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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/16/2007 2:54:36 PM | Hello cheeky, I think your profile is short and to the point. The only thing that stumped me was "GSOH". I had to think for a few seconds to figure out what that meant. I don't think too many people will understand that. Besides the few grammar errors, It gets the point across.
I don't care much for you picture. Although it is obvious that you are attractive, I'm sure you could select a better picture to post.
I would also post a few more interests. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/16/2007 6:59:20 PM | Hello Heather :-) Ok, I didn't like your heading. It is used way too much. Aren't we all look for Mr./Ms Wright? Be very creative on your heading.
Your "about you" does need a little work. The first few sentences are things that you like to do. You already mentioned those things in your interests. I will tell a little more about yourself and what you like with out mentioning the same words in your interests. For example "I have been to many different places. One of my favorite places to go is....." I would also use paragraphs to make it easier on the eyes.
You are very specific on what you are looking for and that is good. I like you picture, you have a pretty smile. Good luck to you. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/16/2007 11:47:40 PM | Hi Eddie,
You're a guru on here, so I wouldn't miss a chance to be rated by the best.
In reference to an earlier post, my observation is that GSOH seems to be a British thing... they use it more than we do. Thus far, I don't know if that's also true about Down Under... must do more research I suppose.
Good to see you back.  | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/17/2007 2:59:26 AM | | hello lookin4afish. The first thing that jumps out at me is your marital status. If you are "not single or not looking", why do you have it set for "long term"? Your profile is nothing fancy but it gets the point across. It would have been nice if you went a little further into detail about yourself and what you are looking for. Your pictures are ok but I wouldn't have used half pictures where someone else is cut out. That's kinda tacky. Anyway, good luck to you. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/17/2007 3:08:45 AM | | Hey Prettygrneyes, If you laugh like woody woodpecker I will show you my tattoo of him :-) I liked your profile a lot. It was easy to read and worded perfectly. You seem like a very affectionate person who is looking for the same. Add some more pictures and it will be perfect. Good luck to ya. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/17/2007 3:21:25 AM | New Name, how are you? Your profile is another hard one to critique. I felt I have learned a lot about you just by reading it. I was able to sense your passions in life and could relate easily to what you had written.
The only thing that I see that would throw some guys off is the phrase about being with your children every second of the day. Everyone needs a break from the kids every now and than. Since you made that one of your specific points, I also feel that it would be important to share the ages of your children as well. Other than that, AWESOME. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/17/2007 3:37:42 AM | | luvlytina....hola preciosa. You should try to capitolize the first word in a sentence. The sentence about you loving to try something different while visiting othe places did not make much sense. Read that sentence over and phrase it differently. I had to read it 3 times before understanding what you meant. You don't seem like the one to kick back at home and watch a movie. Always having to go out somewhere, that adds up even if it is just $20 bucks a pop. Your pictures are nice and based on looks alone, i'm sure you are not having any problems. I bet you that if you changed your main picture to the second to the last, you will notice a big difference. Good Luck | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/18/2007 2:41:00 AM | | ToWoman. Well what can I say about you? You seem like an all-around fun person to be around. You got the whole package. I enjoyed reading your profile as it painted a very clear picture about you and the type of person you are. I love your main picture that you selected. You resemble an actress from the movie Bad Boys with Will Smith and Martin Lawrence. I don't remember her name but you look exactly like her. You seem very passionate about life. It was a pleasure to read about you. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/18/2007 2:48:50 AM | | Bonnie199. First of all, I think you are very attractive. Your profile just seemed like an un-organized mess. The words just seem to have been thrown together with no structure or organized thought plan. You can use the same thoughts but be more creative and spend a little more time putting it together. Boring, boring, boring | |
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