| | I will review your profile... Page 7 of 10 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10) | Skeeter -
Loved your profile... it's a wee bit corny, but I LIKED it! Only criticism would be your pics.. they're not great and why do people post pics of themselves in Grade 3?? I have never understood that??
Other than the pics, which could be better... I'd give ya an 8 out of 10!
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:11:00 PM | KYWildcat -
Spell and grammar check please. (Gawd, I sound like broken record). Your pics are BAD - get some better ones, clearer and closer.
It's not a great idea to open your introduction with a reference to your marriage.. I would lose that. You should just start from "I've learned a lot about how a relationship should be..." Your requirement for "beautiful and sexy" is a bit of a turn-off and will eliminate a lot of potential GREAT women who will feel (probably wrongly) that they wouldnt measure up to your standards. Don't know if you've checked in the mirror lately.. but while you're not hideous, you're not exactly Brad Pitt either!
Also delete the negativity about game players and married women.. no need to spell that out.
That's all I've got for you.
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:16:10 PM | Man of Intergrity -
once again..... SPELL & GRAMMAR check!! Boy.. doesn't ANYONE know how to spell anymore??? It's most annoying!
Anyway... your profile is not bad, but it's a bit too wordy and long. I would delete the big long lists of your music preferences, etc. Those details you can discuss later once you start chatting with someone. No need to tell it all in your profile.
In summary, spell check, grammar check, shorten it up and you're good to go.
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:21:42 PM | TracyK -
Tracy, Tracy, Tracy.....
Please... DELETE all the negative, bitter and hostile ramblings in your profile. Oh, wait.. then there will be NO profile at all! You are doing yourself no favours by ranting on about what you DON'T want or how all men are liars. PLEASE... what guy in his right mind is going to be attracted to THAT??
And your pics??? How are we to know which girl is YOU?? And who is the guy in the pic?? Get some pics of YOU, just YOU.
You have a LOT of work to do to make this one right.
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:29:58 PM | LadyCatPink-
oh dear - how do I say this and be kind?? I don't know how to say it any other way than... IT'S BORING AS HELL!! Conversations? Reading? Society for Creative Anachronisms??? WTF??? Needlework Guilds????  Come ON GIRL!! Surely there is a spark, a tiny little sexy ember in there somewhere just DYING to get OUT of the mundane-ness (is that a word?) of your life and set it on fire baby!!! What makes you quiver with excitement? What crazy things have you always wanted to do? What turns your crank lady?? Do you have a crank?? I think it needs turning!!!!
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:36:51 PM | Cupid Is Crazy -
Your profile is okay.. not great but better than most. I would delete the reference to you attracting "needy, vulnerable" women. It just sounds too negative and a little bitter. Basically your profile should sound positive, upbeat and interesting and you've done a pretty good job, other than the afore-mentioned reference.
Personally, I don't like guys who put a sexual encounter in their first date section, even as a joke. You might want to re-think that also.
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:40:38 PM | Sensisativa -
WOW - Really GOOD profile for a young guy! I liked it a lot. Your pics are good too. The only thing I would take out is the old standard reference to not wanting "game players". I think it's just used way too often and is really meaningless. Other than that, I'd say you should have them lined up knocking at your door!
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:46:15 PM | Meductic -
There's really not much to review. You say you are looking for someone with similar interests and you have listed yours as motorcycles, baseball, hockey and movies... well good luck with that! I can tell you ONE thing that women are looking for in a man.. and that is a man who isn't lazy! Your profile is LAZY.. I am actually putting more of an effort into reviewing it than YOU did in WRITING it!! No first date idea... lazy, lazy, lazy boy!!!
Your pics are bad too....
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:47:05 PM | Matt-E
I am assuming you have changed your mind and do not want a review... fine with me.. cause I'm getting tired! | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:47:37 PM | lizbets...
i didn't think it was "that" bad, lol. those are the only pictures i have at the moment and if a guy is intelligent enough i think it wouldn't be hard to figure out which one i am. the guy in the picture is my cousin. it was the only other pic i had that didn't have a girlfriend of mine in it. i am not very good at cropping so i just scribbled on my girlfriends face ...ouch...sorry janie! i will try to come up with another pro when i have extra time. thanks, thanks alot! joking...kisses, tracy | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:56:59 PM | Emerald Dragon -
You sound like a sweet, nice kid. I think you should change your main pic to the 3rd one where you are smiling.. it's much better. You are obviously a hard-working guy with his head on straight. I would think any girl would be happy to take you home to meet her mom!
Hang in there.. you're young and you've got LOTS of time!
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:59:39 PM | | lol thanks, I guess :P Guess there are alot of people on here that don't see that. or take the time to care | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 10:00:17 PM | | Thanks Lizbets, I'm thinking of wording the "game" part, just can't find a good fix yet. | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 10:42:05 PM | Yay!! I'm all caught up on reviews! Phew!!
Ok - MaddyAnn. You need MORE, way MORE than this to reel in a good fish!
"I don't let drama overcome my life" "I don't bullsh*t around and I am me 24/7 (ummm.. who ELSE would you be??) "Lying and playing games is a waste of my time and yours" blah de blah de blah blah blah..... yessss, we have ALL heard these things before. WAY TOO MANY TIMES BEFORE!!
So.. what do we have left if we remove all that negativity and rambling on about nothing? NOT A HELL OF A LOT!!
You say you are sweet and funny? Really? How so? Give us an example of that! What ARE you looking for in a guy?? Be positive, be upbeat, and stop scaring them away before you even get started!
Finally, your pics are terrible... get BETTER pics!
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Posted: 3/21/2006 10:47:34 PM | Hal 9000 -
well it's original, I'll give you that. You have a couple of spelling errors which always perturb me greatly when I see "teacher" as a profession!
I appreciate the sarcasm and dry sense of humour, I'm just not sure that a lot of women WILL. But hey, if it works for you.. don't change a thing. | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 11:20:16 PM | It doesn't work for me but Hal has a way of ruining things. He took over my entire profile with his terrible spelling and abominations of humor. I don't know who I am anymore. You have enlightened me, thankyou. | |
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Posted: 3/22/2006 8:53:37 AM | | Just to rectify the photo situation...i uploaded them on this laptop..now for some reason they look fine otherwise, when I put them up here, they were horrible. Nuthin I can do about that I guess. And ty Liz | |
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Posted: 3/22/2006 10:17:06 AM | Matt-e -
I assumed that because you requested a review and then posted again saying "delete", which I took to mean that you were wanting to "delete" your request for a review. I apologize if I got that wrong.
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Posted: 3/22/2006 10:25:42 AM | Eddie -
Not bad! Well-written, no spelling or grammatical errors. The only thing I would change is to delete that opening sentence about "games"... don't you think it's just the MOST over-used cliche here? It really is meaningless and starts off your otherwise great profile on a negative note. Start it off with your 3rd sentence... it sounds MUCH better. I think I might also take out the sentence "don't do drugs, steal, etc." I don't know.. it just gives a bit of a negative spin and I don't think it's required to state something that we hope would be a "given"!
Other than that.. I think your second pic should be your main one and it wouldnt hurt to have a couple of others to round it out a bit.
Good job... and good luck! | |
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