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Posted: 1/20/2005 4:10:05 PM | | I found it. I remember reading this before. I understand the lyrics and definately one of your classics. There are alot of lines used from someone that knows the inside. Every now and then i meet someone who was just lost and extremely remorseful like the one you depict. Reaching out and counseling them is worth the reward because you know they plan to change but this is a rare trait and many of the rest are unremorseful and play the victim role. If i wrote poetry on my work it wouldn't be pleasant. I choose to leave that at work. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 4:16:59 PM | | I just read it again and picked up on the part of addiction. This definately rings true for this type of inmate. i believe alot are truly wanting to change when sober but their addiction has such a hold many come back. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 4:56:26 PM | Black Night , i think it would be a great idea for you to write about "work".
Use my thread if you like....... | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 5:21:26 PM | Just for the record......I am in the "dark"...as to who Black Knights identity is ...but as I understand it we didn't know eachother.......very interesting concept though....it seems many have enjoyed the "game" as it were. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 7:29:33 PM | Hi angel sent mail.
danny.....I will try to keep your thread now and then to the fore front til you return. Hopefully others can too. I'll try to write poetry about my work. You know this is my down time and now I am going to write about hell. Yikes. I have a few funny things or those close encounters. I will have to think. | |
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Posted: 1/20/2005 8:50:10 PM | Hi Angel
I was refering to the poem that shows up earlier in here
About scraping gutters in my mind
But really I think you are toooooo nice to go there
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Posted: 1/20/2005 8:53:40 PM | | Longte i posted that friends without faces one i spoke of, also one called Remember me | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 4:30:04 AM | (blush).....@ Longte!! OHHH........lol
Thank you Black Knight....*mail*
Danny, ....I will also pop into your thread and leave a word or two...be well sweets. | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 5:37:18 AM | Hi Everyone
How do you pick your favorite poem that YOU wrote?
Ive been trying to pick mine. So far come to tooo many conclusions
Do I pick that one that got the best response from other people? NO
Do I pick the one that was structured so well it feels right? Maybe
The one that could have the biggest social impact? NO/Maybe
I havnt got that many to chose from so it should be easy
How do YOU do it?
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Posted: 1/21/2005 5:46:59 AM | | I have no rational thought process for picking my favourite(s). I just read them and feel which are my favourites and some I look back at and wonder why. | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 5:48:50 AM | Longte....
That's a great question...I reread some of my stuff from time to time...and I usually think.... ""What the heck was I thinking!?" .......
But there are some writes I have done that still stir an emotion or two....those are my good writes.
As for a Fav. that I have writen.....I don't have any.....I'm still in that I can tolerant my stuff stage I think!  (almost)
I think when we look back in later years on our works.....maybe then I will be able to find a favorite among my own. | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 5:52:35 AM | YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY
There's a company in Australia called Golden Valley Fruits
They bring out all kinds of lines...like tinned pears and juice
The quality is pretty good and the price is not too bad
But now the've had a brainwave... best they ever had
They must have bought a dairy farm and got it at a price
Cause now they're making yoghurt.. and bloody hell its nice
Great big chunks of fruit in there ...bits you gotta chew
But if you want some better hurry... or there'll be none for you
Couldnt help it
Just YUMMY | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 4:22:58 PM | Hi there everyone....
I have a few favorites, they mainly are the ones that stir up images or thoughts in me, they make me feel good when I reread them.....
All my poems as I am sure most of everyone's, have meaning to them, a healing process, learning experience, or just reflections of a day gone by....
But as angel said, there are poems I read and say what?...lol but I feel that you wrote them for a reason, and down the road when you look back at your writings you will say I am glad I wrote that, the reason will be there......
Thanks for giving me enjoyable reads everyone....keep it up..
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Posted: 1/21/2005 5:29:52 PM | Like the butterfly effect.
A memory is written a certain way , so you can decipher it in the same frame of mindset you are in at the time of the memory. It is your charismatic view on something , and i must say , everything i have ever written , well .....I must be in a caccoon or something , because alot of the thoughts are of people in walks of life. Im not sure how i end up in places like "war torn and strife"....That strory/poem was written to teach or reach. I want to help those who need it , not those who use it as a "drug".
"A simple thing as a butterfly flapping its wing , can change the entire universe"
If you have the right intentions to write , then it will show in how you read back on it. It isnt a matter of "top ten". We are not here to write for fame or fortune , that wont work. Continue in your journey within by teaching and reaching further out of your means.
That to me is talent , and im drawn in by an honest writer.
If you have the ability to make me visualise in my own view and still make sense to what im reading , then you have made it.
My advice is for myself and you (the reader). If you have advice for me , please express it ,
If im not to change a thing and you still like it , then you are a true friend.
If you were able to place a message for me , with advice , please do.....
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Posted: 1/21/2005 7:01:58 PM | Hi Incubus
That is more or less the conclusion Ive come to
I tried to pick my favourite and couldnt because they all have different
reasons for being writen
And mast of those reasons are still just as valid now
So you think a butterflies flight can change the world
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Posted: 1/21/2005 7:13:48 PM | FLIGHT
Early Morning.... Beside a meandering stream
Through the early morning mist
You see something out of the corner of your eye
As I glanced into the summer sky
A silent glimmer caught my eye
Was it an eagle flying high
Or just a heron gliding by
The flash was gone....That burst of light
That first had brought it to my sight
So now I looked with all my might
A burst of purlpe... red and blue
Of luminescence.... pure chartreuse
Of gold and silver filled my view
An iridescent burst of wings
The glow that comes from ruby rings
The hush as when an angel sings
Twas these and many other tyhings
So now I know what I have seen
Now I know what fills my dreams
For the glimmer which had caught my eye
Was the first flight.... of a butterfly
Enjoy
See Angel
There are all types things hidden down there | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 7:42:52 PM | Hi Dragon
Come on in and join the party
great to see you here | |
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Posted: 1/21/2005 9:55:08 PM | | Wow... a lot has transpired since my hiatus. Some very incredible writes though!!!! Maybe I should stay away more often... you guys are kicken ass!!!! Excellent!!!! Keep them coming!!!! | |
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