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Posted: 3/11/2006 4:50:10 PM | Well look around unless your eyes are crippled too
you willl see that so man of us think on our feet like you
and have lots of fun with poetry play
we enjoy bantering back an forth each day
the difference may be the reality of it all
we bothered to read the rules for the call
each thread is different and we like that too
and are happy to have new players like you
so read the rule and join the fun
this game has only just begun. | |
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Posted: 3/11/2006 7:59:12 PM | The world is crazy
Everyone has the wrong idea
Everyone is heading down different paths
And yet we're all going in the same direction.
I want the end of the world to come
I hope it happens in my lifetime
No matter how it happens i'm sure it will be beautiful
But i hope i doesn't end in a slow freeze
I want an explosion.
I want to see fireworks
Bright lights
I want to see the greatest sunset ever
Everyone would be scared
Boarding up their basements
Why try to stop it
Just accept it
You'll be just as gone as me in the end.
I'll be up on the roof
Watching that final sunset
I can't wait until it happens
Until the sunset takes me to peace.
-Pete- | |
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Posted: 3/11/2006 8:14:04 PM | Would You Care
When im here, would you notice me
If i was gone would care
If i give you my heart
Would you play the game fair
If I showered you with my love
Would u return my emotion
If i shared my dreams
Would you give me devotion
If i promised you my all
to catch you when you fall
Would you acknowlodge me
Would you notice at all
If You felt how real I am
Would you want to be my man
Would you hold me close
Would you show me that you care
Would you give me your love
Would it all be sincere
If im here would you notice me
If im gone would you care?
angelbabe1184/***** **** 3/11/06 | |
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Posted: 3/11/2006 8:35:20 PM | I would most definately do all those things for you Angelbabe1184 
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Posted: 3/11/2006 9:35:33 PM | All your poems are beautiful..I love poetry and have left one in another forum..I actually have a site where i write use pictures and applets..music..I seem to feed off not only my emotions but off of other peopls..so here is one I wrote:
My Solitary Tear
It's just a tear
falling down my cheek
nothing but a tear
showing you I'm weak
My eyes tell the story
of words left unsaid
of love I no longer have
but that's left in my head
I'm trying not to care about you
forget you, I know I must
but I don't know how to let go
once loved, now lost
So down falls a tear
missing the love I once knew
a tear made of pain
dedicated to you!
Xristos that is so sweet what you said to angelbaby ..you must be a greek  | |
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Posted: 3/12/2006 10:06:28 AM | All the new additions are great, thanks for posting.
Heres a new one I wrote as I read through all the new material on the thread, thanks for the inspiration people.
Life by Rene
All but one thought,
Void cataclysmic tyranny,
Waging war on the threshold,
Illuminate the darkest reaches,
Sunlight, warmth caressing,
Still can't stop shivering,
Writhing and withering,
Die the shoe box death,
Defiant stagnant existing.
Thanks again to all the new faces posting everybody keep it up. | |
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Posted: 3/12/2006 10:59:28 AM | Ah the fresh you things with wanton cries
soft heaving flesh so full of sighs
even before a hello I hear the goodbye
then wonder with lust about her thighs
what would it be like to taste the nectre
to melt like a dream with that inticing spectre
to feel her hot breath engulf my sceptre
the fantasies just fly as I inspect her
I just can't believe the shape of her nape
this lustful passion won't let me escape
evil thoughts of confinement or even rape
but in a playful way not on the first date
Roll playing for some can be so much fun
my fantasy of her just lets these thoughts run
its not like I'll do it at the point of a gun
though if she asks me I will be the one
Maybe after four or five years running
games will advance to kinkies coming
she'll dress in a way I wasn't sure if its funning
she could dominate me with her cunning
Then I hear the phone ring one or three times
this pulls me back over into my mind
I realize that these thoughts aren't really kind
for the girl isn't any fantasy that I may find. | |
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Posted: 3/12/2006 8:05:01 PM | WHAT YOU SAID TO ME
So you tell me u love
you tell me you care
u hold me in your arms
say youll always be their
Your kiss is all passion
your touch is so real
my hearts all devoted
and yours youll share
Say youll be here forever
say your love is so true
i believe it, all i want is you
hopeless and true
You say lets live together
happy forever
share our lives
with no disguise
I know u are the one
u said the same to me
for some reason
that changed suddenly
You say its not meant to be
youre not the one for me
to deep in my heart i cannot believe
Look what you said before
the things you showed me
the emotions u shared
the way that u cared
I feel it all so deeply
so how can i believe you
and what u said to me?
