longte
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:22:27 PM | Bored out of my skull, my thoughts are subdued and become a lull.
Dull, I definitely fit in with the driest of hulls
A week-end-over, you’d think I’m becoming a rover,
Rover I think not, braver, you can call me,
because now I am calling the shots.
Out of control, I feel very bold,
Why oh why can’t you be here to be told?
Always so far away, you are, how do I reach you?
To teach you, that I am not as sweet as you think.
I do have dark thoughts and desires,
But just because they’re not visible,
Doesn’t mean that my fires burn any less.
I do confess, just one look from you puts my senses in a mess.
I hav'nt changed a word but maybe its easier to read now
I find if I break things up I can get the flow going easier
Yes very easy to understand where your coming from | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:27:08 PM | If i woke up next to a highway
I would have a headache for sure
How much will i pay for the freeway lure
Roads gold plated , from all the registrated
Where is all the money , its all fustrated
Nothing is more , than nothing that is less
Thoughts clouded amongst foggy mess
Airy fairy wind walker i confess
This little part was useless. | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:32:51 PM | Aww thanks angel.
Cute is such a funny word .
In maths , acute = sharp angle
In life , cute = ????? | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:34:25 PM | MOURNING
Hello morning , back again
Hello mourning , my old friend
I wish that i would see you all the time
Filling all our memories , in my mind
I lost you only for now
We will be together again somehow
Hello morning , back again
Hello mourning , my old friend
So now i have to live the regret
For your smile i will never forget
The part of my head i will protect
Is your memory , and the love you infect
Hello morning , back again
Hello mourning , my old friend
I will miss you everday
I will hear your voice through words i say
All our happiness i will practice day by day
Hello morning , back again
Hello mourning , my old friend
I will always have you in my heart
Always broken , from your torn part
Daniel Blake copyright2005. | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:35:32 PM | THE TREE
A seedling came hurling downward from the sky
Dropped from a beak attached to feathers that could fly
In the earth it sank , and fed on its riches
Eating the nutrients , till mornings features
Suddenly it grew , and starting forming more branches
Like a generation , with money to build ranches
Stages of its life , can be difficult at times
Especially when it is the season of the dry
Sun scorching death ray , from high above
Is only cursed when no water can come
This seedling endured a lifetime of pain
All of a sudden , all the roots showered in rain
It was time , to end the seeds lifelong pain
As it gave life , it was an awesome sight
Bright green rich leaves , absorbing suns light
All of the insects came down for a bite
So this is the story of The Tree for you tonight
Remember how we breathe and never lose sight.
Daniel Blake . copyright2005 | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 3:43:55 PM | This is some of my "unfinished business".....I don't know where the moment went...but it went.
The moment I kicked of my shoes and decided to walk, barefoot through your mind
was the moment my life changed for me..
It was there....a took a breath and was amazed by your being, your strength and beauty
such a selfless soul was all I could see.
All life's riddles seemed to be answered here, and in a brief moment I knew you
I embraced the clarity of the moment.
~~~~~That's it...That's all she wrote!~~~~ unfinished.
Well I guess this "moment" has finally found a home ...right here. | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 34 | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 4:53:55 PM | Shall we take a moment to reflect and think of who we are
Over a thousand years ago I think they called us bards
And we would walk from town to town to help to spread the news
We'd talk of war and peace and love, and sometimes our own views
Some were good Some were bad Some were quite absurd
But when we reached the village... all came to hear the words
Ther'd be celebration.. joy and feasting in the town
For we had travelled widely.. and spread the news around
We would try to talk in rhyme to keep them all amused
Sometimes they laughed..Sometimes they cried ..sometimes we were abused
We were there to question Kings.. And talk of love and hate
We searched the earth for answers ... before it was too late
Thats the history of the path that we are all now on
Much has changed ...Much is new... But poetry goes on
Now we play in cyberspace and on the internet
But nothings really changed.. there are no answers yet | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 35 | |
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Posted: 1/18/2005 4:59:16 PM | Maybe now its back in your mind
You'll decide that now's the time
To put an ending to this poem
And let it finally go home | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 4:02:41 AM | | longte... this is why I think you should be the President of the Dead Rhymers Society.... such an amazing write brotha!!!! | |
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longte
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Msg: 37 | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 4:56:00 AM | Thankyou Crossfade
and also everyone else who commented on my writes
I feel comfortable here
In the last two months Ive writen more poetry than in the rest of my life
Thats only because of the encouragement you all have given me
Wrote this Earlier today
Felt Awesome
Shall we Dance.... Shall we Play ...or do you think it's time
to see what we can scrape out of the gutters in my mind
We can talk of roses .... and lovers now entwined
But I dont think we'll find them ... In that part of my mind
Dragons old and Knights so bold and Wizards we will find
Songs of Joy and Love of Life are also in my mind
Dancing men and virgin Queens and living by the shore
Battles won and battles lost and heroes by the score
We're starting to dig deeper now.. the rose has lost its smell
There's Lust and Self-delusion and other things as well
Here's Greed and Envy coming now.. emerging from the mud
And Vampire wings and other things that seem to thrive on Blood
Shall we Dance.. Shall we Play ....Or do you want to share
As from the Darkness way beyond ... there now emerges FEAR
Sleep Tight Children | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 5:02:36 AM | I loved it!!!
