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 mishy_mo
Joined: 1/9/2008
Msg: 726
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Check me out eddie :) Thanks in advance.
 joual
Joined: 1/7/2008
Msg: 727
Please critique my profile - looking for your point of view
Posted: 2/24/2008 7:21:34 AM
eddie0221:
Please look at my profile and make any additional suggestions for changes that may have been overlooked.

Thanks for the generous donation of your time and free advice.

Joual
 redheaded vixen
Joined: 7/27/2006
Msg: 728
Please critique my profile - looking for your point of view
Posted: 2/27/2008 8:46:22 PM
Hi Eddie could please also critique mine..I have tried to redo it a couple of times but it still sounds a weekly grocery list.

rhv
 1Brendan
Joined: 2/4/2008
Msg: 729
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/2/2008 12:48:36 PM
was wondering if you can rewrite my profile. Anything I need to add or take out or re word. Thank you for your time
 WANTINGTOFINDREAL
Joined: 8/23/2007
Msg: 730
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/2/2008 1:01:23 PM
Ok,Iknow that I have asked for a review on different threads but still have had no success. MAYBE you can help.

Thanks
 eddie0221
Joined: 2/2/2006
Msg: 731
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Posted: 1/2/2011 2:01:33 AM
Hello Everyone! It's been a few years but I'm back with some time on my hands. Anyone want their profile reviewed??
 LittleMissImpossible
Joined: 12/23/2010
Msg: 732
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 1/2/2011 3:06:59 AM
Sure, review mine.
 joey_joe_jo
Joined: 12/26/2010
Msg: 733
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 1/2/2011 8:52:34 AM
Hey,

would like a *brutally* honest assessment of my profile....
 eddie0221
Joined: 2/2/2006
Msg: 734
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LittleMissImpossible
Posted: 1/2/2011 10:39:59 AM
Are you kidding? What am I reviewing? "Just Forums" 1,000x! I am not aloud to base a rewiew just on your photo...so I won't!
 eddie0221
Joined: 2/2/2006
Msg: 735
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Joey joe jo
Posted: 1/2/2011 11:05:52 AM
Hello, How are you?

As far as your interests section, "good food" and "good TV" does not give much to the imagination. Your profile is way too long and too informative. Leave some details for mutual conversation. Your spelling and grammar is almost perfect. Just a couple of spelling errors. In paragraph one, "realised" is suppose to be realized. The word "cliched" is actually spelled "clich'ed".

Also saying that you can spend all day watching "good TV" and that you love just hanging out at home screams "Couch Potato". Update your pictures and put new ones up. You have some serious compressing to do. Your profile is boring, boring, boring!

Good Luck!!
 GinaMT
Joined: 3/24/2010
Msg: 736
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Posted: 1/2/2011 11:24:25 AM
Can you review mine please!!!
 eddie0221
Joined: 2/2/2006
Msg: 737
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ginamt
Posted: 1/2/2011 12:27:33 PM

I have a lot of time on my hands so I'm looking for someone who isn't married to his job or other obligations.

Looking at what you wrote as your profession, I will guess that you do not have a job. If I don't spend my every spare second with you, that will be a problem. You would want to come first before my Job and my family!

Having "a lot of time on your hands" is not a good way to start your profile. You come off to me as "clingy" and have to be the center of attention.

Your pictures, although nice, need to go. I can't stand when someone puts a bunch of pictures up that are exactly the same. Keep one or two but add some different ones.

How is there a good way of giving people a hard time and teasing them? There is no such thing as "in a good way".
 GinaMT
Joined: 3/24/2010
Msg: 738
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ginamt
Posted: 1/2/2011 12:43:42 PM
Well, I am looking for someone who can give me a lot of attention lol ..not someone who is too tied up with work and kids.

There are good ways of teasing, if you can get that person learn to laugh at them self. I think anyone who can laugh at them self will never run out of something to laugh about, and to me laughter is the best medicine. I tease in a fun way not in a picking on someone and trying to make them feel bad about their self. If someone doesn't get that part then I wouldn't want to be with them. I despise people who are too serious all the time.

I do have a job but I have a lot of free time, so I would prefer someone who has a lot of free time as well. There are people out there that have a life other than their job and family.
Family is important , but it shouldn't take up all your time. Also, a lot of people my age have kids that are grown and on their own who don't require constant care.

Thanks for your review, but it really did me no good.
 mickyB910
Joined: 8/6/2010
Msg: 739
please review my profile
Posted: 1/2/2011 12:44:53 PM
your help and opinion would be nice
Thnx
 MaineMan22
Joined: 8/23/2009
Msg: 740
please review my profile
Posted: 1/2/2011 12:51:29 PM
A review from you would be very helpful! Thanks in advance!
 joey_joe_jo
Joined: 12/26/2010
Msg: 741
Joey joe jo
Posted: 1/2/2011 6:34:45 PM
Hey eddie,

I know this is pedantic but I had to write it. As an Australian I use proper English, the Queens English. Even though I am not a monarchist or believe Australia should be part of the commonwealth I believe in the correct use of language so in my world realised is actually spelled with an s. Also I believe you mean clichéd not clich'ed and when assimilated into English loan words usually lose their accent. For example resume is not written as résumé.

Anyway, thanks for the advice on the profile and I hope you don't take the above as offensive. Those little squiggly lines below words I know are spelled correctly just incense me.
 Cole71676
Joined: 10/12/2008
Msg: 742
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 1/2/2011 7:33:23 PM
Eddie,
Would appreciate a critique of mine.
 Leo1709
Joined: 1/23/2011
Msg: 743
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/10/2011 10:34:58 PM
Hey Eddie,

Are you still doing profile reviews? Can You check mine out? I've made a lot of improvements. Would like to know what you think about it.
 swimmingbackwards
Joined: 2/25/2011
Msg: 744
Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/11/2011 4:44:19 AM
I loved your profile!
 kynurse83
Joined: 5/11/2010
Msg: 745
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/11/2011 11:05:14 AM
Go for it it'll be interesting to get an outside opinion.
 AzenSensation
Joined: 3/5/2011
Msg: 746
Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/11/2011 11:09:21 PM
go for it. i'm at a loss right now.
 eddie0221
Joined: 2/2/2006
Msg: 747
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Posted: 2/17/2014 2:53:05 AM
Are these forums still on the site??
 tatersprout
Joined: 8/23/2013
Msg: 748
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Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 2/17/2014 10:34:18 AM
Nope. They've been deleted.

Might need to go somewhere else to open up your lemonade stand.
 Afro-Centric
Joined: 7/23/2012
Msg: 749
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Posted: 2/23/2014 5:39:02 PM
I know it's been a long time since this thread started but if you're still up to the challenge, check mine out.
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