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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/18/2006 8:03:43 PM | Hey Sassy and interested.
Why would you care how other or eddie would rate you? If you think you look good, then you do. It's all about you!!!! Image is everything, ONLY if it means something..... | |
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/18/2006 8:29:40 PM | Hey Tarella!
I agree with eddie's critique, if there was any. All he saw was what he wanted to see with his witted mind, but he was not honest; however, because your profile spoke with accuracy, brevity, and eloquently to the point, with class. | |
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/18/2006 9:10:07 PM | Hi Sassy and interested!
"I have lead a pretty simple life so far. I am looking to get out and meet people.
I am up for learning new things. I am only looking for friends right now and whatever happens happens. I have 10 tattoos and 7 piercings. All the tattoos mean alot to me as they represent my life and how I lived it. If you would like to know what they are, you are going to have to ask. As far as the piercings. I have 3 in each ear and 1 in the belly button. I have a big love for animals. I have a female dog (bouvier) and 4 cats that I have rescued and helped make them better. Anything you might want to know just ask me I will be honest.
First DateOn the first date:
I would like a man to pick me up with a dozen flowers(any kind), take me to his car and open the door for me. I would like to go for a walk on the beach holding hands. After the beach maybe go to have a glass of wine in front of a fireplace. I would then like to see the sunset and what happens with the sun down leaves to the imagination. I am only looking for friends right now and if a date was to happen it would be with a friend. So for that I would like this to happen."
Do you want honesty? Eddie wasn't very honest with his critique. May I suggest this and this is ONY a suggestion......
Rewrite>>>>
I am very humble person who has lived a simplistic life, thus far. I am very interested in meeting new people, as friends for now, free of expectations. But, if it leads to romance, then I will be open to the idea and consider the option.
I have tattoos and piercings that are very meaningful and important, as each represents and signify how I live my life. If you're interested in their representation, symbol, and meaning, please ask, and I'll be more than happy to share this with you.
I have a big heart when it comes to animals. I have a female dog (bouvier) and 4 cats that I have rescued and gave them a loving home. I am very honest and open, all you need to do is ask me.
On the first date:
I would like a man to pick me up with a dozen flowers of his own choosing; walk me to his car, and opens the door like a gentleman that he is. I would like to go for a walk on the beach while holding hands; talking and laughing, and whispering sweet nothings in each other ears. Afterwards, we continue the conversation while sipping a glass of wine in front of a fireplace, and then watch the sunset, as we stroll the beach feeling the sands with our feet and your arm wrapped around me while keeping each other warm. When the sunset, well.....let your imagination take control. However, my interests lies only with a friend right now, but please understand that this is how I would like this to happen. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/19/2006 5:40:20 AM | Hi Eddie.
I'm new to the site and havent had a chance to write my profile yet. I would love to have some positve and negative pointers on writing a profile. I havent written one. I'm new to this. Thanks, I apprechaiate it! Anyone else who wants to add anything can message me. Id like to know what people like to see on a profile and what they dont. Everyone is unique and has a different opinion I'd like to hear some.  | |
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