| Luv2knowU2
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:10:48 PM | If honesty and candor are what you want, honesty and candor are what you will get!
I quite like your profile!
However, it would be beneficial to have a clear headshot of YOU alone as your main picture. I sure hope you're the guy on the left, cause the one on the right looks a bit dorky with those sunglasses!
Noone is actually spelled no one.
Otherwise, you may be receiving few messages as a result of the number of restrictions you have imposed... for example, I could never e-mail you!
Good luck! | |
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| fwest911
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:14:21 PM | Your profile is awful. Delete it.
Or... put down the cell phone, get some new, clear headshots (of your face... get your mind out of the gutter), get a job and quit doing drugs.
Then write a new about me, and don't try to use humor, yours sucks. | |
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| randomanalysis
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:22:31 PM | Wow, the headline really disturbs me... since that's what my ex-fiance said when he left... "I just need to experience life..." Well... best of luck to ya pal!
Anyway... perhaps you can find something a bit more... captivating.
You could use more photos.
I don't imagine you actually work as a slave monkey, so please, write something else.
Don't use short forms like 'SPC', and don't write etc etc in your interests.
Don't whine and complain in your about me that its difficult to write an about me. It makes you seem... incompetent and simple minded... in which case you shouldn't expect to find an attractive, smart, and interesting girl.
Your first date section is rather unappealing too, since it starts out with... "shit, uh"... | |
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| sirhcitna
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:39:55 PM |
Which way is upstream?
Sounds like an important question, if you're a sperm.
You obviously need to quit smoking and doing drugs.
The first thing I thought when I looked at your about me was, "Whoa! Too many emoticons!"
Does this sentence make sense: "Why is everyone going the wrong?"
The sentence following it doesn't even begin with a capital letter! What poor utilization of the english language and grammar!
In general, your profile is a difficult read, mostly because of all of the random moving things. | |
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| Tariff
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:43:22 PM | I don't know why you've written prefer not to say beside body type, it looks like you have a hotter body than I do, and I'm 24!
Your about me is okay. Its a bit choppy, but it works. | |
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| Rate my Profile
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:44:57 PM | | Although it may hurt, go ahead and take a look at mine. I have a first aid kit handy to stop the bleeding. | |
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| LooknC
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:47:34 PM | I like the headline. Its cute.
Please, quit smoking.
Always begin sentences with capitals.
Religeous is spelled religious.
Ever considered writting paragraphs? Just a thought. Then you can group like things together... | |
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| LooknC
Posted: 4/11/2007 8:14:03 AM | | Would really like some help! | |
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| sirhcitna
Posted: 4/11/2007 11:07:35 AM | | Not as bad as I thought it would be. Thanks for the review. | |
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| yddraiggoch
Posted: 4/11/2007 9:10:34 PM | Please tell me that you normally are a well kept young man, and that photos 2 and 3 were just a bad day when you were in dyer need of a good haircut. In this case, delete photos 2 and 3.
Please have a look at your interests and determine what is an interest and what is a trait. Traits don't belong here, interests belong here.
Please, no need to repeat any information which is stated in the general info section of the profile.
Otherwise, its okay. You've got some baggage that you've laid right out in there... remember that I always say, purge as much as you can and only move on with a thin breifcase! | |
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Joined: 1/11/2007
Msg: 714 | |
| LooknC
Posted: 4/12/2007 10:43:14 AM | | Thanks for the tips. Much appreciated. | |
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Joined: 2/24/2006
Msg: 715 | |
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| It's time: Brutally Honest Profile Reviews by Kikilynn... as promised
Posted: 4/13/2007 8:38:05 AM | Okay give it to me. I have already heard other opinions about my pics and such so there won't be any surprises there, also I understand that my writing and pucntuating skills are lacking. I could use a refresher course in profesional & creative writing. So tell me what's wrong with my sell in your opinion and why you think others are finding me so unappealing ( crap I don't think I look like Shrek, yet I see some chicks only rated my pic a 1 for whatever reason)---Just really getting discouraged for sure- Oh and thanks in advane, I appreciate you taking you time to look and critique  | |
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| yddraiggoch
Posted: 4/13/2007 9:32:49 AM | | I dont really care if my profile dont add up to your critique. Sure, I can flower it up with real cool expressions; upload some really flashy photos; write a few eloquent paraghraps about how great of a person I am; but, how does that express what kinda of a person I really am? Whether I am searching for my life long mate or a fling I would prefer to express the person that I am in truth than to misrepresent myself. I believe even the best looking profile/photo shot/glamour esentric individuals have issues in one way or another. I choose not to put a photo on my profile even though I am considered a pretty handsome fellow. I will provide those to the individual who would be a possible suiter (to be determained after talking abit). I want to know the soul of a person. I dont care how paint your profile picture, you wont know untill you have converstations with them. I dont care for superficial people. Even some of the best looking and poised people lack intelligence. I know people who have lots of money, dress nice, have done great things in there life, but just lack common sense. No social skills what so ever. So go ahead, spend your time and effort on mine, just so you will have something to do! By the way: Your a nice looking Girl! Dont muck it up with being a b**tch! | |
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| It's time: Brutally Honest Profile Reviews by Kikilynn... as promised
Posted: 4/14/2007 10:56:58 PM | Hi Kiki...great to see someone taking the time to help out.
I've looked at many profiles...some great, some woeful. I'm keen to keep tweaking here and there to increase my odds of success.
You would have my eternal gratitude if you were to brutally appraise me...
Have a wonderful day :) | |
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| It's time: Brutally Honest Profile Reviews by Kikilynn... as promised
Posted: 4/14/2007 11:09:52 PM | hello, I am trying to be brave here, I think, lol, but would you, could you review my profile, see what you think about and give me some advise on it, Thank you,,, Hope to hear from you soon,,,,
Rhonda | |
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