| | Years? How many again....Page 4 of 15 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15) | How many years have we all been here?
Does it reveal how far we have come....
By a number of recognisation , makes us a stronger nation?
Memory of history taught in our classes.....
Of pain and suffering , and games won ...raise your glasses
Does any of this make you think/..????
If so what have you to say?
What will you do to fill a lonely day?
How much will be taxed when i get my pay?
Too much i bloody say!
Make a tax for a holiday. | |
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| Moons with moods
Posted: 1/3/2005 9:23:06 PM | All the moons in the universe
Come together in holy reverse
To translate a mood from far away
To light the darkness , for no light left for the day
Converse reaction to passing contraptions
We find through the stars , a galaxy from generations
Of gravity pulled rocks , forming a circlular sphere
To roll round and round , spinning on axis , year to year
Its all scientific and depends on the time
When the moons decide to reside
Its orions belt who held us near
To pull up the troubled rocks , and help the light steer
The nebulas calamity begins to burst
All the stars streaming , to conversely react
To the darkness of the moon is back
As it resides closer to the sun
All the moons universe allow this life to become. | |
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| Moons with moods
Posted: 1/4/2005 7:57:54 AM | you are bloody brilliant that was cool.. so when you gonna post a pic..
come on you know you wanna..
all the best bubbles | |
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| Moons with moods
Posted: 1/4/2005 1:48:28 PM | | Thanks bubbles , A pic would give away my secret identity!! I have to learn to do it first!! | |
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| Nightfall in space
Posted: 1/4/2005 2:08:26 PM | Have you seen the earth from space?
How do you know it would be a special place.....
Images thrown from stratospheric compartments
Left in space , in all of the darkness
When will the night end , it seems destined to stay
All of the planets have their own lamp to see day
Turning off simultaneously , they dimmer as Nightfall in space
This galaxy is far from complete , and darker it seems
Its easy to see the light , exploration in dreams
Is this the answer , to all we question
How did we find this rock? Our special spot to reside
Perception from the stars has gone to deep inside
Time for the light to fade the day , so the darkness sets the night
Falling into space.
Daniel | |
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| Country Born
Posted: 1/5/2005 1:48:51 AM | Imagine a bird in its wieght of feathers
How the bright colours infect your endevours
To take away its beauty and call it your own
Is a sin of the land , this should be known
What do i care , if this bird lives or dies
As long as im innocent and watch as it flies
I cannot control , for its demise
We all have to face death , sometime in our lives
Its harder than it seems , just to realise
How precious , it really is , this simple little life
Means alot more , than a sound wave of knowledge
Means alot more , than a bowl of porridge
Unless it is warm , and ready to eat
Now my heart can thump , to a different beat
Energy to burn , until i fall in a heap
Start all over again , and go back to sleep
Resting for something , and waking to a beep
Am i myself , or am i sheep
Im just an arien of mythology , for no shepard do i seek
I just cant wait ........... Till the end of the week.
Daniel Blake | |
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| Country Born
Posted: 1/5/2005 6:04:34 AM | Me too danny... another one of your master pieces... brilliant as always..
so this secret identity is it um really secret and what is it that you have to learn..
bubbles | |
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| Country Born
Posted: 1/5/2005 2:31:12 PM | Thanks for stopping in bubbles , you are always welcome in this spot. Um...its pretty secret , but not that secret .... I have to learn how to get a pic on to my profile......I just put some photos of me and my guitar , playing at the beach ......and some unreal sunset shots!
I never get the chance to get on here at home , but when i do , i will share some pics wif ya.
Thanks again bubbles for your time and feedback , it is greatly appreciated!
I might have to make a confession in your thread sometime today!
Take care
Daniel | |
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| Scenic Train Ride
Posted: 1/5/2005 9:29:09 PM | A portal into the scenic world
Travelling at light speed
Turned to the black hole
Did a u bolt and got back on track
Through the galaxy like a frieght train
Hear the trail , as it goes clikity clack
All of a sudden the train has to stop
All of the passengers are watching the clock
Time for the driver to escape his demise
And leave his beloved train behind
Jumping off the track , he lands flat on his back
Numbness is all he feels , as he tries to stand
Somebody help the train driver man
All of the passengers are watching the clock
There routined system , has melted and stopped
Why havent they noticed the train driver
He is crying for help , and wants to stand
Not a single soul will reach out there hand
All the passengers hands are to heavy
The rolex watches are paying their levy
The train driver gets up by himself a little unsteady
Devastation as he wasnt ready
Ready to say goodbye to his beloved train
As it rolls down the mountain engulfed in flames
Nobody can say the train driver was to blame
All of the passenger were watching the clock. | |
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| Scenic Train Ride
Posted: 1/5/2005 9:32:44 PM | Dangit, Danny, those last two are GREAT. Your talent seems to be getting better and better. Absolutely fabulous. I loved those.
