certainly have a way of evoking strong emotions.Your poem actually reminds me a bit of a ministry song I havent listened to in ages...you have a way with words bernard...how can I NOT love you and your writes You just rock my world buddy hehe...Today were celebrating this thread making it to 300 posts:)Thanks for making that possible kids Have a great day,kat   | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/17/2005 8:11:43 AM | You came smilin' gently,
Shyly movin',
Easy as a dreamer,
Into my world;
And before I realized the danger,
I found myself,
Starin' into your eyes;
And somewhere in their colors,
I saw promises of things,
I'd never seen
Before
And it's all over,
I've got to have you,
Holdin' onto talkin'
sayin' nothin,
Knowing with a keystroke, I could lose you;
Then I just remember how you tremble at the touch of my hand;
Knowing when you came to me,
That no one else would ever feel the same,
In my arms:
And It's all over, I got to have you..... | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/17/2005 11:47:22 AM | Thanks for sharing this with us it's awesome...hope to be able to read more from you..take care and happy thursday
Lori | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/17/2005 3:27:43 PM | Your eyes are brown
They are not blue like the ocean
or green like emeralds that shine
Nor are they red from lack of sleep
or from drinking too much wine
Brown ... can't think of many words for use
Brown? ... like dirt?
Wouldn't work
and would surely lead to abuse!
So my ode to your eyes is not a success
But they are beautiful nonetheless | |
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Posted: 11/17/2005 8:53:18 PM | | Heya OnLoch.....I really enjoyed your very unique and humour tinged write...very cool Roselover..thanks for stopping by an encouraging your fellow poets.Id love to see more of your work as well girlfriend yououghttalookhere....That was a really awesome write.Thanks so much for sharing and I hope youll come back and visit soon:)If yall are ever interested in seeing any of my stuff(you may know this already lol but maybe not)I post most of my poems in my other thread "Everyone else is doing it I want a thread too LOL"by fellfromheaven which is my old alias on POF...I decided to keep that as my home base for my poems, started this thread for people who want to try their hand at poetry.Anyway,thanks for sharing all your work with me and making this thread such a success.I appreciate each and every one of you((hugs )) all around,Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/18/2005 9:36:09 AM | Wise men say,
No one said life was easy,
No one said life was hard,
May we be strong, and be our own gods and live without doubt or guilt.
May we not seek guidance from others but from ourselves in which the true path lies.
May we not deceive ourselves or others,
may you realize, that there is no time to waste, may we not be bent on greed or desire that leads to barbaric hatred, that conflict upon suffering on yourself, and on others, and we embrace virtuous states of mind, and help on to others, that you care about so they can be helped and help on to others, so we so nor slip on these pits with a deep downfall.
This is our world, and it to will not last so don’t live into the past, all situations will render useless no matter.
All things must pass, all of life’s dreams will not last. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/18/2005 9:37:01 AM | I want to travel,
And see the world unravel.
My plans to head for the heat, and dodge the winter sleet.
I want to travel, in what I’ve only known, and heard in books,
And have a look for myself.
Possibly with no one else.
I don’t want to put my dream back on the shelf. | |
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Posted: 11/19/2005 10:10:59 PM | There is so much wisdom and insightfullness in your writes...espescially for someone so young.Im very impressed and enjoyed reading your poems very much.I hope youll post again soon...Thanks for sharing and have a good night yall,Kat  | |
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Posted: 11/19/2005 11:49:34 PM | in my dreams i stop and stare
your beautiful face is everywhere
i reach out my arms to feel
your face ,your soul to see if youre real
but my hands go through some sort of mist
causing my mind and soul to twist
seiing that you are so near
calling you but you cannot hear
i wake up and youre not there
without your touch i cannot bare
for you fill my heart with so much love
when youre the one im thinking of | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/20/2005 12:39:51 AM | i came on here to see
if someone could awaken me
and through the darkness ,light
i was given an insight
to find im not alone
people here have shown
that love is a right for all
now i don't feel so small
although to some i'm old
nice messages unfold
my confidence renewed
to pof i will be glued .
