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Posted: 1/19/2005 8:34:11 PM | | All seems to be well but I hit a poetry drain. I can't not spin any lyrics or at least ones worth reading. I tried several times today and just deleted before posting. Some people can write daily but I go through bouts. I will write several in a week or so and then i am done for a day or week or month or longer until i can spin again. What about you all? | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 8:38:27 PM | | If I have a starting point, I'm good. Lately, I've been writing at least one or two a day. I just let my imagination roam free. I refuse to restrict myself to a certain range of topics, which allows me greater realm to gallop the plains of poetic musings. I also tend not to think too much about what I write. When I'm done, I'll read through it and make a slight tweak here or there if the feel just isn't right, but other than that, I leave them as they lay. But that's just me. If I've got the starting point, the rest will come. | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 8:51:21 PM | Prone to the world I lay,
with my most precious.
I've known no greater treasure,
than the jewel,
that is perched on my chest.
Her tiny digits,
seem to trace a masterpiece,
that only I can see.
Cast from her eyes,
are reflectons of what is,
and what is to be.
Shallow breaths,
like the morning tide,
sing a sadating song.
Her undertow pulls me
to a place so perfect,
where only I belong. | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 9:14:37 PM | For my little girl,
I remember standing in the room breathing right along
waiting for your whisper , waiting for your song
your mother was so frightened , she held my hand so tight
A little weary I was feeling, the moment was just right
Your eyes they were so tiny, your cry ,a magic sound
I never felt so worthy, as the day you came around
your mom she has moved on now, and I am still your dad
as long as your around my princess, I know I wont be sad
The reason for living is clear, you are my life...
I love you | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 9:16:52 PM | Awwwwwwwwwwwww. That is so wonderfully sweet, Vivid. Absolutely beautiful. | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 9:52:08 PM | Subtle Advice.
Ever been followed by an unforgiving soul?
Ever seen the stories manifested and sold?
Why is it this lost little soul
Finds comfort in misery , or so im told
Seems fake to me , how can this be
Should of cried out for another sea
Plenty of chances , you can have with me
Be very careful , when barking up my tree
You will find , that im not as nice as i seem
Ill read your thoughts , and watch as they weave
Into your manipulated mind set , you set out to achieve.
Daniel. | |
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Posted: 1/19/2005 11:00:36 PM | Hi Black Knight
We meet again
If I feel strongly about something I can just belt the words out quickly
But to write daily without some form of inspiration I would find difficult
I stand in amazement at some of the people here who just keep turning out one great poem after another
I think Im fairly critical of my of my own work and dont want to post it until
I feel right about it I think a lot of people are exactly the same as us in that if we have something to write we do otherwise we just wait for inspiration
Your work is great and that little jousting episode was good fun | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 12:53:58 AM | ..............OUT OF KNOWHERE!........
#memory flash back from many millions of years before...............
There was a whale named king of the sea
The name didnt fit him , so thought he
He is thoughtful and kind ,just as much as he's mean
Throughout his life he loved to have a sing..........
He always believed he echoed every thought under the sea
He would sometimes blow out a tune , that wasnt in key!
From his back he could do this , sh*t...... I remember now ....really!
That whale is me.....
WWWHHHHHOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH
hehehe
This is awesome , floating in the sea
Hmmm, what song shall it be?.....
wwwwwwwwwwwhOOOOOOHHHHHHHH
hehehe
This is awesome , floating in the sea
Hmmm , what next in this life for me?
Im so hungry , and i cant sing anymore
Feed me feed me , i need to sing more
WWh....cough cough
Temper rising in me , I AM THE KING , KING OF THE SEA
EAt must i Eat ...no ... no...i must i....arrh...must..EAT!........
So the moral of the story is-:
The poor whale almost ate all his friends in the sea
There was No-one left to listen to his blissful songs , and ...no family
The appetite to destruction led to more oxygen in the brain ,so the whale would feed
AND...........................Till this day , he is still KING OF THE SEA>.