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| Scenic Train Ride
Posted: 1/5/2005 9:44:57 PM | Cheers agent! Its all good fun hey!!!
Thanks for showing me the other Poetry Korner mate! | |
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| Scenic Train Ride
Posted: 1/5/2005 9:51:43 PM | It's my pleasure - glad to have you aboard. Still could use a few more, though! Can we keep up with the public's demand? | |
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| Scenic Train Ride
Posted: 1/5/2005 9:57:28 PM | Its a tough one ......... i cant keep up with my feet when im walking sometimes.
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| Dr Non-exsistent
Posted: 1/6/2005 1:28:14 AM | Hey , gday .... Ill greet you myself , im Dr Non-exsistent
Ill pretend to care , mend your worries and take my cheque
Wait in line.....be..a...patient, im still framing this certificate of mine
Its all the proof i need , to tell you your less perfect ...money and greed
*(patient)
Powered on philosophy......what is the healing i need?....to believe in me
Worry and pain is all i breathe , why am i waiting here.....i feel decieved
All i need is the drug they have been handing me
One moment please.....I have to brush my teeth to keep them clean
From all the bulls...t that i feed to people , I dont want that seen
Look at my great achievement , im helping but non exsistent
*(patient)
I feel better now , It really works ........talking to yourself
The pain is healed, im no longer in a hurry ......
My pain was more about the worry
But now its gone.... gone ......gone .......from me
Thrown from the spot that took a hold of my concience
Made me more , than a little abnoxious
But now its gone.....gone.......gone........from me
All the while on the way home .........it came as a sudden rush
I realised , that i could not get enough , and then it crashed
The light was red , a moment to think , then the light turned green
So suddenly .........and im not thinking again.
Daniel BLake. | |
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| Dr Non-exsistent
Posted: 1/6/2005 7:02:44 AM | once again godd*mn genious.. i like this one too and hmm your welcome i wil be a fan for a while.. and about this confession is about your mind or hmmm your heart..
which one.
all the best
bubbles | |
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| Dr Non-exsistent
Posted: 1/6/2005 2:41:45 PM | Thanks bubbles!!! ...... Well you will come in handy when it gets hot if your a fan!! 
Dont think that joke deserved a dance but anyways ............which confession are you speaking of?
Take Care
Daniel
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| Dr Non-exsistent
Posted: 1/6/2005 4:56:37 PM | the one you said you have for my thread...
bubbles | |
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| Dr Non-exsistent
Posted: 1/6/2005 6:18:30 PM | "SELF INDULGENCE"?? Is that the one you are wondering about?
Daniel | |
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| Journey
Posted: 1/6/2005 6:37:38 PM | Take some time to close your eyes , while they are open and visualise
It would be great if you could see this paradise
Home would be simple and warm
A journey a year , like the honey make bees swarm
Is a simple solution , so home isnt over-worn
Now we portal through the bees eyes
And anyalyse everthing in yellow form
The brick road is waiting to be walked
So lets fly together , to keep out of the harshest weather
I have my eyes on you as we take turns learning to fly
We are so caught up in each other , we lost the road
From here i can see a secret agent licking a toad
Eyes wide open from the essence of his prey
Will the secret find the light of day
Now that is passed , lets get back on track
Lets fly home darling , lets go back
Daniel. | |
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| Journey
Posted: 1/7/2005 6:38:02 AM | yes well i think you did leave me a confession..
so um this last one is it dedicated to your g/friend..
it was brill as usual but then you dont need me to tell you that..
all the best
bubbles | |
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| Journey
Posted: 1/7/2005 1:46:26 PM | | Hey thanks bubbles , it is simply a poem ...... not a dedication , i dont think i can use words well enough yet to make a dedication to my girl. I have to admit that she was in my thoughts when i wrote it obviously ..... im trying to push a subtle message across , what did you think the message was? | |
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| What language do i speak?
Posted: 1/7/2005 11:41:58 PM | All the poets in the world
Could unite and make a language that swirls
Make believe or reality
Its not really as far away as we see. | |
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| What language do i speak?
Posted: 1/8/2005 8:00:05 AM | well the impression i got was that its like you had this dream that you were flying away from all that you hold dear and it was beautiful but you wernt ready to leave yet so you were trying to get back.. its sorta saying that for now you are happy where you are in life..
is this right or..
bubbles | |
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| What language do i speak?
Posted: 1/9/2005 4:02:58 PM | Thankyou so much bubbles. And you are so very right!!! That is exactly what i was thinking.
How are you , hope all is well .....did you have a good weekend?
 Daniel | |
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| What language do i speak?
Posted: 1/9/2005 4:42:25 PM | had a great one how bout you mate..
um so thats a good thing i got it then..
keep on keeping on..
bubbles | |
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