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 shadowall
Joined: 3/6/2006
Msg: 226
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hey griffintown,

Made a couple changes. What do you think?
 shacara
Joined: 1/16/2006
Msg: 227
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Posted: 4/6/2006 3:35:31 PM
i'd love to ere your opinion about my profile.(bad or good)
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 228
shadowal
Posted: 4/6/2006 3:44:07 PM
I only review profiles once...
The first time is the pleasure of discovering someone new.
Reviewing it a second time would be actual work :P
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 229
shacara
Posted: 4/6/2006 3:55:18 PM
I find your profile kinda short :)
On the other hand, It doesn't seem like you're looking to hook with anyone seriously so no big deal.

If you're justing looking for dating, I don't see why you've got pict of your daughter up.
Alot women put picts of their kids up when they're looking for long term. They want the guys to know that there's more to thier lives.

The picts are good, though.

Cute kid :)

Have fun!
 openheart05
Joined: 3/12/2006
Msg: 230
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Posted: 4/6/2006 10:33:44 PM
Ok followed your suggestions, lets see how I did.
 openheart05
Joined: 3/12/2006
Msg: 231
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Posted: 4/6/2006 10:33:59 PM
Ok followed your suggestions, lets see how I did.
 moons daughter
Joined: 7/5/2005
Msg: 232
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Posted: 4/6/2006 10:44:30 PM
I wouldn't mind hearing what you have to say about mine. I think it might be a little short.
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 233
moons daughter
Posted: 4/7/2006 12:13:32 AM
Content wise, it's perfect.
Visually it does seem rather short.... If you created two paragraphs, that would probably help.

I'm kinda of tempted to suggest you add a little filler, but then again why?

As time goes by you want to add or you may be asked to clear up a few things.

Your proflie seems every serene... It has a zen like quality to it.

That's my ten cents.

Enjoy!
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 234
openheart05
Posted: 4/7/2006 12:14:50 AM
I only review profiles once...
The first time is the pleasure of discovering someone new.
Reviewing it a second time would be actual work :P
 schoop
Joined: 2/17/2005
Msg: 235
openheart05
Posted: 4/7/2006 9:34:22 AM
Review Away....please
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 236
schoop
Posted: 4/7/2006 9:52:52 AM
I just review the ladies profiles... With the number of men on this site I'd be doing this full time.

Try the thread by Ruthless, she's very good.
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 237
schoop
Posted: 4/8/2006 12:08:14 PM
Open for business
 Mary 03
Joined: 11/30/2005
Msg: 238
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schoop
Posted: 4/10/2006 10:44:26 AM
Please, could you look at my profile. My computer's been down for nearly 6 weeks but there haven't been any inquiries. I don't post my picture because I live in a small town. If we talk, I'll show my picture but I won't put it out there for everyone.
Thanks for your help.
 Mary 03
Joined: 11/30/2005
Msg: 239
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Posted: 4/10/2006 10:47:26 AM
Please help! My computer's been down for 6 weeks but there's no inquiries. Could you please help? Thanks so much.
 BerserkFury
Joined: 12/1/2005
Msg: 240
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Posted: 4/10/2006 10:50:29 AM
So am I vain or insecure? Or some mixture of the two. I'm curious
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 241
Mary 03
Posted: 4/10/2006 12:16:56 PM
I just luv the gorilla pict!

One of the things that's awkward in your profile is the habit of listing. Using commas is nice but creating a new sentence is even better.

An example:

I would like to meet someone who is intelligent, spontaneous, has a sense of humour, loves life and is also respectful, caring and kind.


Break this sentence up. It makes the reading of the profile laborious.

Happy hunting
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 242
BerserkFury
Posted: 4/10/2006 12:26:42 PM
Yummy picts :)

Let's now... You've got the nice, hard body of a 20 year old. You also seem smart and a musician to boot. On the fav list of 86 people, cool.

Apparently you get too much mail to respond to everyone. Life seems to be good. You do tend to ramble on, but who cares.

Are you vain? I'm sure you are, but it doesn't come off in a negative fashion on your profile.
Inscure? Certainly hope so. A certain amount of insecurity makes you seem human, a trait that I find attractive in women.

Enjoy
 BerserkFury
Joined: 12/1/2005
Msg: 243
BerserkFury
Posted: 4/10/2006 3:59:32 PM
Yay! I didn't get my head blown off.
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 244
BerserkFury
Posted: 4/13/2006 5:50:15 PM
Since I've got some time, post'em
 Griffintown
Joined: 10/22/2005
Msg: 245
BerserkFury
Posted: 5/7/2006 4:12:29 PM
Ok, now then....been awhile
 Miss_Click
Joined: 5/1/2006
Msg: 246
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Posted: 5/7/2006 4:20:15 PM
I'm always up for an honest review. I can take it...lol. I would love to have an outside opinion as I've never really had any experience writing these sorts of things!
 Banter-er
Joined: 4/18/2006
Msg: 247
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Posted: 5/7/2006 4:28:43 PM
Sure, would love some feedback. Thanks
 littleleprechaun
Joined: 5/7/2006
Msg: 248
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Posted: 5/7/2006 5:03:28 PM
Hi there, I'm a newbie, sure would appreciate your input,

many thanks,

littleleprechaun
 she-she
Joined: 5/1/2006
Msg: 249
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Posted: 5/7/2006 7:19:43 PM
ahhh hell give it a go!
 basham_babe
Joined: 4/30/2006
Msg: 250
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Posted: 5/7/2006 7:28:06 PM
Could you review my profile? Please... don't wory about not being gentle...lol I'm brand new to this online dating thing I could use all the help I can get...lol
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