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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:50:18 AM | ~A true Lie~
No special rhythm, no special rhyme
lifes a game, so decieving
depression never leaving
a bling eye seeing.
Live to die, die to live?
tears of sorrow
my heart is hollow
theres no tomorrow.
My mind is blurred, I don't know why
just let me unwind
lost in my mind
my love is blind.
No reason for worry, nor pain, or fury.
Gold plated confusion
a silver illusion
copper fusion.
A lost soul found a dry tear falling. | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:50:49 AM | | all of them but the first one i just love | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:53:32 AM | Suicide Bliss
He’s gone…
Her tears are never ending,
She takes a deadly drink,
She is lost in confusion,
Couldn’t live a life of loneliness.
“I will not stay here and wait, I will stand at heavens gate.”
The darkness creeps up,
Her mind weakens,
Her vision is blurred.
“I will not stare into the eyes of the Devil, I will not let him take my soul.”
Tears of regret fall down her face
But they came too late,
Her blood is running cold.
“I will not hold my head down low and cry, I will hold it high to the sky.”
Her body loses all strength,
She collapse to the floor,
Everything in her sight is slowly
Turning to night.
“I know my end is near, But I will breathe in calmly,
Every last living breath, as into the night, my mind goes somberly.
Her body takes its last breath,
Her heart stops it’s beat. | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:56:04 AM | The dawn of morning’s daylight,
Beauty in it’s ecstasy.
A sunrise lovelier than pride,
With fire in it’s heart.
Time dangerously going by,
Like a King’s mastery in rein.
A billion colors gliding in the wind,
The air carrying their shine.
The Sun sets. | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:56:22 AM | | @untouchable. you seem to have a way with word manipulation yourself,nice:) | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 7:57:20 AM | Devilry :P
He whispers in my ear
While sitting upon my shoulder
The truth of deception
While deviously deceiving me
Through the night
He lurks my mind
Laughing loudly
Lingering around
Circling frustration
From delusional dreams
A burst of madness
Jumps into my veins
He is a breeder of fire
An army of leaders
Insatiable without a cure
He is my soul
Damnation is near
Run away, run away, come here. | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 8:03:50 AM | | to: skinyknight~ I sent one saying thanks already but im not sure if it went through so thanks again from me to you.. ;) | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 8:47:35 AM | just remember different words touch different hearts - to those of this forum thank you for sharing
but at time good critique can be only good praise and not necessary reflect upon good poetry
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The Answer Asked
05 December 2005
To find peace
and know you were the answer
To understand at last
the welcome mat was at your door
This poet neither discarded or unwanted
that was never an outcome to doubt
Where wisdom was worth of her hand
separated by separation to link
Not in denial of another day break
where she was standing near the shore
A lake of division no longer deserted
because inside there was a place to find
Her passion of unique destination
not to be confused with lack of desire
Peace at last to ponder in mystique lost
and know you were the answer asked
“Mercy unto you, and peace, and love, be multiplied.”
Jude 1: 2 KJV
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares
The truth is write for yourself and don't gave a damn about anyone else
or care for another like crazy - and express that in ways of being selfish
because you as the 'poet' are the master of your own words
poetwhocares (aka me)
September 02, 2005
New Zealand poet and master of self - ROFL
I do not write poems - I play with words - write bad grammar and destroy the English
language - and do not care about rules of what a poem is meant or not meant to be - you
get out of one of my words - not the meaning - but the feeling of reading it - start at the
top - read to the bottom and then ponder over the first thought that comes into you mind -
do not try the think what I was thinking about - relate to what you are made to think about
as a result - and how you feel inside - happy, sad, confused - upset -
just take it as it comes
September 17, 2005 | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 9:07:29 AM | No one asked for any opinions, we just shared them for the sake. If you have something bad to say... it isn't worth the writing!!  | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 9:17:24 AM | | just keep sharing - you're all do ok - this is a thread of cool stuff and let it remain that way | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 9:29:04 AM | when I wanna be, I am
Posted: 12/5/2005 11 35 AM
just remember different words touch different hearts - to those of this forum thank you for sharing
but at time good critique can be only good praise and not necessary reflect upon good poetry
i was merely agreeing with poet in my own words, nothing mean was said.do the quote above and what i said not say the same thing? but In different words | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 9:35:21 AM | on with the show and lets share and go go go
all the best and keep this thread flowing
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Words of a Poet
05 December 2005
The days are early
the nights are sweet
When without you
there was a void to full
Where was kindness
does that remain true
Or do I look to her eyes
and say “I love you”
When I do not know what love is
and some things are impossible to dream
My Ontarian heart was but cold
to that of seasons current to feel
My world has no snow
except high upon mountain peaks
My love has but one reason
only I do not know how to love you back
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 9:48:08 AM | Great stuff posted here....I am enjoying the read!
