| | SexyfullmoonfairyPage 5 of 15 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15) | Freaky
You totally look like someone I know who has family in kentucky.... must be related.
Nice pict, annie leibovitz feel to it
Ummm... what are those things behind you ;)
You could kinda define what you're looking for.... leave a little mystery though.
You're really not giving me much to work with.
You've got good looks and you're looking for an intimate encounter.... your mail box should fill up real fast. | |
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| Sexyfullmoonfairy
Posted: 2/11/2006 9:51:29 AM | Let's see the pic was taken in a bathroom at the VFW...I was lit up like the 4th of July the time the pic was taken
Thanks for your input and I will think of a few things to add in what I am looking for | |
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| guitargal70
Posted: 2/11/2006 9:56:03 AM | The main problem is the picts... you're trying to be amusing but they don't come out very well.
You're too far from the camera
Get a good headshot...
and smile.
Try to break up that block of writting into two or three short paragraphs with space between them..
It just makes for an easier read.
You've got the type of profile I like. It's well written, short and to the point....
We immediately know what you're looking for, and get a general idea of who you are.
Just get some good picts and the response should be positive.
have fun.... | |
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| guitargal70
Posted: 2/11/2006 10:12:41 AM | | Hi can you take a look at my profile...Thanks | |
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| guitargal70
Posted: 2/11/2006 10:22:11 AM | I really suggest that you try to get more picts up... especially picts of you alone.
You should run your text through a spell checking application.
Your profile really needs more punch... it's nice to know you have a cat put it's not what's gonna get men real excited.
Spice it up!
Just a little more info about what makes you tick.... just three short paragraphs should do the trick.
Is there anything you're passionate about..... and I'm not talking cats ;)
Great smile... :) | |
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bzyb27
| | Joined: 12/21/2005
Msg: 107 | |
| bzyb27
Posted: 2/11/2006 11:06:51 PM | THANK YOU!! I really appreciate your feedback that was great. I did feel it was too long and I will make some changes!
bzyb | |
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bzyb27
| | Joined: 12/21/2005
Msg: 108 | |
| bzyb27
Posted: 2/11/2006 11:25:27 PM | | wanna take a peak now? | |
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| bzyb27
Posted: 2/12/2006 9:02:21 AM | I only review profiles once...
The first time is the pleasure of discovering someone new.
Reviewing it a second time would be actual work :P | |
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| You gals need a profile review?... Post it in this thread
Posted: 3/5/2006 10:24:41 AM | | Ok...here goes...please help and let me know what you think I need to change....tried starting my own thread to get input and did not have much success (maybe its too soon to tell) but I hope you can help! | |
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| dalaurya
Posted: 3/5/2006 10:24:50 AM | I've already noticed your profile because of the really excellent pict that you have up.
You write really well...your writting creates an interesting imagery.
It's kinda of offbeat an fun.
it's a literary work of art. There's a really nice pace to it, almost a beat. Ever consider song writing?...
Interpretive dance... check out LaLaLa human steps.... amazing. Alot of good dance companies up here.
Malraux a bien dit: "Le vingt-et-unième siècle sera religieux ou il ne sera pas."
Canada is interesting but Montreal is better.
Check these links
http://www.dansedanse.net/
http://www.montrealenlumiere.ca/english/light/volet-lumiere-night.lasso?mm=1
tp://www.tourisme-montreal.org/B2C/00/default.asp?cookie%5Ftest=1
Have fun. | |
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| brenda912
Posted: 3/5/2006 10:39:04 AM | Your profile is really vibrant..
It totally communicates who you are.
Free beer at amusement parks????
Where!!
the only thing that I find kinda of bothersome is all the ~~~~~
the picts are nice... get some more up.
The profiles tells us that you defintely know who you are and you're perfectly comfortable being who that person is....
That's great.
You know what you want and where you're going....
Just steps away from finding the right one | |
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| angela7
Posted: 3/5/2006 11:12:29 AM | Gets picts of you alone... you're a cute chica, advertise it.
recent picts.... the one you have up is dated 2005....
People change awful quick sometimes
Sound desperate...
Doesn't really sound like anything. I like to the point profiles, but two sentences is kinda short.
Flesh it out.
Who are you?
What kinda person are you looking for?
Enjoy! | |
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| ruthless75
Posted: 3/5/2006 11:43:11 AM | Your nick is kinda of scary....
Hmmm...
You definitely have ability to communicate. Straight forward and to the point, my mums going to love you ;)
I'm not into group picts...unless everyone is naked.
This not being the case, get a few good ones of you alone.
Men want to date you, not your friends ( at least initially)
Always smiling, non judgemental and takes care of her man after he gets ripped.....
Men should be floccking to you, you should be writing how-to books.
As an occasional DJ, I appreciate your interests... great fan of robdbank on BBC1.
I predict that you'll get hitched in the next three months.
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| ruthless75
Posted: 3/5/2006 11:54:00 AM | Cheers for your advice and time..I really appreciate it. Just to elaborate on my user name its my DJ name and yes, sometimes I can be pretty ruthless too. Thanks again for your time and if your prediction is true, then you need to buy a new suit! | |
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| brenda912
Posted: 3/5/2006 12:24:33 PM | Griffin,
Thanks for the review and the comments....I really appreciate it and I think you are right on in your evaluation of me.....very perceptive and you are doing a great job giving us feedback!
Oh the amusement park is the one with the world famous whale and some really big horses! | |
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| dalaurya
Posted: 3/5/2006 7:57:18 PM | | You really made my day =) | |
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| dalaurya
Posted: 3/5/2006 11:10:40 PM | A little add on.
Me believe you are in art so why not state it in your profile.
Les voyages forment la jeunesse.
If you want a change of scenary you should consider studying abroad.
An english university in Montréal, Concordia offers good undergraduate and graduate programs in fine arts. Their dance program is also excellent.
http://www.concordia.ca/
If you want to freak out and learn french, L'université du québec à Montréal offers equivalent programs in french. In québec, the governement also offers free french classes.
http://www.uqam.ca/
Options ;) | |
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