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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/29/2005 3:39:16 PM | " IT OK "
I heard this today,
it reminds me, IT OK,
to say, IT OK. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/29/2005 4:14:23 PM | 4802
Cute as a Kat
30 December 2005
It was OK to say she was cute
and worship from “afar”
This woman of Ohio
in her perpetually on par
Everlasting for all time
this friendship in rays from the sun
To love her because she was but one
A woman of disaster made good
this woman of heaven and faith
Just to be alongside her
like a cat pretending
to be a dog in a race
That “escaping beauty” hers to give
her internality all to desire
Even with men of helmets protected
wise in their ways of calling - “fire – fire”
“We three kings of Orient are;
Bearing gifts we traverse afar,
Field and fountain, moor and mountain,
Following yonder star.”
Words & Music: John H. Hopkins Jr,
Hopkins wrote this carol for a Christmas pageant at the
General Theological Seminary in New York City. 1857
Born: October 28, 1820, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. USA
Died: August 14, 1891, Hudson, New York. USA
Buried: Bishop’s House, Rock Point, Burlington, Vermont, USA
“Now when Jesus was born in Bethlehem of Judaea in the days of
Herod the king, behold, there came wise men from the east to
Jerusalem, Saying, Where is he that is born King of the Jews?
for we have seen his star in the east, and are come to worship him.”
Matthew 2: 1-2 KJV
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/29/2005 7:41:32 PM | Awwwwwwww..Mwah!and thanks Christopher....Did someone say"afar" lol..  | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/29/2005 7:58:27 PM | It is afar better thang....
Is it fair?
Is it real
Is it....
Sex appeal?
Does it breathe
Does it seethe
Does it...
Know what I need?
Does it drive a car
Does it go to bars
Does it....
Worship me from afar?
Near or afar
On foot or by car
It sets my heart...
Pitter...patter....
Afar
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/29/2005 8:03:29 PM | ^^^I love you Pickles 
"Afar" out poem from you girlfriend:)He
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| last one for the night
Posted: 12/29/2005 8:32:44 PM | i really should pu titles to these lol ah well
Looking for puzzles that can not be solved
Every time I stumble across one
I regret I got involved
To you it is just a game
To me it is all pain
With all I see I can not describe
But it tares me up inside
With lack of compassion
It is easy to lose faith
Where can I put my trust
If you are always so filled with hate
Look from with in for the strength to begin
And the healing will be there my friend
Face your own mortality and move on
What I feel inside I can not describe
Caught in the land slide known as my life
Taking my time to get things right
Taking back what is rightfully mine
Searching threw the ashes of my mind
Recognize my space and time
Drifting slow like a stream
Feeling your warm thoughts come comfort me
What is left for me to tell
Welcome to my personal hell
As I prepare to break your shell
On the other side what do I see
The way life was meant to be | |
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| last one for the night
Posted: 12/29/2005 9:13:41 PM | ^^^Are you still at work?..if you are Im tellin on you....LOL I love your words bonefunny....The ending was awesome:)"As I prepare to break your shell/On the other side what do i see/the way life was meant to be...Keep the great writes comin yall...You guys are amazing...Hugs,kat   | |
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| last one for the Knight
Posted: 12/30/2005 12:07:47 PM | I think you just gained a day and lost a knight - given the headline subject was unchanged
Then I am seeing things in to future -
(so will be in 2006 before yee - 15 hours to go ) Posted: 12/31/2005 9:07:47 AM NZDT
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| last one for the Knight
Posted: 12/30/2005 3:21:16 PM | Oh Im saying happy new year now because I wont be online again till monday  | |
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| from Roland the Knight
Posted: 12/30/2005 5:28:32 PM | | happy new year to every one as well, although if i wasnt working it it sure would be lol | |
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| 2006 NZ Style
Posted: 12/31/2005 3:17:56 AM | Happy New Year 2006 - Posted: 1/1/2006 12:17:56 AM New Zealand Daylight Saving Time
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/31/2005 8:27:08 AM | riverwild2, beautiful poem... in fact, do you mind if I quote it sometime if I include your name and such?
bonefunny, the poem that started with, "I keep moving on"... goooood stuff... caused me to remember a certain evil ex-boyfriend of mine, but that's okay
Happy new year, everyone | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/31/2005 12:19:07 PM | YAY my poems bring back hurtfull memories for people lol hopefully this one dosn't...