Monster
Instead of blood, poison pulses through his veins
Callous, uncaring monster
Venemous
Toxic
Vile
Knowledge of this spawns an evil smile
Wild
Wanton
Wicked
Wreking havoc wherever he goes
Taking pleasure from other people's woe's
Chaos
Frenetic
A jumbled mess
Just from looking, who would guess
The devil incarnate, disguised as a lover
What a terrible shock when he blew his cover
Waging a war with your sanity at stake
He spews some more hatred, how much can you take
In a single moment, in the blink of an eye
Your whole life changed - he had to die! | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 10:14:48 AM | The Simple Things
I miss all the simple little things
the simple joys and pleasures that life brings
the phone calls at noon to just say hi
the quiet moments together to pass the time by
sitting close under the night sky
holding each other....hmm, oh my
I miss the times when we just walked
all the nights that we stayed up late and talked
I miss the times we disagree
these times that make us free
I miss tickle fights and makin fun
these things told me that we were one
rainy days, sitting on the deck
sandcastles and puzzles...somthing to wreck
I miss the drives to who knows where
spending time together without a care
I miss waking up and kissing you
watching you do the things you do
stealing the blankets back too
coming to me when you are blue
I miss the touch of your hand upon my face
sharing our home, our life, our space
to share a life there must be two
now these things are very few
I miss these things that made me see
that man and woman where meant to be
I will find the one for me
and she will also see
that simple things will set us free | |
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Msg: 516 | |
| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/5/2005 10:31:45 AM | Untouchable and knight you two guys are awesome..keep up the good work
The moon was full
and the stars were out
sparkling and bright
As we stood on the mountain
looking at what we accomplished
realising there was no
need for fear or fright
We climbed that mountain
from the valley below
The treacherous rocks
falling beneath our feet
still we keep climbing
not willing to give
into the temptation
of defeat
So has our love been
its many pitfalls and
rocky terrain
still we kept climbing
moved by the notion
of what was ahead
at the end of our
journey only the heavens
and bright stars would remain
Where do we go from here
the answer we both know
we conquered a mountain
by reaching it's peak
it's time to grab the clouds
and soar together in matrimony | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 1:35:15 PM | foil in my teeth makes me shiver
as does alcohol in my liver
or flies upon my meal
but one thing that makes me laugh
is watching dogs eat toffee | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?Good hehe Hola Kids:)
Posted: 12/5/2005 1:47:19 PM |  Hi yall!its so great to see everyone again I just wanted to say before I get started here...all are welcome,but just as a little friendly reminder....everyone share and please play nice in my sandbox hehe...ok..(starting from the previous page,,TY1973...awwww Thanks It wasnt my write but your own actions that brought your heart that sense of accomplishment.Im glad my poem touched you as yours did me as well.The one on the previous page reminded me of the incredible bond and love between parent and child(brb I havta go kiss my daughter) I also really enjoyed reading "the simple things:)Supadiva..Thanks for your kind words.I love the fact as writers we can take our pain and turn it into something that perhaps will help or touch another person.Your poems rock!Poetwhocares...Thank you for sharing your uniqe writes:)I really appreciate you taking time out to drop in Shinyknight..Wow! I very much enjoyed all of your work espescially the last two.I have a feeling weve had a few similar life experiences along the way.Actually Im sure we all have and thats what brought us all here together as writers in the first place:0 Anyway,welcome to this forum Youre welcome kblgal...I love your writes and thanks for dropping in.I hope you get all your homework done,and we all arent distracting you from it TC73...I agreee..alot of the poms here are amazing...including yours Welcome to this forum and thanks for your kind words to everyone xchuck...speaking of great poems..I can tell you have such an awesome heartand have had some incredible life experiences the way writing about love flows so naturally for