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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:32:53 PM | Freddie The Frog....
All I Want Is Too Be Loved This SCREAMS desperate...
You spelt disabled wrong...
What kind of disability do you have? Or are you out of work and collecting money from disability...
Saying you fear people is kinda weird on a dating site, don't you think?
I love to be abile to cuddle and kiss maybe play a little This shouldn't be your first date... Be a little more creative, if you don't like leaving the house, try making dinner for her...
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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:40:59 PM | kelvin...
Ok, your headline made me laugh when I saw your picture lol...
awww I love the cat picture...
I think you've outlined a lot of great interests there, but you have to remember most people don't read those... Try adding a few sentences including those things... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:48:31 PM | crazybad33...
I like your middle picture as your main one...
This sounds bitter... but you have my sympathy... I would remove it..
have decided to add this:
Is it just me or are all the girls here going for the daring beautiful full of themselves guys?
I would be willing to bet that a ton of them have been played or kept waiting even. well so much for the concept of internet dating lol
all those nice good looking guys with poor photos or computer skills just sitting with their profiles while all the women make themselves victims of advertising
its amazing
perhaps i should follow suit with some revealing muscular photos and some money photos lol
yeah that'll land me all the shallow girls i could wish for ... yaaa(sarcasm)
anyways i guess this only succeeded in making me look bitter about their success lol
tho I also pity all those girls that aren't savvy enough to figure out this site for what it could be... if they only took a chance
and guys this is a lesson too (tho I hope they aren't reading the guys profiles lol)
take some class photos of yourself and learn how to accentuate the positive a little
don't sound bitter like me lol
good luck to all you ladies, lol I'll shut up now
Which is your whole profile... Which means you have 1 sentence in which to attract a girl.. Stop being bitter, start being patient, and rewrite your profile.. Try some stuff about you, not every other guy here... Try some stuff about the girl you want.. not the ones who only go to the "pretty boys"... This doesn't count as your review.. delete it and start again.. Then come back when your done... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:54:36 PM | sledracer....
Your headline and the first sentence of your profile don't match...
You should find some more flattering pictures of yourself... Such a fake smile lol...
Ok, you should just delete the whole thing and start fresh... Although I read some of your posts, and it doesn't seem like you take anything seriously.. Including my review most likely..
If your serious, delete all that crap, and talk about yourself and the type of girl you like... Not all that garbage... Your basically telling girls if they're ugly you aint gonna respond... You can be serious and funny at the same time... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:56:53 PM | sdcoll....
Ok, try capitals and periods...
Proof read it, your missing a couple words...
It includes a lot about you, how about what your looking for? | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 1:59:31 PM | bamaguy63...
Your married, and looking for fun on the side?? Good luck with that. Your up front, the girl who you find to screw you will know ahead of time shes a home wrecker...
Why not try taking your wife on this date:
I see us going to a park or the Botanical Gradens and walking around to get to know each other. The State Park is a great place to spread a blanket and hang out for a while by the lake. Some drinks and dinner would be next, followed by whatever is on your mind.
Or leave her? Or discuss an open relationship?? | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 2:02:10 PM | dekrue ...
Headline is very cute lol...
Profile describes you very well. How about your mate?
And I suggest proof reading your profile.. few typos, a few missed capitals... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 2:04:41 PM | anewfriend...
You've discribed what your all about, try spell chk, otherwise hope you and your gf have some fun together... Maybe tell us what her nickname is, so we can msg her too before we believe you... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 2:08:34 PM | I dont care for your review at all LOL can i get a second oppinion and the first and second line dont match cause I changed it it use to say" If its got tits or tires its trouble " LOL and Im not going to beat around the bush LOL but whatever thanks for your comments | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 2:21:45 PM | | I've changed mine a few times, now....I would value your input, if you don't mind......but theres nothing I can do about the pics.... | |
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Posted: 1/9/2006 3:51:05 PM | Now that you're all caught up... hehe, can you (or anybody really) review mine.
Brutal is best. :) Thanks in advance.
-Doug | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 9:36:56 AM |
Your profile is very confusing to me... I'm not going to review it... Try one of the others who have a thread...
Sorry Pun-Kin, it would take more than a cursory glance I guess? Some assessment 
If the others offering this service are as superficial then I'll not bother thanks.  | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 7:22:50 PM | Rufus_Stone ....
I wish I would have reviewed it, because it honestly made no sense, full of grammatical errors, and run on sentences... You threw a bunch of words together and it made no sense.. And it doesn't make me superficial.. I hate trying to read something and make sense of it.. Maybe its English slang..
You've changed your profile.. This time it makes a little more sense... | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 8:22:41 PM | Hi Pun-kin...
I'd appreciate one of your insightful critiques... and any ideas for imrovement you can offer..
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Posted: 1/10/2006 8:57:15 PM | sledracer,
I’ll give you that second review.
For one, you’re lacking interests. People (women) scan these to know whether they’re compatible with you. Most women are looking for someone to become intimate with. An important part of intimacy is sharing what you both have in common. If a woman were to read your profile, and see where you’ve blown off throwing down some interests, she’ll press on to the next guy who took the time, and cared enough to put details in his profile. Perhaps you’re just looking to get laid. If that’s the case, then keep your profile the way it is. There are bimbos who will get the job done.
As for pics. The ones you have are good. I would suggest you swap the shirtless one for one of you in a nice suit with a nice background. This will attract a woman with class. I would also take out the comment about you not replying to those who email, (unless you’re interested in them). It makes you appear rude, selfish, and inconsiderate; which you probably are.
Well, that about covers it. Hope you can handle the honest review. I suggest you scratch that one, and redo it completely. Give some thought to it. You’re 32 years old, don’t you want to project maturity, responsibility, and some degree of intelligence? If not, why waste your time or the space on the server to put up a crappy profile? Get to stepping and resubmit an improved profile when you’ve finished it. I'll be happy to give you another review. Good luck. | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 8:59:30 PM |
OMG... I'm frikkin caught up... Steve... praise me... lol
What stamina! Considered yourself praised :-) I'll try to give ya some assistance tonight and more during this weekend; which I have off...Yes! | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 9:10:18 PM | Stonestongue,
I read through your profile. It says what your interests are, but that stuff can all go under the "interests" block. Think about who you really are. Where have you been, where are you now, and where do you see yourself down the road? Try doing a search for males in your area, and see who the competition is. You'd be surprised how many there are. How do you stack up against them? What sets you apart from the crowd? More importantly, ask yourself this question. "What do women want to know about me?" Then answer it honestly, and don't hold back. Resubmit when you've completed a new profile. I suggest you look at some of the women's, and see just what "they" consider important. Best wishes. | |
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Posted: 1/10/2006 9:14:41 PM | | ok... I have to ask... you seem honest and forthcoming.. I realise I don't have a picture..I know I know.. I just rather not have someone contact me cause of my looks..I get enough of that at the bars..ok Have at it .. Thanks in advance.. | |
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