you took out my favorite part
now i just lie here in the wind
spit out the truth and let the real story begin
you took it this to far
you took this to a level it wasn't meant to go
so lie in the bed you made and reap what you sow
do you love your self you have a funny way of showing it
depressed all the time over things that shouldn't be
im not dead and im not for sale
but i sure can tell a tale
ill tell the story untold its about the everything you didn't know
its hard to have a bleeding heart when you are the one strung out on the cross
but i guess that's the price you pay for acting this way
don't lash out at me i wasn't the one that set you free
truth be told id put you in chains throw away the key and leave you that way
sometimes it hard to hold on one more slip and ill be gone
so take a deep breath and make it so
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Posted: 12/31/2005 12:57:08 PM | alone again naturally
i'm here with my children's children
giving my children time out,
but i feel a little lonely
and time is passing by
i don't want sympathy
i just need to know
will i have that special someone
to make my garden grow
to wake in the morning
see love before my eyes
hear him whisper i love you
i would be in paradise
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/31/2005 1:04:02 PM | | kat and poets have a really happy new year... love diva...xxx | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/31/2005 1:08:43 PM | ================
WORDS
When you caress me with your words
they are like gentle tickles on my soul
tiny scratches and indelible marks
claiming a part of me no one else will ever own
I tremble from the anticipation of your words
anxiously awaiting the things you'll say
the knowledge that you'll share
and the love you'll passionately express
My mind is constantly challenged
to find my own words to express to you
my multitude of feelings, my thoughts,
my learnings and my yearnings
Often words are limiting & inadequate
to express how much you make me feel,
what you cause me to anticipate
and the immense love I already have for you
Some people fear words & other's use them as weapons
You use words to lure me down your path
to take me on a wonderful journey
to make precious memories we'll forever share
Your words are honest in their intent
allowing me to have complete trust
that they'll never wound me, never mislead me
and never cause me to question my belief in myself
Your words allow me to feel so much...
the hand of God in my life
the joy of a new and exciting relationship
and the loving caress of your gentle soul
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/31/2005 1:18:30 PM | aaaaww luuuv2laaaf
you moved me with your words.mine were but short and from the
bottom of my swinging brick lol, inspiration is a wonderful thing.
have a wonderful new year...love diva. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 1/1/2006 2:51:04 AM | | As a publshed poet, lyricist, and writer who makes a six-figure income as Associate Publisher for a national magazine, here are my words of wisdom for would-be poets. First of all, don't ever write about sex, love, heartbreak or any other relationship oriented subject, or at least don't ever subject the general public to your drivel. Its all been said before and said far more eloquently than you ever could dream of. Second of all, read William Burroughs, all you can get your hands on. He is the one and only true poet who ever lived and you can never be him, but you can at least realize how much you suck compared to him. Third, just put down the pen and do something constructive with your time. Poetry is for broken down losers. Get a life suckers! | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 1/1/2006 2:56:53 AM | ^^^ What was that a tribute to Wayne King
a publshed poet, lyricist, and writer
and
broken down loser | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 1/1/2006 3:20:50 AM | 285
Without Title
01 September 1999
Without the trials
there are no poems
Without the dreams
there are no points of view
Without mistakes
there is no God
Because without God
there is no one
Without love
we have no heroes
Without people
we have no friends
So can we do
without His love
No we need not ever
be without Him
“Now faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of
things not seen. Through faith we understand that the worlds were
framed by the word of God, so things which are seen were not
made of things which do appear. But without faith it is impossible
to please him: for he that cometh to God must believe that he is,
and that he is a rewarder of them that diligently seek him.”
Hebrews 11: 1, 3, 6 KJV
© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 1/1/2006 10:38:45 AM | RE: pet lion
If Poetry is, as you say, "for broken down Losers," then I guess you're a broken down loser since you claim to be a published poet.
"Get a life sucker?" Guess you don't have much of one if all ya got to do is post on Poetry sites and give negative advice. Why are ya reading the stuff written here if no one but William Burroughs is worth reading. Stick to reading Mr. Burroughs & keep your "words of wisdom" about "drivel" that's written here to yourself.
Just cuz you write for a Sports Publication, that doesn't make you an expert on everything written. It would be preferable if you kept your negativity to yourself, but that is just my opinion.
Have a Happy New Year | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 1/2/2006 12:38:46 AM | whats wrong with you pet-lion not getting the attention you deserve!
you are so shallow...bet your dates get bored at listening about how
wonderful you are.put down your mirror and smell the coffee! | |
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