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 Kingsransom

Joined: 12/18/2005
Msg: 676
Here's another one from my Katalist
Posted: 12/18/2005 3:01:23 PM
It’s not about dying
It’s about being alive,
It’s not about resistance to pain,
It’s about the inability to cry,
It’s about bringing yourself,
Back from by the edge,
It’s about balancing yourself,
So you don’t fall from the ledge,
It’s not about becoming someone else,
It’s about hanging on to your image,
It’s not about being brave,
It’s about hiding your lack of courage,
It’s not about dragging others down,
It’s about standing alone,
It’s not about fitting in with others,
It’s about being on your own,
It’s not about the wounds,
It’s more about the scars,
It’s not about the knives,
The razors and glass shards,
It’s not about being open,
It’s about keeping deadly secrets,
It’s not really about the bruises,
The burns, the scratches and cuts,
I'm back, i missed the forums:)

It’s about feeling again,
Knowing you’re not a machine,
It’s about purging the body,
And no longer feeling unclean,
It’s about seeing the stars through a ceiling,
About believing that things can turn around,
It’s about feeling hopeless and miserable,
Feeling lost and never being found,
It’s about being inside a fantasy,
That you created in your mind,
It’s about hearing all the hidden things,
And seeing through the blind,
It’s about controlling all your actions,
Proving what you can do,
It’s about letting yourself go sometimes,
When no one will worry about you,
It’s not about dying,
It’s about being able to feel,
It’s about being fake,
And pretending that you’re real.
 wollybully1234

Joined: 12/2/2005
Msg: 677
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So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/18/2005 3:20:15 PM
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When this Poem is read, you must place yourself into the poem as though it were to be you who wrote it, thought it and felt it, place yourself in it fully and you will get the full feeling it gives you within. READY?.......take a deep breath and have thoughts of nothing else, but being One in this poem.
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DARK VS LIGHT
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A deep saddened darkness creeps into thy soul, it comes and it goes like it were to be there in the lurking once more. It takes over any brightness that may try to show...

I "ASK” this Darkness, why it claims Ones soul, for I whisper ((((Ohhhhhh Darkness that is with me at this time, is there not others you wish to reside in?))))

(OHHH "says" the Darkness; you are such fun to see withering inside, for if the light were always with you as you claim, it would not be sooo easy to roam where you reside...)

I then whisper, claim me not, for you and the brightness might as well become one, for is it not that you two seem to be hand in hand most times.

So take over I call, for you shall no longer be the lurking shadow, that wishes to take hold of this Ones hand... don't need to lurk, for I will offer it to you, there is no use in pretending you are no longer there...

*CROOKED GRIN* The Darkness gives me and in return, the Darkness reply's...

Then so it shall be, BUT always remember you offered yourself willingly to me!
 supadiva

Joined: 9/26/2005
Msg: 678
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Posted: 12/19/2005 12:02:39 AM
very poignant whisperingrayne...i know the feeling too well..diva...
 socksock

Joined: 11/19/2005
Msg: 679
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/19/2005 5:58:31 AM
Please remember, there are two things you must never rhyme in a poem:
1. Car and far. (I got in my car and drove really far)
2. Eyes and realize. (Open your eyes and realize.)

These are very tired cliches. Use them only to induce eye-rolling.
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 680
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/19/2005 9:05:00 AM
4730
Realize Your Being

20 December 2005


Open your eyes
and realize you are blind
Take that essence of spirit
and in words bind

Understand your tomorrow
and never in holden eyes see
Because your passions
need to flow free

Run that race
and travel far
Do it by roads of wisdom
never take it by car

Contriving the art of love
open your heart to breath unknown
Then let the world untangle
all you have learnt of a life grown


". . . for their eyes were holden"
Luke 24: 16 KJV

© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)


a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 681
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So ya wanna be a poet? YAY! Good:)
Posted: 12/19/2005 10:17:48 AM
Hiya everyone:)I missed ya....Thanks poet for keeping an eye on things while I was busy this weekend.I had a chance to read most of the new writes in here.(ill catch up a bit more later too.)I just have to say the poems yall post are so awesome to kick back an read.I appreciate each and every one of your contributions.Its so great to see some new faces as well as the familiar ones Happy writing kids....keep those groovy writes comin...Hugs n such,Kat
 om

Joined: 10/16/2005
Msg: 682
So ya wanna be a poet? YAY! Good:)
Posted: 12/19/2005 11:01:16 AM
I opened my eyes
then realized
I'm here
and you're there
you're too far
to just hop in my car,
but I still care!
:)
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 683
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Posted: 12/19/2005 11:13:49 AM
^^^Thats awesome I especially enjoyed the creative use of "far and car"..haha..you rock:) Kat
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 684
So ya wanna be a poet? from far with a car
Posted: 12/19/2005 10:23:34 PM
my second poem using a rhyme of a car from afar - LMAO


4732
As You Are

20 December 2005


Her heart felt
a thump from afar
Or was it more
related to a poet to a car

This in realized eyes
of her beauty in spirit
Radiated in warmth
upon ground in snow

