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 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 26
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/16/2005 3:30:12 PM
Mr Big Wood one quick question before I get into this what's with the littel blurb beside your name?

Humor I am assuming. When I first looked at the profile all i thought was holy sh*t that's long. Then as per my promise I read and found a crazy intelligent person with a bad a** sense of humor. You're hilarious. Anyone who doesn't get that profile is clearly not your style.

It's long but keep it. Extrodinarily funny. Laughed the whole time. So if what you were aiming for was for someone to find out who you are by making htem laugh ya got me. The profile is charming intelligent and witty. You are one smart cookie and you try to hide it very well. But is pokes out underneath the sarcasm and very crude humor. Which tends to be my thing.
Like I said keep it!
 christopher1972

Joined: 8/23/2005
Msg: 27
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/16/2005 4:16:41 PM
Thanks for the advise I'll add a few things.
 -lebanese-lion--

Joined: 5/23/2005
Msg: 28
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Posted: 9/17/2005 10:00:43 AM
thanks a million... i really appreciate it.. now it explains why i have gotten mails saying ,:why dont you just go any BUY barbie doll now??: lol... ha ha ha.. guesss my profile was a little towards the "physical" side too much..
thanks substance
 roads

Joined: 11/17/2003
Msg: 29
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/17/2005 10:05:43 AM
placing mine for you dear, where's the paypal button? thanks in advance
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 30
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Posted: 9/17/2005 11:16:28 AM
rantwo4u

You are a very well spoken man. But again as i have said so many times before what do you want in a woman what don't you want. You seem to enjoy the simple pleasures in life and do you want that in a woman?
Girls need to know if they are what you are looking for?
You are well spoken and intelligent give up those details.
 ThatNickGuy

Joined: 4/9/2005
Msg: 31
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Posted: 9/17/2005 12:31:36 PM
Fire away. :)
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 32
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/17/2005 12:49:23 PM
You my dear are adorable. That profile is so cute it is genius!!!!!
You are a smart guy and you clearly love your cat. I find the profile adorable and charming. I wouldn't change a thing it is honestly the cutest profile I have ever read by far. Some girl is going to love that. DON'T CHANGE A SINGLE THING!
Muah cutest profile officially goes to you.

And above all else you were you in that profile even though you writing from the perspective of a cat it shone through you admitted things about yourself that most wouldn't. Any girl who doesnt' think you are adorable in every sense of the word is clearly not on the level.

Consider yourself a gem you are rare not a single solitary fake thing in that profile at all you were youself and that is what is important.
 ALPHAMALE12

Joined: 9/4/2005
Msg: 33
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Posted: 9/17/2005 9:07:13 PM
could you please critique my profile-it would be greatly appreciated.
 HockeyJunky

Joined: 9/12/2005
Msg: 34
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Posted: 9/17/2005 9:45:03 PM
pick me! pick me!! please review mine
 SpoonMan1973

Joined: 9/3/2005
Msg: 35
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/17/2005 11:09:36 PM
Thanks so much for offering! Since I'm farly new here, I would love it for you to review my profile and give me your feedback...

And that goes for anyone else as well! The more feedback the better
 SpoonMan1973

Joined: 9/3/2005
Msg: 36
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Posted: 9/18/2005 12:07:19 AM
LOL!!! Don't hold it against me that I wrote farly instead of fairly... Hahaha... Finger fumble!
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 37
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Posted: 9/18/2005 3:29:46 AM
Well goodlknmale the profile was brief which could go either way for you. You seem very physically oriented is that the way you intended to come off as. With that in mind I would like to pointout that you also came across as someone who is very sensitive.

Although youa re brief you make it clear what you want. If a womans physical ability is important to you the amount of physical fitness references sure do imply that. if not you may want to point that out.
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 38
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Posted: 9/18/2005 4:29:35 AM
Hockey Junky you profile is very vague and lacks detail if this was your intention then great but a little more detail would be good.

Other than that good for you at getting to the point.
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 39
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Posted: 9/18/2005 4:34:19 AM
Spoonman nothing to say really you spelled it out quite clearly and if I would have guessed profession I would have guessed sales or advertising. You are really well spoken youare right to the point I wish mine could have been that short and still gotten out everything I had to say.

