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Posted: 2/22/2006 4:04:05 PM | I would love some advice on my profile. Any help you could give would be wonderful. Thank you very much for any help you can give.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 4:21:12 PM | devilish...
You have good groundwork here for an interesting and lively profile. I think you could take out some things and compress your spacing a bit so it doesnt look so long. You don't need to state that you are looking for a woman to date.. that is a given.. right?
You dont need to say that you dont drink or do drugs as you have covered that in the top section. Maybe you could cut and paste the date suggestions at the beginning of your profile into the Date section.
A pic showing your smile face-on and a bit closer would be be nice too.
Overall, there's some good stuff here, just edit and tidy it up a bit! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 4:42:09 PM | OK Dana,
You are a gorgeous woman but your profile needs some work. One of the things I notice about it is the negative tone you start off with. You can limit the age group you want contacting you by changing your mail settings. The general rule is, if you aren't interested in someone who emails you then just politely decline and if they persist.. use the Block button. Coming off as harsh and negative right away in your profile doesnt match your obvious outer beauty! Say what you ARE looking for rather than what you AREN'T.. it sounds much more positive and friendly that way.
Also, there's no need to say the standard and much-overused "not into games" line... Most people aren't and it's really one of those things that goes without saying. If someone wants to play games, saying "no games" in your profile will make no difference to them.. Delete that line.
Expand on your interests a bit, say what interests you would like a guy to have that might mesh with your own.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 4:48:57 PM | Hmmm Glitterlicious,
You're not giving me much to go on here. You are 19 yrs old, very pretty and one of your pics highlights your a$$. I don't think you need to do much more than that to attract the men. All depends on what TYPE of men you want to attract??
Give me more to work with and I'll gladly try again. | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 5:26:03 PM | Haha..These comments are great! How about going critical on my profile please and thank you lizbets..
Look forward to hearing from you | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 6:24:11 PM | HaliFlyBoy,
Well.. what can I say?? You're a good looking, lovable kid from the Maritimes... what's not to like?? You have a great sense of humour, you are personable and articulate and your pics are great.
I don't know what advice I can give you other than maybe try getting out at bit more and giving that Hailfax night life another chance! Failing that, maybe you'll hook up with some cutie on your travels across Canada later this year! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 6:31:00 PM | | Wow, thanks alot! I appreciate it...great to know I'm on the right track..these internet situations are tricky. | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 6:44:51 PM | Sorry Doughboy,
I will have to decline the invitiation to review your profile. I am not interested in giving cheating guys advice on how they can cheat more successfully.
A couple of questions though:
Did it ever occur to you that perhaps the lack of excitement in your bedroom has something to do with YOU??
and.....
I wonder how you would feel if you knew your woman (who you say you "adore very much") was online looking for a little action on the side?
Go home. | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 6:51:34 PM | HaliFlyBoy,
Just noticed one little thing you might want to change to perhaps increase your responses. I think you should change your location to your ACTUAL location, rather than "not NorthwestTerritories". Anyone doing a search in Halifax is not going to find you otherwise!! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 6:59:21 PM | Hi Liz!
I'm back in the grind and recently overhauled my 'about me', so I'm willing to submit, review away... cheers! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 7:31:18 PM | My personal thread didn't garner very much attention...
You seem like a good profile judger person type.
I'd be obliged if you felt me worthy, and told me how mine is... | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 7:49:08 PM | Walrus,
I admire your your obvious passion and your strong convictions.
However, I do feel that your profile is WAY too long. You are a smart guy but I dont think you have to write such long, angst-ridden prose in a personal ad. The description of the gangrenous boy, while heart-breaking, is really not something I think you should share until you have actually met someone who you know will understand how strongly you feel about this kind of thing and can discuss the issues of the day with you. In other words.. lighten up a bit!
Also, in all that loooooong description and stories about YOU, you havent said anything really about what you are looking for. What kind of woman would be special to you? There's really nothing there about her at all.
Really, I was exhausted reading all of it... but maybe I'm just not "deep" enough for you!
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Posted: 2/22/2006 8:01:45 PM | Nick,
Ok, first of all, get rid of the first line... YES you DO have to put something up for all the people to see. And your point is???
You say you are sentimental... how? Give us some examples.
Personally, I am tired of seeing guys with their shirts off flashing their abs. It's just lame... but hey that's just MY opinion ok? If you are looking for a girl who is more interested in personality than looks, you are not helping yourself by flaunting your abs. I would much rather see a better pic of your FACE, closer up, than your abs.
It might help to add more about what you are looking for in a woman and what activities and interests you would like to share with her.
Other than that, you probably do fine just based on your looks... so don't sweat it too much! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 8:12:10 PM | | please review mine thank you very much,,,oh also could you tell me how to start a forum and threads i just know how to reply to them,, thank you again | |
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Posted: 2/23/2006 7:33:14 AM | Kaeto,
Not much I can add to yours. It is pretty well-written, concise. You give a good description of yourself and what you are looking for. You don't need to state your age in your opening line as it is already stated in the upper part of the profile.
A couple more pics would be nice.... other than that, I would say you are good to go!
Good luck. | |
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Posted: 2/23/2006 7:46:06 AM | | Even though you've got your hands full with all these reveiws, I would love it if you could squeeze mine in there somewhere. Thanks alot and keep up the great work. | |
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Posted: 2/23/2006 7:47:34 AM | McLove,
Just a couple of suggestions:
My kids come first with me above all else, so if you don't like kids don't bother reading the rest of this
I think this sounds a bit better:
"My kids come first with me above all else, so I am hoping to meet someone who is understanding of the commitment that comes with fatherhood."
Even though I do have a sense of humor I don't find enjoyment in other people's suffering.
How about:
"I do have a sense of humor, but never at the risk of hurting another's feelings"
Just looking for a woman that can have a civil conversation. Even when we disagree, yelling and screaming isn't my scene.
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"I believe in open communication and that honest, open discussion is the key to resolving even the smallest disagreements in a relationship."
I am tired of all the high school games, always hiding things when not needed. I want something real and sombody that can be real.
I think you should just take this out. It's an over-used line, the "no games" thing. NOBODY wants games and EVERYBODY wants someone REAL. I think it goes without saying.
All the above suggested changes are simply to change some of the negativity that was coming across and give your profile a bit more of a positive feel.
Hope that helps.
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Posted: 2/23/2006 7:53:36 AM | JP -
Not bad but needs a bit of fleshing out. You say you are outgoing and humourous.. can you give us some examples of that? Some funny or interesting little stories about yourself that reflect those parts of your personality? You must have some from teaching all those little kids!!
Your pics are ok - not great, but ok. If you could get one as clear as your main pic but with a big smile, that would be perfect.
Oh, and I think it's against the rules to put your email address on your profile, so you might want to take that out.
Good luck! | |
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