| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/22/2007 4:27:19 PM | yogi72, I started to get into your profile until I read this line
i work hard and study hard, and would expect the same thing from someone else Made me think when I was younger and my mother would force me to stay in one spot and study my school work! You can do what you want. You don't need to expect anything like that from us. You are not our mothers! Wow that quote really ticked a nerve on me!!!!! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/22/2007 4:38:24 PM | | hi cruztacean. Your profile was ok. Again, nothing stands out that I would remember. I don't like the way you used the sentence about settling for cashiers and that your not looking for doctors and lawyers. I completely understood what you mean but some may perceive it as a non-intentional insult. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/22/2007 4:55:54 PM | | treehousegirl. BORING! I think a second grader could be more creative. What you put in is what you will get back in return. I think you are prettiest in the last photo. Where is your "first date"? | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/22/2007 5:05:46 PM | Chat2u. A man really did a number on you! That's a shame because all men are not **stards. And if you truly mean that, maybe you should start looking for women. Anyway, whatever it was that a man did to you, I will apologize for the male gender. Does that help a bit? If not, heres a hug to go along with it. | |
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elnik
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Joined: 11/1/2006
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/23/2007 7:33:55 PM | | zoo keeper, looks good. Well written and put together. Of course you should add a picture but you already know that. How about a first date idea? That section is blank. Also complete your profile by adding interests in that section. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/23/2007 7:38:16 PM | | whatsausername.......I had a Rock'M-Sock'M Robots! Your profile is long but perfect. FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY! I can tell that you are the life of the party. You can make light out of any bad situation. Just an all-around fun person to be with. When I first saw your profile, I thought to myself.."this is waaaayyy too long." But it was clever and very funny and made me want to know more. So I checked your posts in the Forums and couldn't stop laughing at some of your stuff. LOL Great profile, Great person, Great sense of humor! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/23/2007 7:47:39 PM | surprisemerecon. You love those "commas" don't you? GET RID OF THEM! Capitolize the first word in each sentence. So you checked out the profile writing tips? I think you need to check it out again.
Break your profile up in at least three paragraphs. The first paragraph normally describes you. The second normally describes what you are looking for. The third paragraph can be a final thought or something creative that will grab our attention. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/23/2007 9:22:27 PM | | Jude52. I think it's too short. You don't have to give your life story but I think you should put a little more into it than 3 sentences. Your main photo is blurry and your others are just tooo black. Find some that are clear and more colorful shots. I see that you love fishing. Do you have any pictures of you on a boat or showing any type of activities? | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/24/2007 10:22:11 AM | Thanks bunches Eddie,
Funny....Truffles on the other profile thingy told me it was tooo long so I shortened it lol...But a man's point of veiw is good. I will try and make more pictures with light colors...I tend to like the color black , so I wear it a lot. Truffles suggested the same on that subject, I have some of me fishing and catching a good Bass but they are a few yrs old.
Thanks again, I will repost when I update the profile and C what you think again.
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/24/2007 11:04:41 AM | awwwwwwwww .... thanks Eddie, not only for the profile review but for the hug!
Have updated my profile if you wanna have a look. I don't think you'll like it!
Oh, and thanks for reviewing everyone else's profile too. I can't believe how much time and thought you put into each review. You are amazing!
Here's a hug from me and all on this forum .... | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/24/2007 12:01:57 PM | Hey Eddie,
I lightened the pic's up a bit....till I can have some more made and added a few words more to the profile. What do you think?
The pic with the white shirt on is small and it is strectched on here that is why it is fuzzy...But I will have more made soon.
Thanks,
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yogi72
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Joined: 1/8/2007
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/28/2007 1:33:11 AM | hi
i work hard and study hard and would expect the same thing from someone else
i put this in simply becasue it seemed like alot of the guys i talked to had part time jobs or no jobs. no interest in moving forward. it was not meant to be condescending or anything of that nature. all i wanted was to let guys know, that if they don't have a good work ethic, we probably won't hit it off. I do work hard and cannot understand why someone else would not. | |
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| Hit ME BRO
Posted: 3/28/2007 9:59:19 PM | Give it a shot needconstructive critzim | |
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| ellebk
Posted: 4/4/2007 7:30:23 PM | Hello ellebk.
Your profile has way too many "I's"! It is good but i would re-word most of the sentences that start with "I". While you are doing that, I would break your "about me" section into 4-5 seperate paragraphs. Your profile is a little long but I think it would be more appealing on the eyes once your thoughs are seperated. You pictures are nice and you are a very attractive woman. | |
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| mischevious imp
Posted: 4/4/2007 7:45:47 PM | miscevious imp,
<div class="quote">I'm blonde and cuddly If your not blonde, don't mention it!
<div class="quote">(even though my pictures show im not its my natural colour) take this out of the "()" and just add a comma.
<div class="quote"> now before youu run screaming for the hills I mean just cuddly some thing that will keep you warm on a night. This sentence does not make any sence. what are you trying to say here? spelling and grammar issue here
<div class="quote">I enjoy lots of differnt things in life and my taste in music is very varied. Double space after periods and "very varied" does not sound correct together. Say that 5 times real fast! different is spelled wrong too. I'm not going to go any further until you take you profile and run it through a spell checker. That will help you with grammar and spelling.
Also, the short walks comment makes you sound lazy! Take out the dark, blurry picture. If you can't see it, why put it up? Ok, I'm done! | |
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