Props to you! Excellent! keep it just the way it is!
 HotCuban85

Joined: 9/16/2005
Msg: 40
be honest
Posted: 9/18/2005 6:21:53 AM
please review my profile, and be honest. I want u to answer one question, am i to young for this
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 41
be honest
Posted: 9/18/2005 6:48:52 AM
Hotcuban my oppinion on whether or not you are too young for this is neither here nor there. It doesn't matter, what matters is whether you think you are too young for this. There are many people who are on here that are your age. Would I have tried this at your age? No why because the though twould not have even crossed my mind but even the age difference between you and I though not allthat much only six years things have changed since I was nineteen.

The first words in your description are superficial and sound exactly that of a nineteen year old you said be honest. If you are honest with those who you speak to through this then I thnk you will do fine. You have to ask yourself what you want to get out of this. At nineteen a long term relationship is kind of well still a distance ahead of you you still have many things to accomplish. So as long as youare honest with you and everyone around you you'll do fine. But lose the hotness stuff everyone wants someone hot that's relative. Your version of hot may differ from the others version of hot so judgements about looks are superficial and someties insulting. You cna make that judgement on oyur own without somenting on it in your profile.

Much luck in your search. If you do hit it big with the baseball i reserve the right to a signed rookie card and two tickets to your premier game lol.
 HotCuban85

Joined: 9/16/2005
Msg: 42
ok
Posted: 9/18/2005 7:04:55 AM
i only if u keep in touch will this happen, and thank for being honest
 David9999

Joined: 9/15/2005
Msg: 43
Profile review will do
Posted: 9/18/2005 7:11:54 AM
Allright, if you're still up for it...please take a look at my profile, too. Thanks!
 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 44
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Posted: 9/18/2005 7:54:36 AM
David sweet heart love the pic on the rollercoaster shows you in your natuaral habitat. It's cute and heart warming.

Tell us about you I knwo you wrote a childrens book but other than that I know basically nothing. And you are smart. But on the plus side your honesty is endearing you're a brainiac and you admit it. Some of us shold be so lucky to admit that. Your intellect is a virtue.

Add a few things about you and it'll be perfect. Happy fishing!
 HockeyJunky

Joined: 9/12/2005
Msg: 45
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Posted: 9/18/2005 7:58:12 AM
thank you for the advice ill try and add more detail.
 David9999

Joined: 9/15/2005
Msg: 46
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Posted: 9/18/2005 10:24:15 AM
Sunstance, I don't know whether what I have written is any better. While it's candid and more specific, it leaves so much out. My life has been anything but boring.

If it were up to me, I'd say a profile on a site such as this should present each person in a way that is congruent with the way they really are...that's about all. There is someone for everyone, no?

Let me know what is missing from the current version. And thanks for the compliments on the roller coaster shot. I was having a riot with my daughter and her friend. :)

Cheers,

David
 SpoonMan1973

Joined: 9/3/2005
Msg: 47
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Posted: 9/18/2005 10:43:08 AM
Hey thanks so much for reviewing my profile, substance! I really appreciate it!

 substance please

Joined: 8/17/2005
Msg: 48
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Posted: 9/18/2005 5:32:28 PM
David i hope you are reading this I LIKE IT!!! And if my oppinion means absolutely anything you just weeded out every single golddigger in one foul swoop sweetheart good for you. EXCELLENT!

I hope this brings you what you are looking for you have no idea wht it means to real women to see a guy who can write more than one sentance without refering to boobs knocker or other extensive parts of a female anantomy you ar going to make some woman very fulfilled!

Happy fishing! Remeber i am only one person and I am not the be all and the end all. Get out there email those women and see what turns up!
 dinner4two?

Joined: 8/29/2005
Msg: 49
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Posted: 9/18/2005 5:35:34 PM
When you have a moment substance. No abuse though!
oops.....gotta go
Thanks in advance.
 pheon

Joined: 7/25/2005
Msg: 50
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Posted: 9/18/2005 6:10:26 PM
OK, I am interested in seeing what your perspective is on my profile. I have looked over my profile and I am willing to take on some advice on how to make it better. I either have a very pathetic profile or *gasp* I must be really terrible looking. I get absolutely no responses and although I have had one respectful decline that is about it. I am beginning to lean towards the latter of my opinions concerning my profile, especially due to the rating on my pictures. I realize this is an average, but it looks as if most people feel I fall below average. I realize I am a bigger guy, but I see some very odd couples to say the least and I can't believe that I am just so terrible. I am already trying to work on my physical appearance. Contrary to that, maybe this isn't the case after all. I am a tyro to this online dating, so far it has done nothing for me; which is also the case offline as well. This is the first time I am asking for a reply. I won't take offense to what you have to say, but just looking (most of all) for a response.

Thank you for your time,


pheon
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