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Posted: 11/20/2005 3:02:17 AM | i would just like to know if the poems get censored.. probs not because there are loads..poets on here i think you are all fantastic    | |
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Posted: 11/20/2005 8:00:48 AM | heres a nice message for you
I hope youll drop by sometime
And add another poem or two
Welcome to my lil corner O the forums supadiva:)I love the SN...Thats great I agree with you that there are sooooooooooooo many talented writers in the poetry forums When I first started my other poetry thread,I was blown away by the talent here...........ma-che-fai-tu Hi:)Yay!Im so glad to see you found your way to one of my poetry threads "But my hands go through some sort of mist/causing my mind and soul to twist"..I was blown away by that line..You rock!I would love it if you would pop into my "everyone else is doin it..."fellfromheaven thread one day and maybe post one or two of your writes there:)......Keep up the awesome writes...Apparantly supadiva was referring to people like you:)when she mentioned all the talented people here. Have a great day yall and hugs all around,Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/20/2005 12:04:59 PM | She smiled at me, and I thought to say
Hi there darling, are you going my way?
Instead I just smiled, and sat next to her
Trying to speak, but my mind was a blur
I wanted to see, to look in her eyes
I paused and delayed, and to my surprise
She turned to me, she offered her hand
We made aquaintance, and my eyes she scanned
So gentle and kind, incredibly blue
Brilliant her shine, Aurorally too
We gazed for a moment, eternal it seemed
Alluring each other, together we teamed
It all came at once, I knew what to say
We sat there for hours, what a wonderful day!
We did meet again, same time, same place
The sound of her voice, she spoke with such grace
Amorously speaking, we've fallen quite fast
For love at first sight, Is a love unsurpassed. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/20/2005 5:27:45 PM | | Yet another new talented writer in the forums...I really really like your writing style alot..Great write!Feel free to post in either of my threads anytime:)have an awesome night everyone,Kat | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 1:22:19 AM | 4557
I Want to Love
21 November 2005
I want to love you
I want to love you so much
I want to hold you
and next to me clutch
Your beauty
your child inside
This mother of caring
the Lioness of your pride
I want to love you
and the truth is I do
I love you in my heart
because my love for you is true
You are heaven
you are earth
Because to love you
comes in every thing
to treasure in value and worth
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 2:19:38 PM | | ^^^Poet you are a true wordsmith..Your poetry rocks:)love ya,Kat | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 4:07:50 PM | kat thanks for your kind words ..its lovely that you commented on my try at poetry..compared to some i have read on here i have a long way to go lol.
i love poetry, the inner feelings expressed this way is simply music. jean .all the best | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 4:32:26 PM | | Aww :)Youre welcome Jean Hope to see more of your work here in the forums..Have an awesome night,Kat | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 4:47:02 PM | I've never tryed poetry publicly, but i was told i write like one :/
When I look into your eyes
I fall into your darkness,
With the pain of many
and the skys of anguish
I begin my assent
to the depths of your soul
I see the true you
your lies and your deception
To think that im falling
over your misconception
I am not of average
or original by far,
But seeing inside you
is a revalation untold
My love for you grows
with each passing momment,
a momment so rare,
that i wish i could hold it
When i look in your eyes
I see kindness and caring
I'm lifted from sorrow,
and unveiled true love
there is someone there
who i admire and cherish
Your my only true love
and for that, I am yours
I'll Hold you in my darkness,
Till the early morning hours.
haha omg corny anyways was a shot :P | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 8:33:44 PM | ^^^LeoWiebe
your poem was as good as anyone else's - if not better then most
so you have a talent and that is more than I would say in relation to several here | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 8:39:36 PM | Passions hidden within your soul
Fight against the rising tides
Of emotions fighting to be free
Walls of protection tower inside
The ghosts of the past
Forming a barrier you cannot see
To love you is to accept you
But only you can fight the demons
That hold you far from reach
Let me in and I will shelter you
For I long to help you be free
To fight along your side
And be your strength when you're weak
Let me in so we can fuel the fire
Of passion that has eluded us
And free our souls
So the demons will win no more. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 9:26:18 PM | | I liked your write evilenchantress:)thanks for sharing it here .come back anytime..have an awesome night kids,kat | |
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Posted: 11/21/2005 11:30:42 PM | I AGREE KAT
AWSOME
EVILENCHANTRESS
JUST AWSOME.....
LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER
MUSEconnieHUES
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