angelbabe1184/***** ****/3-12-06
Dedicated to ***** ****** | |
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Posted: 3/14/2006 7:50:12 PM | Great writing everyone....sorry I have been off from here a while.
You already know I lost my poetry book...so here goes one right from my heart....very fresh..!
Sunflowers
Fragrant in the morning dew
always reminding me of you
Your little "sunflower" has grown
with life and strength of her own.
A legacy you did impart
memories you engraved on my heart.
Losing you I cannot bare
for my garden with you I did share.
Yet, your presence will never go away
in the path of sunflowers you shall stay.
A reminder of all you gave to me
and all I ever want to be.
copyright 2006 KLM
In Memory of the greatest dad that ever graced the face of the earth ......F.A. Marsh January 1943 - December 2005....you are so greatly missed.
There it is...my entire heart right out there.... | |
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Posted: 3/14/2006 7:50:34 PM | I have never wrote one right off the cuff like that....was easier than I thought.
Thanks for the encouragement to do so MM.
I guess a message can never be wrong when it comes straight from the heart.
CCF | |
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Posted: 3/14/2006 8:59:14 PM | 5181
Sunflower Haven
15 March 2006
Was it that a message could never be wrong
when it comes straight from the heart
That reflection of understanding
a mountain of mystery of words set apart
Baptized in ways of water washed
cleansed from within the twilight of a soul
Made to feel better in path to gift
never disjointed in an essential elemental whole
As to tall sunflowers waving on a gentle breeze
a sensation of yellow blended within the light of sun
This land of grace and poetic prose made bright
united and unified - gathered together as one
Of a heart sustained with tender thought
This beat of mercy rolled out
upon a carpet read
Maybe the quest being
the journey to proclaim
The road of distance winding
merrily in the frequency of love said
© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)
a poet who cares | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 7:52:40 AM | That's great to hear CCF. keep them coming, (no rush). I have two post for you guys today one is some song lyrics and one's a poem, I'm gonna start with the song.
Twizted - Darkness
How come this wasted time is such a loss expressed on my side?
I'd give you everything if you just let me stand beside you
Your kind is so amused and still confused by what you live with
Your darkness just won't go away
Your light, it's time for you to shine on today
Nothing but darkness in me
[Chorus]
Darkness, night time
No moon in the sky tonight
Feeling like our lives been tucked away, today
Life is darkness, forever remain, and again
How come these things you say they always seem to grow and haunt me?
I'd give you everything if you just let me stand beside you
You seem to think that I would let things slide and have you change me
This darkness just won't go away
No light, inside for me to shine on today
Nothing but darkness in me
[Chorus x2]
Darkness, night time
No moon in the sky tonight
Feeling like our lives been tucked away, today
Life is darkness, forever remain, and again
And again [x15]
No light, inside for me to shine on today
Nothing but darkness in me
[Chorus]
Darkness, night time
No moon in the sky tonight
Feeling like our lives been tucked away, today
Life is darkness, forever remain, and again
Ok so I think I have one more song first, we shall see.
Anyways enjoy. | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 7:55:09 AM | The other song.
Killswitch Engage - When Darkness Falls
As you walk the path of least resistance
Is it as simple as you claim it to be?
