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1964
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Joined: 1/19/2006
Msg: 80 | |
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1964
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Joined: 1/19/2006
Msg: 81 | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 6:47:17 PM | | butterflywing, how are you today? Ok, your profile seemed rushed to me. It had a few run-on sentences that seemed to go on forever. You have not mentioned what you are looking for in a date or relationship. I would try and make it easier for us guys to read. Use breaks and shorten some of those sentences. :-) | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 6:59:53 PM | | Ok first of all I must say that for 47, you are smoking! I think you profile is too personal. Some things are better left unsaid. For example, "certian circumstances are keeping me here" That is a loaded statement. You are obviously looking for friends so tell us all the things that you like to do. Good luck to you! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 7:09:49 PM | | creehazy, how are you? Well, looking at your profile I'm guessing that you just want me to rate your pictures? First of all, you look a lot younger than your age. You have very nice nails. Your pictures are very mysterious looking and I'm curious to know what kind of animal that is on your finger. Overall, very attractive. :-) | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 8:41:18 PM | | redflash, good evening to you. Well it seems like you are a very romantic person. You come off to be very passionate and sincere. I don't see much wrong with your profile except the lack of a picture. You are a tall red-head. A lot of guys go crazy over that! Good luck to you :-) | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 8:50:27 PM | Hello april. If that is your full name on your profile, change it. Trust me, you do not want everyone knowing your full name. You give specific area's in your town which can pretty much let psychos point you out. Take out the names of the coffee shop or bars, whatever they are.
I know that you are single. I pretty much know your first and last name. I know that you have your own place. I know that there is no man around. That's not good. Get rid of your complete profile! If you are going to keep it the way it is, take out "i'm recently single". It makes you sound like you are on the rebound. Also talk about what type of guy you are looking for. | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:00:42 PM | | citywoman, WOW! Funny, sexy, and smart are words that come to mind. Your profile was a break from the usual. It was witty, well thought, and very informative. Do you have better pictures? Some that aren't to fuzzy? That's is the only thing that I see wrong. Well that and your age limit :-) I'm only 32 :-( Great job! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:11:43 PM | | laconnectionfrancaise. I would re-phrase the loneliness part. Something like this maybe "I am very satisfied in my life and looking for someone to compliment my lifestyle." Your profile comes across as negative. I would show more of a sense of humor. Your picture looks like a mugshot. You have alot of interests and activities listed. Do you have any photos of you scuba diving? Or anything else that shows some adventure? Anyway, good luck to you. | |
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:18:34 PM | | SINCERE SWEETIE, Well what can I say? You sound like a sincere sweetie..lol I found your profile very conventional. It was good, don't get me wrong but you want to stand out from the rest. The only thing that stands out to me is your picture. You are very attractive. Lets work on making the profile stand out from the rest! | |
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:28:10 PM | legwon
i dont like junkies, alcoholics, or ppl that think there all that.
Who does? Take this sentence out. Capitolize the first words in your sentences. Tell the ladies what you are looking for in a long-term relationship. Your profile is like a resume. You are being judged soley on the words that you have written. Put some more time into it. Practice makes perfect. You seem like you love your daughter very much. That is a turn on for a lot of women. Good luck to you | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:35:16 PM | | sun kissed island girl. Be yourself! Try not to be negative and start each sentence with "I". Start out by telling us a little about yourself but don't over do it. Leave some for the guessing. Explain in detail what type of person you are looking to meet. The key is to try and be original. Us guys look at many profiles so you want one that is going to stand out from the rest. Take a look at Citywoman's profile. That is one of the best profiles that I have read. Good luck to you. Pictures are nice BTW. you are very pretty and I'm sure you will do just fine! | |
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legwon
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Joined: 1/27/2006
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| Eddie I could use some critiquing
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:38:32 PM | i appreciate the review eddy. 
>> Who does?
not to say that anyone does.. just that some ppl would settle for that. i wont.
however,
Your profile is like a resume.
my resume looks like crap too.. lol.
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:39:51 PM | | bakerybabe, "attraction starts with a photo" You might be right on this one. So change your main photo to the last one. You are very sexy in that photo! Your profile is missing everything about YOU! Tell me about you! | |
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| Ladies, do you want brutal honesty on your profile??
Posted: 3/21/2006 9:47:14 PM | | enigma, Is that your HS photo posted as your main photo? Anyway, you seem like a fun person to hang around with. Do you have an ideal first date? I'm sure it would be goofy wouldn't it? Tell me more about what turns you on in a guy or a relationship. What are you looking for? So it's been a few days now, any luck? Well good luck! | |
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