Daniel BLake copyright2005. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 1:07:37 AM | Has anyone seen finding Nemo??.....hehe
I love animals , if i was a fish under the sea i would try sing to the whales. hehe | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 1:23:22 AM | Ok , well seens ive driven us all nuts , yeah.....im having a break. The whale has inspired me to get on with what i love most. Playing music. You guys have been one hell of a crew to work with. Each and every person has a talent of their own , that ooozzzesss brilliance day by day, Seriously , each of my "like minds and hearts" in here has the power to inspire millions of people like myself. Its hard to sum this whole experience up , its just another quick phase in my life that i am taking to educate myself , and i thank all of you - Angel , Dragon , Spirit Wolf , me older bro Cross , and of course Neo and Bubbles ...& APK.......You guys have the soul that puts a smile across the world , and these days , its honestly the hardest thing - how sad - but truth always hurt , everyone ive mentioned just then INSPIRE me to better myself. SO cheers biggest of ears.........I will be back to roam the sea another day , im going on holidays soon with my girl - Hayley....Oh im in strife....
I know deep down in my heart , in everything i know is right , i will have the time of my life.
I will be back sometime after March to share with my friends of my experience.
ok ......well , now it is for another king to roam and keep this place......Longte.
take care. You are the grandpa of the sea .....I miss my Pa heaps.....so yeah Thanks.
Keep Smiling people , my wishes are echoing across the ocean.
:) Daniel Blake. 2005. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 4:00:01 AM | Hey
Not so much of the Grampa bit
See you when you get back
have a great holiday | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 4:39:02 AM | beautifully sweet Vivid....
Danny as usuual.........inspiring hun.
Black Knight: I also have moments where there is "nothing" or just jumble of mixed thoughts which I cannot get in order.~~~ I jump on the treadmill.......get sweaty, and exhaust myself.
Sometimes it works....sometimes it doesn't.
~~~~~~~~~~today is one of those days.~~~~~~~~~~looking under my desk for inspiration. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 5:02:08 AM | Another Night
Another night of wake
unable to close my eyes
tossing and turning through the early morning hours
trying to relax my brain
spinning wheels, so goes the mechanical machine
like a factory unable to stop
it produces too much
nonsense at times
moving from thought to thought
never stopping enough to get the purity of one
finally I give into the mess that goes on inside
I sit and read trying to make sense of just one continuos thought
it's not going to happen, not today
so as I sit here I write down my thoughts
even though sense isn't what they're about
one word explains it all, at least to me
some may have times like this
some may be able to sleep through the night
without thoughts or dreams
I claim my thoughts if only one word
for our dreams are our sub conscience
and our thoughts are our conscience
sometimes my dreams make better sense. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 5:43:39 AM | Danny my friend.
There are so many times I found the strength or a smile in your words... Days that I fet empty...till your lyrics filled me....thank you for that .
Enjoy all lifes trials and tribulations....and know you made me smile.
Be well sweets and hold her a little closer...and love her a little longer....you'll thank me later.
Hugz Hun....
You'll be missed. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 5:45:06 AM | Hi Angel
Dont look under the table
I'll send you a few scrapings if you like
Got some tucked away there somewhere
Longte | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 7:00:11 AM | hey ya'll i see all have been busy since i left..
vivid man that was awesome the one about your daughter it was sooo sincere and so heartfelt..
Sky.. welcome and i hope you stay you are a very talented soul and i hope you have found your home here...
Longte, Angel and Danny, Cross.. ya'll have such talent it honors me to rub shoulders with you and i hope that we can all be one big happy poet family ..he he.. 
well as for ryhme i cant write without, i feel poetry isnt poetry without it.. although i am beginning to form another opinion cause you all seem to writing such heartfelt stuff without it.. for me my poetry is like looking into my head its about who i am as well as what im thinking and all those that know me.. know that i have a really healthy sense of humor and a real analytical mind and i think it comes out in my poetry.. i definitely dont write if i dont feel strongly about something cause then it comes out wrong.. for me there is not much thought in my writing just feeling..
thanks for creating this spot so we can chill..
heres one that i love and i have just written a couple of days ago..