you..Im so glad you post your poems here Untouchable69..Welcome to my lil corner o the poetry forums I really enjoyed the poem you wrote for your mom and the imagery in the second to last poem you posted here:)Its great having you here Mean Jeanne...Very cool and unique write:)Od love to see more from you anytime you feel like sharing..Bernard:)YAY! Im so happy to see you here again!you crack me up,and I always enjoy reading your poems((hugs))That goes for all of you!Ok before I get carpel tunnell ,Im going to go....Have an awesome day,and thanks so much for droppin in kids, ,Kat | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 1:51:29 PM | If anyone checks my above post for typos.....well...thats just mean..LOL Kat
***HEY ***** Now that I have your attention...hehe I also wanted to mention very quickly incase anyone is interested CROSSFADE is hosting a poetry contest...I think the deadline for it is tonight(Monday) if Im not mistaken and the thread is called"weekends shorttest...you have three days" Youll be able to find the thread on page one or two.There are a few topics to choose from that can be found in the thread.Anyway,just thought Id give the contest a little plug hehe...I hate seeing people get left out because they didnt know about a contest,so now ya know and hurry up...LOL have fun with that yall...c yas later and good luck! | |
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| Above the screams(Kind of an of an unusual write for me)
Posted: 12/5/2005 2:28:31 PM | Aliskat, I absolutely loved "Above the screams"... almost made me cry.
Isn't it great when you create something that is far from your norm? When it just flows and becomes this completely new invention? Such a rush! : )
Eh, yeah, it is a bit distracting from school, this forum has definitely become addicting... I wish I had time to read everyone's work! Have a nice night : ) | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 2:30:32 PM | | Poetwhocares, I liked how your words of wisdom concerning poetry (from 9/2/05 and 9/17/05). The former is especially uplifting. | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 2:35:29 PM | The profound poet
Poetry is the ability
To provoke feelings
Like a drug or potion
It brings emotions
Good, bad, or ugly
You will see what your minds eye wants to see
From the ability or emotion
of the poet | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 2:37:52 PM | xchuck, shinyknight, and untouchable, love the poetry
shinyknight, I especially liked the poem in which you had the double-spacing (for the content, not for the spacing, necessarily, just did not know how else to differentiate it from the other poems) :) | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 2:54:49 PM | kblgal - thank you for your kind words - for even my own book has a page 1
with this below being page 776 for 2005 - I share and care - and that is but me being me
page 4631
A Hand from A Far
06 December 2005
How untouchable was she
in her place of Langley
Where opinions were
what no one asked
And to share was all she knew
of a dedication in heart all to British Columbia
Her Canadian home of this universe she grew
North of Washington in the USA
and not far from White Rock
On this path from
Vancouver to Chilliwack
Both there and back
A warm smile - a pretty face
Where age was to grace
This untouchable girl
who had reached out
For was she really untouchable
for that remained in doubt
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares
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Msg: 525 | |
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Posted: 12/5/2005 3:16:18 PM | The Dawning of a New Day
Did you ever see the sun rise
in the morning over the mountaintops?
a sight to behold, siganaling a new day
a chance to begin again and start off
fresh, The storms of yesterday only a
forgotten memory left in the cold
Did you ever see the flowers
bloom in the spring?
sewn by the seeds of yesterdays
frost implanted in the ground
rising up again to spring beauty
where yesterday there was
darkness and decay
Did you ever see the ocean in the morning
waves calmly splashing to shore?
soothing the soul with peace and tranquilness
where yesterday it's fierce waves
and powerful winds, made you cower
in fearfullness
Did you ever have a love that made you
whole and complete?, where everyday was
a new day, a love like this will last for an eternity
yesterday's sorrow will perish in defeat | |
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