Thank you Longte......your writes move me, they are truly amazing. I've seen those depths myself but have a difficult time sorting through the debris enough to return with anything as poetic.
 Thank you for sharing and making this a comfortable place. hugzz | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 5:06:29 AM | | Its always this time of the morning that the ~Angels~ start to show themselves.... hehehe | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 40 | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 5:09:15 AM | Hi Angel
The only problem with how I try to reach some of our baser instincts
Is that this forum is on a Dating Service
I was actually getting on well with a couple of ladies here
Then I posted the poem in the last competition
I hav'nt been invited to dinner since | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 11:35:47 AM | Longte thanks soo much for the advice, i respect the fact that you took the time to respond..
all the best
bubbles | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 11:44:47 AM | Bubbles..
I read and reread your words.....I couldn't add anything... I find it difficult to touch someone else's work..I don't feel experienced enough for that...
We're in a society were everything so easily becomes a debate....here is where I like to just enjoy someones words..instead of disect them.
I just appreciate it like art.
hugz to you hun... and thank you for sharing with us...  | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 11:49:41 AM | your so welcome i appreciate your response and it is truly an honor..
i guess what i ask is that the reader comments fairly yet truthfully and i hope that my words at least touch the heart or something in someone..
all the best
and thank you once again
bubbles | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 2:38:15 PM | Society strong of poetics living on the land
Never to be feared , unless you have crossed their path
Not for the physical being or their greed and wealth
For their magical words that could cure your health
Maybe its lucky we have them here
Withering away personal fear
The poetic justice always seems near
New to the game , so quick to erase blame
It still burns the same , with less of a flame
Maybe these words would make up a name
Ive only just started to play this game
Tis not to be played , to better one self
It is self-sacrifice to heal and hope in help
Im only a puppy dog , and this is my yelp
Society of poetry will never die
As long as we all smile and cry
Ill miss this spot one day i see
I will return , though , to pick up these parts of me.
Daniel | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 3:40:55 PM | Hello everyone...
Wonderful works as always, I agree with angel, it is hard to offer a word or two to help complete a poem, to me it is your poem, and something you have started and will complete when inspiration hits, I have finished a poem a year later..lol....I don't feel qualified enough to add my two cents worth to a poem that is already looking to be a wonderful piece....
If someone was to tell me their problems, then a poem would emerge....but to help finish one, I can't do it...
I enjoy reading all the poems listed, and look forward to reading more and making some friends...
Take care...
Mizbehavin | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 3:45:15 PM | Hey miz , your words are very true! Welcome to this poet hangout.
Look forward to reading some of your work!
All the best
Daniel
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Posted: 1/19/2005 3:54:50 PM | How's Master Daniel?? Hugz hun.
What is your opinion, not on the reason but the "rhyme" as it were in poetry Danny? Interested in hearing your input...
You know my favs:
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John Keats...Robert & Elizabeth Barrett Browning...e.e. cummings....James Whitcomb Riley.. ( An Old Sweetheart of Mine) a personal fav. and of course Poe and Shakespeare...
Anyways Danny give me your opinions?? I'd love to hear them.. | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 3:57:35 PM | The other day i went down to the bank
I drove my 86 model car straight there and back
Took a long time , but my car was fine
The problem was the length of the painful line
Waiting and thinking , i thought of this
Wouldnt it be great , if this part we all could miss
Why is it so hard to get ahead in life
Why is money easily spent , but hard to find
Its life in reverse sometimes , infinite button hold in rewind
Then i drifted to the front of the que
If only the bankman only knew
That i had a promise to keep to myself
Never to rely on money to help
I know it can , but it doesnt make me smile
I will be here for a long while
So i left the bank with a grin ear to ear
I had taken enough money to bring an almighty cheer.
Daniel | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 4:07:20 PM | Hey angel!!! big hugs to ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im very well thanks.
William.E.Blake , fantastic poet in the "beethoven"era. Eccentricity forming electricity , making a city , and self pity .....maybe a portal to heaven , or glimpse of hell ..... the point of truth can be linked subliminally , words are created in ones head , when it is ryhmed the meaning is mine instead.
Thats a start. I have a never ending opinion , as in life , im always learning. | |
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