Your tongue, your eyes
Your lies, they do decieve you
I stand firm in my solidarity
The path I walk, I walk it with my own resolve
When darkness falls we are reborn
Our dream since the fall of man
We are reborn
My beliefs are not antiquated
We are the hope
Silence them all with not just words
Let resolution be our voice
I stand firm in my solidarity
The path I walk, I walk it with my own resolve
When darkness falls we are reborn
Our dream since the fall of man
We are reborn
We are the remnant
We the remnant will silence them all
We are the faithful
We the faithful will silence them all
When darkness falls we are reborn
Our dream since the fall of man
We are reborn
There you go. I can't post the poem till later sorry. | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 2:10:42 PM | Thanks for your encouragement too, Poetwhocares.
You are a sweetheart...I am flattered that you choose to write about me.
CCF
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Posted: 3/15/2006 2:14:18 PM | ^^^
All I did was wrote something off the cuff - as the words were given to me in a whisper
and to do this and share with others is as much a pleasure as a way to bring happiness
The words you find inside yourself and this inner-voice often speaks in ways of a poetic heart | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 8:36:04 PM | I wrote this before I went to work today, I think it's me at my most raw.( If that makes sense) Anyway enjoy.
Corporate Torture - By Rene
Spun flung into the traversing parallelism,
Thrown in and out of shaky equilibrium,
Staring unto blue sky, white cloud becoming,
Vaporized, condensed, solidified, dignified,
Spinning, falling, failing, crawling,
Back to start,
New path,
Fighting, clawing, knocked back,
Two steps forward, three steps to the left,
Stagnant, demoralizing, locked in myself,
Proclaimed an underdog from the first,
Guilded allies none of which stand firm,
Banter and ramble thoughts never ending,
Descending page always comfort,
For I am ruler of nothing, not even myself,
Afraid to wake up, have to look for a way out. | |
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Posted: 3/15/2006 8:39:15 PM | this is my favorite poem I wrote.
Gone Before Goodbye
No farewell words were spoken,
No time to say goodbye,
You were gone before we knew it,
And only God knows why.
If tears could build a stairway,
And memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven,
And bring you back again.
Since I cannot climb to heaven,
I get on my knees and pray,
Hoping that God takes my life too,
So that I can be with you one day.
When you left there wasn't a dry eye,
Because we didn't want to part,
Now that you are gone for good,
There is an empty space in my heart.
No one can take that empty space,
Because that belonged to you, my love,
Having you in my life was a treasure,
And I know you're watching me from above.
Since you're gone I try to stay strong,
But at night there were times I cried,
Because I never did get the chance,
To say goodbye, no matter how hard I tried. | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 9:43:01 PM | we feel the word
more than the phrase
though think it different in so many ways
each to the other juxtaposed
others are each on there own I suppose
not even the author really knows
the feeling induced by the prose
its different again with a runny nose
I'll forget it all together with a cramp in my toes
taking a beat in to the breathing
letting a rhythm define the phrase
the thyme of the rhyme in my mind I find
can differ from line to line and also from time to time
how fast is my heart beating
what is the pacing of my breath
how is my neck and back feeling
can I endure this epic quest
a poem for some can do the trick
for others you call it a song
some like to read aloud in verse
other just humm along
See in almost every song you hear
the tempo and key will change
bridging the river of a story so dear
needs orchestral strings arranged
Ah but you say its really just a poem
not meant to be a song
and also its time I got going
so I better say so long. | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 8:29:13 AM | I haven't written anything in a while - this was a bit ago ...
A Desire Within
An undying desire within me,
teases and tantalizes,
stripping me of any inhibition.
Delicate senses are revealed, senses unknown to even myself
body pleading and burning, passion uncontrollably surging
yearning-to touch
to explore
needing-to taste
to feed
aching-to give
to pleasure
anxious-to take
and be taken
heated bodies united
writhing
trembling
thriving
submissive eyes
filled with emotion
pounding hearts
driven by devotion
a desire within ... | |
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Posted: 3/20/2006 8:01:04 AM | MK that was beautiful, it also reminded me of a girl I used to go with so here is a poem I wrote right now just for her.
