| | You gals need a profile review?... Post it in this threadPage 10 of 15 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15) | hey griffintown,
Made a couple changes. What do you think? | |
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| shadowal
Posted: 4/6/2006 3:44:07 PM | I only review profiles once...
The first time is the pleasure of discovering someone new.
Reviewing it a second time would be actual work :P | |
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| shacara
Posted: 4/6/2006 3:55:18 PM | I find your profile kinda short :)
On the other hand, It doesn't seem like you're looking to hook with anyone seriously so no big deal.
If you're justing looking for dating, I don't see why you've got pict of your daughter up.
Alot women put picts of their kids up when they're looking for long term. They want the guys to know that there's more to thier lives.
The picts are good, though.
Cute kid :)
Have fun! | |
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| moons daughter
Posted: 4/7/2006 12:13:32 AM | Content wise, it's perfect.
Visually it does seem rather short.... If you created two paragraphs, that would probably help.
I'm kinda of tempted to suggest you add a little filler, but then again why?
As time goes by you want to add or you may be asked to clear up a few things.
Your proflie seems every serene... It has a zen like quality to it.
That's my ten cents.
Enjoy! | |
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| openheart05
Posted: 4/7/2006 12:14:50 AM | I only review profiles once...
The first time is the pleasure of discovering someone new.
Reviewing it a second time would be actual work :P | |
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schoop
| | Joined: 2/17/2005
Msg: 235 | |
| openheart05
Posted: 4/7/2006 9:34:22 AM | | Review Away....please | |
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| schoop
Posted: 4/7/2006 9:52:52 AM | I just review the ladies profiles... With the number of men on this site I'd be doing this full time.
Try the thread by Ruthless, she's very good. | |
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| schoop
Posted: 4/8/2006 12:08:14 PM | | Open for business | |
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| schoop
Posted: 4/10/2006 10:44:26 AM | Please, could you look at my profile. My computer's been down for nearly 6 weeks but there haven't been any inquiries. I don't post my picture because I live in a small town. If we talk, I'll show my picture but I won't put it out there for everyone.
Thanks for your help. | |
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| Mary 03
Posted: 4/10/2006 12:16:56 PM | I just luv the gorilla pict!
One of the things that's awkward in your profile is the habit of listing. Using commas is nice but creating a new sentence is even better.
An example:
I would like to meet someone who is intelligent, spontaneous, has a sense of humour, loves life and is also respectful, caring and kind.
Break this sentence up. It makes the reading of the profile laborious.
Happy hunting | |
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| BerserkFury
Posted: 4/10/2006 12:26:42 PM | Yummy picts :)
Let's now... You've got the nice, hard body of a 20 year old. You also seem smart and a musician to boot. On the fav list of 86 people, cool.
Apparently you get too much mail to respond to everyone. Life seems to be good. You do tend to ramble on, but who cares.
Are you vain? I'm sure you are, but it doesn't come off in a negative fashion on your profile.
Inscure? Certainly hope so. A certain amount of insecurity makes you seem human, a trait that I find attractive in women.
Enjoy | |
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| BerserkFury
Posted: 4/10/2006 3:59:32 PM | Yay! I didn't get my head blown off.  | |
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| BerserkFury
Posted: 4/13/2006 5:50:15 PM | | Since I've got some time, post'em | |
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| BerserkFury
Posted: 5/7/2006 4:12:29 PM | | Ok, now then....been awhile | |
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| Profile Review
Posted: 5/7/2006 4:28:43 PM | | Sure, would love some feedback. Thanks | |
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| Profile Review
Posted: 5/7/2006 5:03:28 PM | Hi there, I'm a newbie, sure would appreciate your input,
many thanks,
littleleprechaun | |
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