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Posted: 2/24/2006 10:11:11 PM | Veldamirx -
I am exhausted and have damn lists going through my head that I cant seem to stop!! LOL But I promise to review you tomorrow, once my head has cleared!! You will be first in line! | |
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Posted: 2/24/2006 10:19:54 PM | Thanks for the review. Maybe I'll add something about who or what I'm looking for.
As for the sword picture...that actually gets me the most comments. People find it interesting and ask about it. So...Not sure if I should keep it or not or change it to a different type of sword picture...less threatening! | |
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Posted: 2/24/2006 11:28:15 PM | Jasminekai: I think the picture kind of works for you... heck, I'd let you stab me, you're a gorgeous woman. Just teasing, the pic is bound to intrigue though.
Lizbets: Once you get the chance to (don't stress yourself out) can you review my profile please. I'd greatly appreciate your opinion as I had a chance to review your profile and I got a beautiful impression on who you were as a person. I have to admit, I took a different approach as I normally would while writting mine (I'm in one of my artsy moods... and artsy isn't always practical for me).
Oh, and if you don't mind I'd like to suggest a critique on your profile... perhaps you should broaden your "mail to" settings to include ages 26-43... I could hold out a few months to msg' you but 8 years is a long time... (Hehe, can't blame a guy for trying can you?).
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Posted: 2/24/2006 11:38:33 PM | Hi lizbets!
Just hopped on this site recently. I have no experience in online dating. I'm quite curious about the hole process and possible surprises. I was wondering what you thought of my profile. Insight from a woman is always welcome.
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Posted: 2/25/2006 3:15:00 AM | Thank you so much for your words of encouragment. I admire your honesty and am thankful for your critisism. I wish you allthe best with love and life.
BZYB | |
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Posted: 3/3/2006 11:36:03 AM | Hi liz would you take a look at my lame profile please lol I'm not really good on speaking about myself so I would really appreciate your input.
Thank you
BTW you're hotttt  
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Posted: 3/6/2006 12:09:14 PM | | I liked it..I just think that your starting line, may be construed as insulting to men older then you (or old enough to be your daddy, which by the way nobody knows)..how do you exactly define old? | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 6:22:40 PM | OK, Ms. Lizbets, I suppose I'm ready for any constructive criticism you may have to offer I am still "relatively" new to this whole online dating "thing" and I'm trying to be extremely honest about myself but just don't seem to be "hitting the right notes" as it were, or perhaps I'm overlooking something obvious? Missing the forest from the trees? Thanks for your thoughts.-B | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 7:13:51 PM | Hello Liz,
Please review my profile.
I like your style of consructive
critique. Is my profile
alienating ninety nine percent
of the guys in the age group
I am hoping to hear from?
Am I too discriminating?
I have gotten very few responses.
Thank you kindly. | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 7:25:40 PM | Are you still reviewing profiles? I don't know what is wrong here. I am a genuine, honest guy and I make that clear whenever I message someone. I choose girls that say they are looking for someone like me but the replies I get are only about 1/10 emails... if that. I welcome friendly advice, please help.
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Posted: 3/15/2006 8:49:03 PM | blue lake mermaid -
Your pics are not helping. The whole underwater theme is a bit strange. I understand you are a swimmer, but how about some pics of you doing something besides that? Pics that are CLEAR would be much better for a start.
Also.. your profile is too LONG and the way it's written, almost "list-like", yet.. it's not a list... is WAY too difficult to read and follow.
Shorten up your first date section.. it's got a lot of negative stuff and a bunch of stuff we dont need to hear about your IM not working, etc etc...
Definitely needs some work!! | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 8:50:47 PM | | I know my profile needs some work, but I was wondering if you'd be able to help me. The only mail I get is when I send some out, and even then, I get like 1! | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 8:51:43 PM | Ruffian...
It's your typical 20 yr old guy's profile.. It's ok, not great, but ok. However.. your pics are TERRIBLE! Dark, blurry and you look scary! That one pic of the view up your nostrils is hideous actually. Get some BETTER pics.. and try looking happy!
I would also gently suggest that you get a haircut. Your hair looks terrible.. messy, untidy and sloppy.. basically looks like you don't care. But hey, you didnt ask for a "hair" review! That's just my opinion.
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Posted: 3/15/2006 9:12:31 PM | hi lizbets,
i was wondering if you could give me an honest opinion on my profile too, and let me know what you think?
thanks
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Posted: 3/15/2006 9:17:33 PM | Flavourful - Well, there's not much to review.. it's a little negative sounding and kinda "in your face".. but maybe that's what you want to portray. Don't expect too much of you? Well, thats obvious from looking at your profile!
You are "random"?? What does that mean?? I don't understand. Quite honestly, you don't exactly sound like a lot of fun!! What activities are you interested in? What makes you laugh? (you DO laugh right?) What are your dreams? What kind of guy are you looking for? SELL YOURSELF!
Also.. pics are bad... do you SMILE? You look angry and unapproachable in every pic but one... and that one is not clear or close enough. (And turn that sideways one right way up!)
GET BETTER PICS!!
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Posted: 3/15/2006 9:28:48 PM | Buff -
PICS - only one and it's bad. GET BETTER PICS!
SWEARING - A turn off for a lot of women... lose it.
SPELLING/GRAMMAR/SENTENCE STRUCTURE - All BAD, BAD and BAD. Fix it!
i got a heart and will use it occasionally, when i get past my own bullshit.
im way to narsasistic as well and i hate that,
and THIS line^^^^... ABOVE ALL ELSE... will scare women away. If that's really you, then I can't help you with a profile review.. you need PROFESSIONAL help!
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Posted: 3/15/2006 9:50:23 PM | I Am Dave - Sorry, I missed yours!
Ok.. first get RID of all those ANNOYING emoticons! They are just plain irritating and over-used.
Your profile reads all over the place.. it's scattered and jumps from one thought to the next. Try organizing your thoughts into logical sentences/paragraphs that flow... Paragraphs have an opening sentence with a couple of sentences following that build on the opening one and a closing one to wrap it all up. Get it? Tidy it up a bit. Have a look at the "Writing a Good Profile" threads at the top of this forum and get some ideas there.
And.. once again... this seems to be my MANTRA lately... GET BETTER PICS!!!! Yours are dark, blurry. The "best of the worst" is the one where you are actually SMILING.. this should be your main pic if you change nothing else.
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Posted: 3/15/2006 11:15:02 PM | lol no im not a total narsisist i think that was an extreem way of explaining what i was trying to say......maybe a little self absorbed would be more acurate?
what can i say?, i like using over descriptive words?
and no i dont need help.....im beyond help....mwhahahahahah...jokes | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 12:16:52 AM | Hey liz.
I like the fact that you don't pull punches, I seem to be missing something with my profile maybe a little help from you is exactly what I need.
any thoughts would be a help. | |
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