Bittersweet Games
Eyes burning, body yearning,
You stand so far, I wonder if it goes against the bar.
Are you afraid that we might be on par, or it that you
Think you might get scarred, marred for life by the color
Of my strife, you rush through your feelings like you’re
Afflicted by a knife
Too presumptuous I might be, but why do you feel the
Need to always lean on me. Want to see me you say, how
Come you’re not as quick with the lay. Shocked at my honesty,
Imagine what lies in this dynasty.
All could be yours, but you choose to ignore,
It makes me angry, then sad. Sad to know that
I’ve been had, yes things are that bad. I sigh in
Acceptance, but my body won’t believe it has to
Give repentance. For the yearning still grows, despite
All my minds woes
Leave it alone they say, I know they’re only looking
Out for that day, I want to tell you that my body whispers
Your sweet name, will you ever answer, or shall I remain
Trapped in bittersweet shame,
STILL playing that same old GAME
bubbles | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 8:28:21 AM | Bubbles I think the best thing about your poetry is the emotion you put behind it. I love this. I am much like yourself in writing I need to be inpired by someone or have some kind of connection with their soul whether something their lyrics say that striked something within me. I very much like this domain and the friends here. I came to this sight when I thought things in my own life were lost but they have since rebounded. I stay because I enjoy the company within here and the inpiration you all provide. I know I have changed my profile name alot but I hope the clues shed light. I do not mean to decieve and manipulate with spiteful or cunning intent. Lets just say I am reaping something I have sown. I was blind, very foolish and fell into a trap due to my own stupidity. I remain on POF mainly for this poetry forum but now under another name.
Danny i hope you have a good holiday. You inspire us all. I much enjoy your poetry and the message given. Sometimes you lose me but others times i hear loud and clear. Sorry for posting a lousy poem in your thread. I got to remember to bring it here. And I do need to work on my vulgarity. Working in a prison amongst inmates and guards seems to rub off on my poor temperment and language. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 10:03:45 AM | black knight.. thank you sooo much and yes the clues have certainly shed light and well lets just say that i know have caught on to who you are.. all the best and yes i certainly can idenify with all and or most of you messages..
all the best
bubbles | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 10:46:30 AM | Longte..
Thank you .....what's that saying..... "One man junk is another mans treasure."....I would only to honoured to dance barfoot in your scrapes my friend...
Hugs, thank you. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 2:42:13 PM | Hey Black Knight , dont be sorry my friend. I have many a dumping in others threads , im honoured when someone takes a dump in mine, lol , honestly. Thanks for your well wishes , as for your identity , i have wrote a piece in one of my threads , i think you would be interested , and it may inspire you to write. Its called "Prison life & War torn Strife". Your feedback on it or , your view on it would be very interesting!!!!!
Hope your keeping well mate.
Remember to watch out for that little pawn , if he makes it to the end , he will cause havoc!
As in chess , never lose hope.
Daniel~ | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 3:28:42 PM | A co worker the other day out of the blue said that the pawns can be your worst enemy. When asked he replied they can become eight queens. I will check the poem out.
Thanks Bubbles. You are a sweetheart. I have got sloppy with clues and made it a bit easier. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 3:41:25 PM | Here are some words from the table:
To often we see people asking for some advice
But they only want pity or excuse for their guise
To often we see people deliver their advice
Standing on pedestals to be-little and chastise
I've learned in life that we all face the same temptation
We all folly and are left in humiliation
This message is for all that can relate to these lines
Cast not stones les' you never fell into thorny vines
But also do not shun the helpful words of a friend
Stand up, alter course and race again until the end | |
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