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Posted: 3/16/2006 9:38:19 AM | hi liz
would like some input on my profile and what you think about it, i feel like there is something i am not doing right.
can you please give me an idea of how to make it better, i know for one the pictures arent that good. and well get new ones soon | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 10:37:41 AM | | Hey Lizbets, I was wondering if you could check out my profile and let me know if you don't like anything or if there is something you would change? thanks! | |
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urit
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Joined: 3/16/2006
Msg: 130 | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 4:45:58 PM | | hi Liz, well I just stumbled onto this thread....but if you have time pls do review my profile....I would like your honest opinion.....cheers, J | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 8:05:48 PM | hey Liz,
Thanks for the offer on a profile review...I would appreciate a little feedback when you have time. Anyone else can throw in their buck o' five (inflation!) if they feel so inclined. thanks | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 11:36:57 PM | | Thank you so much for your input! I have done a bit of surgery to tide me over for a bit. I am still working on the pics, they are all I have for now though. Do you have any other advice? | |
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Posted: 3/19/2006 7:45:01 PM | | I will appreciate it very much if you could give me a heads up on what I need to do to improve my profile. Thanks, Steve | |
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Joined: 6/13/2005
Msg: 136 | |
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Posted: 3/20/2006 11:35:31 AM | I would really appreciate the help. For some reason I cannot understand what I'm doing wrong. Not getting any responses.
Any and all help is appreciated!
Ladycatpink in MD | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:30:36 AM | | Really? I would appreciate any criticism – constructive or otherwise… Give it to me straight sista… | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:20:19 PM | OK - I have some catching up to do here..
Face in The Crowd... first of all your Headline "Wait TO you get a load of me"... makes NO sense. I really don't like this headline at all, but if you MUST use it at least get it RIGHT!!
It SHOULD Be: "Wait 'TIL you get a load of me"!! You are a teacher.. RIGHT??
Secondly, your profile is WAAAAAY too long.
Get rid of all that nonsense abour Waldo... Zzzzzzz.. who cares???
Remove all the lame jokes about hand-puppets, tax returns and sitting or standing activities. Remove ALL annoying emoticons.
Check your spelling and grammar!! ("fare" should be "fair").
You have work to do...
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:33:56 PM | Neo Neptune -
Whoa... it's just sooooooooo "out-there, touchy-feely, new-age". I don't get it. What confuses me is you make statements like "I'm not this, BUT I'm not really THAT either", "I'm not this and I'm not that, BUT I'm somewhere in-between", "I'm looking for this, BUT the door's not closed to that"... it's all so ummmmmm.. MURKY! It's like you either have NO idea who you are OR you are trying to please EVERYONE who looks at your profile!
Your first date description just goes into more long-winded blathering that just put me to sleep! Can't you come up with something like ummmm let's see...... how about a FIRST DATE IDEA??
Also... what on earth does this mean?
I'd like a relationship with a woman who is in touch with her spirituality, someone with similar morals & values, someone who groks how I tick on that level. HUH??? GROKS??? WTF??
I can't even begin to give you tips on fixing this... How about you just START OVER?? | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:36:57 PM | WaldenGuy -
Great profile... short and sweet yet gives a GREAT picture of who you are and what you are all about. The only suggestion I would make is to move the description of what you are looking for up to the "about me" section.. and use the First Date section for a first date idea!
Good luck. | |
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Joined: 3/5/2006
Msg: 145 | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:42:30 PM | Sweet Giggles -
Your profile is very sincere and I get a sense that you are who you SAY you are. You need to check your spelling and grammar and perhaps spice up your headline a bit to grab attention and make them want to read more!
And yes.. you do need to get a few more pics.
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Joined: 3/5/2006
Msg: 147 | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:49:15 PM | Nice&Honest -
Do a spell and grammar check. Believe it or not... these things DO count! As far as your pics go, they are pretty good, however, I would switch your main pic with your 3rd to last one. A main pic with your head covered and in sunglasses looks like you are hiding.
I would delete the reference to your affinity for drinking... not exactly a big selling point! Also, women do NOT like to be told to "look hot"... lose that too.
You are young and good-looking, you shouldn't have too much trouble with just some minor changes.
Good luck. | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:55:55 PM | Arizona Web-
"try missing a payment"..... huh?? I don't get that... so, I'm guessing that most other people won't get it either.
It's too long, it's too much about sappy, lovey-dovey cliches, it's too much about silly sexual innuendos and it's REALLY too much about your IQ (who really cares???) Lose that dumb joke about the days men want to have sex.
It's just lame.
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Posted: 3/21/2006 8:57:23 PM | | Would love for you to look at mine. you are probably overwhelmed with all these other requests :) you can message me or post on here :) | |
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