Regression /Obsession? - By Rene
Fate,
One word to say of which I was robbed,
Or is it an over analytical mind dictating again,
Thinking sometimes my ultimate end,
Utilizing this time to comprehend,
Do you remember my name,
What about the time spent,
Seeing you just causing floods of tears,
First time I say you,
What a rush of energy,
Beautiful and elegant as you are,
Speechless,
Awaken years later from a hazy sleep,
Gasping for air,
Still dream of that gorgeous girl,
******** ***** from Park St.
Hope I don't sound to sappy but this girl broke me good so this is one of many tributes but yeah, till later. | |
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Posted: 3/20/2006 8:38:50 AM | Hey everone. I am the younger brother to MM, and inspiration is all that comes to me when I read this page. I wrote this one last night, and it's not very good, but it is for someone.
Thanks for reading and keep up the good work everyone!!
I.
I am not sure, if this would be right.
To ask you to be mine, on this night.
But I cannot allow the shyness to consume me.
I do not know, If it'll be easy as cake.
But know, I'll be their, whatever it will take.
Just remember beside you, I will be.
I've come to realize, time after time.
This I cannot hide, that I want you as mine.
But I don't want this to be about lust.
I realize all this, that swarms in my head.
That if I cannot have you, I'd feel better off dead.
Just know that us comming togeather, is not a must.
I'll take this time, to write my words.
Felling like I am surrounded by white birds.
I'll take care of you, and this I'll hold true,
That I care alot, can I ask if you do?
-From Adam-
-To Samantha-
March 20, 2005 | |
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Posted: 3/21/2006 9:10:45 PM | I wrote this a while ago. Hope you like it.
TRUE
This stupid world your living in,
Is full of hate, full of sin.
Greed and envy filling everyone,
Sadly enough the day has just begun.
Abuse and neglect on lil' ones faces,
Their mommies never take them places.
Middle of the night your lying in bed,
Angry thoughts slowly fill your head.
Time is money, and we're all broke,
People living on the streets, this ain't a joke.
Extend your arm, lend a helping a hand,
Drop a few cents in the poor mans can.
You need a friend and there's none to be found,
You finally give up and fall to the ground.
Your lost and confused, what do you do?
Put a fake smile on and never let them know your blue. | |
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Posted: 3/22/2006 8:53:12 AM | Good write. I have another untitled one for everyone,
Untitled - By Rene
Aching quaking irreverent pain,
Pulling playing gouging away,
Busted into powder, what a waste,
Ashes on the tongue of the wind,
Battering ram of injustice,
Punching the tumbling thought pillar,
Reinforcing the lies of the past,
Plunging into the ever spinning spiral,
Tossed flung around within utter silence,
Killing denouncing all whom oppress,
The thread uncoils with reluctance,
Self-inflicted unrestricted over analytical,
Sear the flesh,
Sign the pact,
Ill advised,
Blind to see. | |
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Posted: 3/24/2006 7:35:30 AM | I read these words in someones profile and asked her if I could post the, so here you go,
Word of Encouragement
Every night , someone thinks about you before they go to sleep,
At least fifteen people in this world love you.
The only reason someone would ever hate you is .....
because they want to be just like you...
There are at least two people in this world that would die for you..
You mean the world to someone.
Someone that you don't even know exists and loves you..
When you make the biggest mistake ever,
something good comes from it.
When you think the world has turned its back on you,
take a look.
Always remember the compliments you've received.
Forget the rude remarks. | |
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Posted: 3/30/2006 2:25:06 PM | Longing - By Rene
Oblivious caressed in the sun,
Music blaring,
Standing sitting,
Request the feeling to go on,
Face revealed to late,
Lost forever.
Short and sweet there you go, hope to post again soon. | |
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