Summer shine
on her winters day
Happiness delivered - by
way of heavenly satellite

To think of her
knowing that was enough
This sacrament of afar - by
a poet who cares as you are


“A land which the LORD thy God careth for: the eyes
of the LORD thy God are always upon it, from the
beginning of the year even unto the end of the year.”
Deuteronomy 11: 12 KJV


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 685
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So ya wanna be a poet? from far with a car
Posted: 12/20/2005 7:56:02 AM
Great job poet.I hope all is well with everyone today:)Its pretty chilly here and the snow has really been coming down.Hope all of yall are keeping warm and toasty ...((hugs))all around,Kat
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 686
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So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/20/2005 9:31:05 PM
helloooooooooooooooooo? lol Where is everyone haha
 Wessticles

Joined: 5/2/2005
Msg: 687
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/20/2005 9:42:05 PM
"Twas a women who drove me to drink. And I never had the chance to thank her" W.C.Fields.
^^^^ personel fav althou I don't drink much.
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 688
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/20/2005 11:19:07 PM
A prose writer gets tired of writing prose, and wants to be a poet.
So he begins every line with a capital letter, and keeps on writing prose.

Samuel McChord Crothers
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 689
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Posted: 12/21/2005 6:18:10 AM
^^Thanks for droppin by yall.I hope to see some groovy poems from people again soon:)have an awesome day and a hug,Kat
 om

Joined: 10/16/2005
Msg: 690
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/21/2005 2:58:07 PM
In each writes stories are told
to others alike for them to hold
in hearts and minds of young and old
feelings revieled from poets so bold

pictures are painted from black and white
posts are grounded both day and night
time flys by with out a sight
of colorful peoples bright writes.

:) homme
 kblgal

Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 691
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Posted: 12/21/2005 8:05:17 PM
Om... your "car/far" and "eyes/realized" poem... hilarious!
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 692
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/21/2005 8:28:51 PM
There was a dork
who ate pork
Thought he had a brain
so made an open claim
To go by car
and do it in travel far
Lucky for him in some eyes
much more is to realize
Eating crow or road kill
being this in taste of bitter pill
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 693
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Posted: 12/22/2005 6:49:42 AM
hey kbl,poet,and om....great to see all of you:)Oh,and... (That sums it up lol)Kat
 om

Joined: 10/16/2005
Msg: 694
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/22/2005 9:51:36 AM
Thanks kblgl ! Nice to be here Alis ! That did sum it up poet! Anything goes!

Us poets , are we the romantics or what
are the reasons for dreaming and sharing
feelings in daring to spill our road kill
all over these pages of entertainment
for quiet seasons to fill our air heads
that are in our lap tops and desks topped
up with ideas to get with, us poets.


well that was fun!
homme
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 695
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/22/2005 11:06:33 AM
4755
Waves of Expression

23 December 2005


To begin - to start
to comprehend
In asking a question
or justice through
love to send

What was poetry
this bushel of seed
Others were given
in another way to read

Were there rules
or was there some
Who would care
and what was to come

Verses of stanza
from top to end
To begin - to start
upon waves of expression
to from the heart in soul depend


“The point of living and of being an optimist, is to
be foolish enough to believe the best is yet to come.”
Peter Ustinov (1921 - 2004)
English actor and author


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
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Posted: 12/22/2005 8:06:16 PM
Very nice om and poet:)I hope everyone has an uber groovy holiday weekend!Hugs all around,kat
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 697
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Posted: 12/23/2005 3:04:33 AM
4746
Fire on the Mountains

22 December 2005


Like matches to burn
does love need to hurt
This pain of wanting to care
as if no one else felt the same

Come that fire of breath
inside a heart tampered with
Climbing so high - yet lowly
was to happiness a broken thought

Where was it in worth
this fire on the mountains
Another place to dwell
that heaven of heartbreak to smell

Her scent or his eternal being
a man and woman unfeigned
Ode to a lonely poet
could they be in words inflamed


“By pureness, by knowledge, by longsuffering, by kindness,
by the Holy Ghost, by love unfeigned,”
2 Corinthians 6: 6 KJV


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 poetwhocares

Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 698
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/23/2005 5:21:59 PM
4762
Life to Give

24 December 2005


Where does life go
when all the good poets die
Those words of beauty and despair
left behind for others to share

This place she would be
when he read those words
Or he stood at flock
while time went by

Treasure to betroth
gathered in to heart
An enlightening teardrop
to be there in each weep to cry

Those words of beauty and despair
left behind for others to share
Over which they themselves
will give and shed a tear


“For the life of the flesh is in the blood: and I have given it
to you upon the altar to make an atonement for your souls:
for it is the blood that maketh an atonement for the soul.”
Leviticus 17: 11 KJV


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~

Joined: 8/16/2005
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Posted: 12/23/2005 9:25:42 PM
^^Wonderful writes Merry christmas and happy holidays to all!Kat
 soosyQ-T

Joined: 11/22/2005
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Posted: 12/24/2005 2:33:29 AM
ditto
soosy and

muse-y
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