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Posted: 3/16/2006 2:36:38 PM | You are cool and worthy only of only an equality based relationship. I'm not judging you, I just relate to the way you worded the discription of yourself.
What kind of animals do you have and do you ride horses Ms. Sassy and interesting? | |
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Posted: 3/16/2006 5:29:35 PM | I think your ad would sound more alluring if you told your audience why and what makes you 'outgoing', 'spontaneous', maybe even what your tatooes mean to you.
What animals do you like?
You seem to have gone to a lot of trouble to be unique (10 tat's and 7 holes) but reveal nothing of it.
Since you asked, I won't comment on the pics.
As the some poster above hinted at, you could use a little help with developing a charm or charisma in your ad. Despite the fact that I may find you physically appealing, I find the bland style of self-expression just the opposite.
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Posted: 3/16/2006 9:19:16 PM | | You should definately not use the term "a few extra pounds" saying that makes you seem like a fatty and you definately (evident from your pictures) do not have a few extra pounds. You are average. Hope this helps. | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 6:01:10 AM | Name and intro line - Your name is good. I don't feel like I've seen it before. Your intro line is kinda boring, AND YOU SHOULD SKIP THE ALL CAPS BECAUSE IT MAKES IT LOOK LIKE YOU'RE SHOUTING.
Pictures - Ah, webcam pics. These generally are blurry, provide bad lighting or they are - in your case - rather grainy. I'd have a friend with a digital camera come over and take some shots of you in different areas with different lighting. One photo is always better than no photos, and more is better than one, so even if you don't get more pictures, you were right to post as many as you did.
Interests - A smidgen thin, here. It's always good to provide concrete, specific interests that set you apart rather than general interests that could apply to anyone. Don't tell us that you like listening to music. Tell us that you love the Doors, or Ray Charles, or you're a closet Neil Diamond fan. Don't tell us that you like watching movies. Tell us that you love Hitchcock films. Or watching the Sci-Fi Channel.
About Me - You haven't really told us very much about yourself. I know you like piercings, tattoos and animals. Strike the sentence, "I am not good at describing myself so bare with me."
What you have said so far is good, but fill it out. Some profiles suffer from being too long. Yours, right now, is too short.
I know you said that you didn't want to hear about spelling and grammar, but you did spell "spontaneous" two different ways in the first two sentences. Also, be careful of skipping spaces between words and punctuation.Like this.
First Date - What first date? You have no text here. You shouldn't skimp out on this part, because it does tell someone who might want to meet you what you like, and whether or not you are creative, or simply leave the dates to someone else. | |
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majaha
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Joined: 11/18/2005
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Posted: 3/17/2006 1:15:32 PM | | i appreciate the responces so if some one can tell me what really needs to be done and be consistant as i am being told to not put date section in if only looking for friends and then i am being told to put it in please be straight with what i should do | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 3:15:53 PM | | It is rather one dimentional. I am confident thatere is much more to you then hoels in your ears and ink in your skin. I am not being judgemental, but hopefully constructive. Not much as to who YOU are other then a canvass for body art. | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 3:26:41 PM | | i am satisfied and am putting use to it. It is just everytime i do take the advice and change it someone else does not like it being that way. so all i am asking is consistancy that is all. if u were here for the whole thing u would have saw that but thanx for posting | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 4:03:55 PM | Though some (even many) would disagree with me, being a photographer, I look for special effects. What I like about your pic's is the hazyness of them. To me they beg a question, how much more pretty is this girl than the pictures allow me to see? Sometimes a tease can be more interesting than the whole enchelada being upfront.
Weight is something we all see differently. To some "Average" is a little overweight. To others it's just they're not satisfied with who they are. The important thing here is how you feel about your profile. Mine is quite to the point (I think) in that I am only looking for one thing. Selfishly. But that's ok. Because someone is going to read it and say that's exactly what they are looking for. Most will say "What a Jerk". Well I guess I can't please everyone, nor would I try. There's only one person to please, SELF.
As for your profile, it came across to me soft. I like soft. If you were local and I were younger and single I would be interested in exploring you. Well, these things are not. But as for you and your prof. Don't worry about it. It is who you are.  | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 8:23:25 PM |
so all i am asking is consistancy that is all.
ummmm Hello?? You are asking a whole bunch of DIFFERENT INDIVIDUALS who do not know you or each other at all and asking them to be consistent?? How is that possible?
Have you ever heard the saying.. "you can please all of the people some of the time and some of the people ALL of the time.. but never all of the people ALL of the time".... ???
Why should we be consistent??? Take what you like or feel is appropriate and make YOUR OWN DECISIONS!!
Can you even make a DECISION on your own????? | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 8:31:04 PM | I like your profile and agree mostly with bandito. Everything was fine until you got
to the first date part. That might be asking alot for a first date, walking and holding hands and all that jazz. I think alot of people are uncomfortable as it is on first dates and those
kind of expectations from someone you have never met might be to much for either you or your date. Maybe simplify it a bit. Don't get me wrong we all want the perfect first date.. , but unless you have been friends with this person for a good amount of time your just to busy trying to figure out whether you like this person or not. All and all I think its good. I hope this is the kind critique you wanted. Happy fishing.
James
P.S. would you mine reveiwing mine and giving me an honest feedback! | |
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Posted: 3/17/2006 9:21:37 PM | | I appreciate the responces. I would just like to say as far as the date section I am only looking for friends and if their was a first date then yes that is what i would expect as he would be a friend. Thanx again for the responces | |
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Posted: 3/18/2006 2:41:29 AM |
Lizbits U r a very negative person.
Lizbits is a very positive person and a good critic and you are asking for advice and people are kind enough to give them.
After all this is your second thread whining for a review. People have graciously offered their advice in which you have been negative. | |
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Posted: 3/18/2006 7:38:43 AM | | classy and bandito Y must u always come to where I am being appreciative about responces and bring the thread down. Please do not waste my time. Thanx anyways | |
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majaha
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Joined: 11/18/2005
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Posted: 3/18/2006 9:17:16 AM | | it is my belief that when anyone asks a question they should be prepared for an answer.....not matter what that answer may be. Dont let anything negative get you down just try and pull out information that is going to help you get what you are looking for and be thankful someone took the time to respond to you.....negitive or positive. | |
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