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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/16/2006 2:29:46 PM | Hello Perfect Sunshine. Ok here we go. What are some things that you find attractive in a guy? What are you looking for when It comes to a relationship? I would like to see you describe more about what you are looking for. Also, you like to travel? What are some places that you have been to? What are your favorites? You listed alot of interests but I guess I would prefer little details about some of them.
Your pictures are nice and I think you have a warm smile. Good luck in your search! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/16/2006 3:16:19 PM | ok, the first thing that jumps out is the drug question. Either you do them or you don't. I hate "prefer not to say" on that question. Also all CAPS have to go. It really is an eye sore to read. The pictures are nice and you are very attractive. You seem like an energetic and fun women that anyone would have a good time with. Good Luck to you!
You have a few errors such as "FALT" instead of fault and "about my date" there is a word that is wrong there..I think it was "me" | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/16/2006 3:23:32 PM |
Im not looking for multiple partners or head games, just a down to earth guy that takes great pride in his appearance, is very confident, dresses and smells great, and one that knows how to treat a lady.
This is a run-on sentence. I would break this down into maybe 3 different sentences. I wish you wouldn't have use the "let fate decide" line. I would really be interested on what your ideal date would be. Your picture....well I can tell that you are very attractive but I'm sure that you could have had me drooling with a clearer picture. Good Luck to you!!! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/16/2006 3:35:53 PM | Hahahaha I thought hard and long on that one. It is'nt complete thogh. It's supposed to say, If you were my homework, Id be doing you on my desk right now!! But really, I am a sweet girl. | |
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majaha
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Joined: 11/18/2005
Msg: 36 | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/17/2006 7:40:18 AM | | angelindevilsden wow, where do I start. Your profile reminds me of a show that Tyra did a few days ago. The topic was "biatches" "and damn proud"! You seem like you have come across a few A$$holes in your time and you are fed up! You know what you want and of course know what you don't want. You are young, beautiful, and goal orientated. That is a huge plus. I would not tell you to change anything because your profile comes across as "real" Good Luck to you!! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/17/2006 7:46:19 AM | | majaha, hello. how are you? The first thing that comes to my mind is...What type of guy are you looking for? You seem very nice with a nice streak of romance in you. I would add the interests that you have in finding someone. Especially looking for a "long-term", you should definitely spell it out for us. So how about a first date idea? I think your profile is headed in the right direction but just need more details. Good Luck to you! | |
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majaha
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Joined: 11/18/2005
Msg: 39 | |
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| Hi there How YOU doin?
Posted: 3/17/2006 8:17:34 AM | I would like you to be honest, as honest as can be, but I think brutal is a bit much. I'm really not trying to be rude, because I really admire men with Honesty, But If you do happen to pick something out that's bad, about my picture or profile, please, keep it to yourself? I had enough people picking things out about me that they didn't like. & now that I'm almost over it. I don't want anyone elses opinion of what they think about me that is bad. I only want nice comments. So Please, if you rate my pic & happen to leave me a message, please make it nice?
That's all I ask.
Thanks, Gini | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 9:47:13 AM | | Hey go ahead rate mine | |
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lohki
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Joined: 7/22/2005
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/17/2006 10:13:03 AM | Majaha- I liked your profile.. and i don't think you need to do anything to it.. the flavor you left is you are fun and like to laugh.. you probably laugh lots and smile.
yaeh you! | |
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lohki
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Joined: 7/22/2005
Msg: 43 | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 10:18:20 AM | butterflywing.. you have many interests and look like you are moving forward in your life, bettering yourself and want someone like~minded..
-you forgot any sort of puncuation..
~all running together, you seem like you were in a hurry to spit it all out.
I would do a quick spell check too..
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/17/2006 12:08:40 PM | Hey Eddie.. I added the changes you suggested. Let me know what you think. Am I being too picky? nasty? (i used the b-word but the net nanny censored me... LOL)
By the way, I think we should give a HUGE HUG to Eddie!!! He offers good suggestions as well as accents the positive.
Thanks Eddie! | |
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| Hi there How YOU doin?
Posted: 3/17/2006 5:36:24 PM |
I only want nice comments. So Please, if you rate my pic & happen to leave me a message, please make it nice?
GINI BEANIE..................no comment! | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 5:43:57 PM | | butteflywing, your profile reminds me of when I was in school. I would forget a homework assignment and would rush to do it between the changing class bell! I think you could have put a little more time into it. Your words are just thrown in there with no sense of direction. Your picture is dark and not clear. Your first date suggestion should be where you show off your creativity. I would start over from scratch. sorry :-( | |
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/17/2006 5:53:43 PM | | sassy and interested, You seem very nice. The old fashioned type with old fashioned morals. That is a good thing. I also believe women should be brought flowers from time to time and their doors opened for them. I have a 2 dogs also. I love them with all my heart but I understand that they are my pets and would never refer to them as my children. That comment may scare someone off, if I can be honest. | |
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