| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 9:17:42 AM | Absolution With a tired hand Feeling the sins Of a thousand years A breaking of my mind Afloat in a sea of Strange whispers Gone now are the men Of Old New faces with Old Crimes Seep into our times A man without money A dog without sleep A killer with No salvation Born of dust Dying with false Tears | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 9:58:58 AM | your_pet_lion:
If we are not supposed to subject the world to our drivel, don't subject us to yours. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 3:14:38 PM | Trust
Sometimes the hurt and pain says never trust, It is very hard, I will admit it becomes a must.
Looking back I know why I see all of this, Could care less if I ever have another kiss.
There has been so much hurt and pain, My tears have poured out like the rain.
Some days I go on and I wonder just how, The hurt and pain is so over whelming now.
For all that I've done for all of my love, I can't just fly away now like a dove.
He has moved on in his life, I will never become his wife.
Why is it that life just doesn't seem fair, I have to get out of here to get some air.
Does the time come to love once more, Or is this it, time to close that door. | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 7:01:28 PM | Your pet lion(previous page) I just wanted to say that while Im sure were all very impressed with the fact you make a six figure yearly income, some of us write for the sheer pleasure of it.Some of the greatest artists and musicians in history died without a penny in their pockets.Does this make their work any less brilliant?Mozart died in poverty,so I guess his brilliant music is crap to you as well?You may see our posting in the poetry forums as a waste of time,but I simply dont care.I love writing as well as reading all of the amazing poems Ive seen posted in these forums.While you should be proud of yourself for making a six figure income at writing,I guess it just goes to show money cant buy heart and class .I also want to say thanks and happy New year to all of you who posted while I was away:)Awesome writes and its great to see each and every one of you here:)Hugs,kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 7:38:29 PM | Hey folks! just wishing ya all a happy new year, don't stop the wonderful writes,... I'm still reading! As regarding the fake lion,.... don't dignify the loser with a response! He's lying like crazy, for all we know he keeps his arms toned by switching hands in mid-stroke! Mind you that is quite an accomplishment on the back of a motorcycle. Guess we all have our acheivements!
A talker is not so much as they talk, but they just dont get or know how to bet on what they can say or do to another and walk and walk all over ones day some wonder at why so few balk at the dumb shits talk!
LOLOLOL not bad for a two minuites impromtu! Reminds me of toastmasters! Anywho, later folks! | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 7:39:57 PM | in the middle of the night
feeling cold as the west wind blows
and all the smoke dims the lights
giving way to improvisation
im left with a single question
does it have to be this way
caught in a dream
rather captured by your beauty
so let it stay that way
can i stay the night
will that be alright
can we get our friendship right
the venom in your words is the worst i have seen
im waiting on a need to know
i love the way you glow
lets find some where to go
the courage of the night
has left all in the light
will you improvise
is that at all wise
get with the time
get to a healthy state
lets make our friendship fly
that's my gift to you
such a beautiful thing to do | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/2/2006 8:47:25 PM | Thanks for dropping in bonefunny:)...love your write..you must be at work again hehe dashance...I couldnt have said it better myself have an awesome night yall,kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/4/2006 5:29:22 PM | 4844 Ecstasy of Two 05 January 2006
Massage my back rub my feet Hold my heart and on you repeat
Those hands gentle to touch you body soft to shoulder rub This kind of thing done in gentile and that of love
Two bodies naked to breathe wrestling in souls unified dripping with sweat
Being with you in that of desire Your beauty another of taste eat
Massage my back rub my feet Hold my heart and on you I will in kindness repeat
“For Adam was first formed, then Eve. And Adam was not deceived, but the woman being deceived was in the transgression. Notwithstanding she shall be saved in childbearing, if they continue in faith and charity and holiness with sobriety.” 1 Timothy 2:13-15 KJV
© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/4/2006 6:14:39 PM | That was an awesome poem poet I hope everyone is having a spiffy evening Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/4/2006 6:27:43 PM | I remember when i was a kid Around the age of 10 Life was fun Life was easy Nothin to it Mostly fun and games And i didnt have to worry
I reached the age of 15 Closer to a man But still a child Life was getting harder Because there was lots of Gangs There was lots of violence And with that violence Came no fun and games Just a bunch of dug up graves
Now im 22 and consider myself a man glad to be alive and say who i am | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/4/2006 6:29:59 PM | milltownlvr....Welcome to my lil forum:)Thanks for sharing your words of strength with all of us.Very powerful Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/4/2006 7:00:17 PM | Every night before i sleep I close my eyes And try not to wheep Your love i once had IS mine no more Your love i once had i need no more You left my with a broken heart And i felt ripped apart But heart is no longer broken Although much i thought its been put back together And is stronger much more im strong man and i wont let love tear me apart Im finally out of the dark And i see the light All im waiting for is the right girl To start off everything right
Milltownlvr | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/5/2006 12:07:17 AM | Sonnet 116 Let me not to marriage of true minds admit impediments.
Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments. Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove:
O no! it is an ever-fixed mark That looks on tempests and is never shaken; It is the star to every wandering bark, Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks Within his bending sickle's compass come: Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved, I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
William Shakespeare (1564 - 1616) | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/5/2006 10:39:45 PM | Wow That write is crap poet...Not one of your best I crack myself up Thanks for posting that timeless work here:) Milltownlvr...I love the hopeful edge to all of your writes.Have a great night yall,Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/6/2006 2:43:16 AM | I will not follow you Should I even bother to? I can not make that promise Never will we speak of this again The warped ideas running threw your head I always new it would come to this A lot of talk and a broken promise Never look my way again I have what you crave right here Give into your deepest fear And fell the pain If I know what it is Some how it always comes back to this Nothing really bothers her There is not really any logic here What made you wither and die What made you want to compromise Was it something I once said Now you are running with what I did Somehow I thought you would cry Knowing I did not want to come inside Watch you feelings start to melt As I confess I am someone else She just wants to love her self But she is always in doubt Paint my portrait oh so clear Watch my hatred disappear Always do you break the skin Showing what is deep with in Scratching deep dig your nails Drawing blood it never fails I will meet you on the other side Should you get there before I die Ask if you can bring a friend Tell them we made a pact to stay together Until the bitter end | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/6/2006 2:57:56 PM | Bonefunny...Thanks for popping in to share your poem.You write with such emotion and originality..Keep on doin what you do..Love it Have a spiffy day yall,kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/7/2006 12:57:44 AM | this ones not so long but they all cant be i guess lol
She paints me like a canvas when I can not speak I have been lost inside your umbilical noose for weeks Hanging on a moment You will get back Paranoid of the disease you carry When it turns black Bleeding orchids for give me for what I have done Turned my back on everything and everyone I am like a broken habit Always in the back of your mind Cut your self so you can feel the warmth Just one last time | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/9/2006 4:13:30 PM | Heart felt writes here in this honey, some laaaf, some cuss, some love, some funny, all in all, make my day sunny ! :) | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 3:19:03 AM | 4882 Bull to a Red Rag 11 January 2006
She was the beauty that fell from heaven She was the poets friend In her escaping beauty and of her heart to mend
She was happiness on a sunny day she was a smile and a prom wave In her way of understanding what life was to run free
Those feet bared naked to the day born Because she was handsome in each way of her being
Her soul was pure with a taste of mischief and kitty Kat added in She was the Taurus and not always does the matador win
© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 4:55:21 AM | ..
A MILLIONAIRE IN TRAINING
A Millionaire in Training That’s what you want to be But there’s no Love in Money And that you’ll quickly see
Pursue the money all you want Keep looking High and Low Cuz if you concentrate on bucks Your love will never grow
A Millionaire in Training Has many things to learn Love is something you must seek True Friendship you must earn
Riches lie in Friends we meet And Loved Ones we hold dear So gather them like pennies Their Love you'll never fear
If a Millionaire in Training Is what you want to be You’ll find no wealth in Money Could your riches lie with me?
Here I am, come fill your cup My Friendship knows no bounds A Monarch’s wealth you’ll surely have When Friendships are your crowns
I’m rich beyond all measure Since relationships are my wealth Riches won’t buy Loved Ones And money won’t buy you health
Take the chance to know me Find time to hold me close You can earn the wealth I have It may enrich us both
So if you want to grow in Love My friendship I give freely If you take a chance on Us There’s nothing to fear really
Be a Zillionaire in Training But find your wealth in Love The gift of one true friendship Is sent from up Above
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 9:01:14 AM | DON'T SEND ME HATE MAIL... I'm only kidding about this!!!!
I DON'T NEED A FRIGGIN' MAN
I don’t need a Friggin' Man I’ll find one later, that’s the plan
They Fart, they Burp And never call I don’t need a Man at all
Not in my house Not in my yard Well maybe if they're really hard
Not on my couch Not in my bed I’d rather sleep alone instead
I don’t need one Here or there I just don't need one anywhere
Not one at work Not one at play I do not need one night or day
Big Ones, Small Ones Short One’s, Tall I really don’t need one at all
Nice One’s, Cute One’s Some with tools Most of them are only Fools
I’ve said it once I’ll say it twice My world without them sure is nice
And Eventhough Some make me drool They clutter up the dating pool
I b!tch about them This is true So find me One that's really cool
A few can bring Assorted joys I’m better off with my own toys
For now I’ll stick With my Vibrator If you’re a man I’ll catch ya later
I LOVE TO HATE YOU GUYS... BUT LIFE WITHOUT YOU SURE WOULD BE BORING!! | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 3:23:00 PM | OK... I'll put myself down if no one else will! tee hee
BEING BLONDE
Being Blonde is totally cool I always have an excuse For doing something really dumb My brain's of little use
Like when my battery had died And my car was locked up tight The remote contol not working I was baffled by my plight
I didn't know what I should do Til my good friend said to me "You really are a Silly Girl, Why don't you use your key??"
Enjoy your day,
Lisa
Duuuuuh!!! | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 3:44:27 PM | ^^^Being Brunnette is quite a trip too Sometimes I push on a door When it says automatic Whats a girl gonna do Im good with equations And complicated stuff But when it comes to the simplistic At times...My mind turns to fluff
Om,poet luuuv2laaaf..Thanks for poppin in one of my cozy lil corners for a visit:)Highly entertaining kids:Kat | |
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| So ya wanna be a poet? Posted: 1/10/2006 3:45:33 PM | when you write a good poem, the only way is up ^^^ in saying that a good poem will never pull you down and having a sense of humour is great - even US humor without the 'you' in it 
4885 A Shakespearian Bust 11 January 2005
Wow - that write is crap poet Not one of your best I crack myself up she said in putting Shakespeare to the test
For who can be Shakespearian who can wave at stick to the sky Who was the poet whom truly was able to bring a tear to your eye
A poet who cares about you and all Your beautiful mind and five foot nine tall
That bust of thirty six dee How there was a cantaloupe two see
© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
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