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Posted: 7/4/2006 10:00:23 AM | sibertiger,
Questions for you to ask yourself, then post the answers in the 'About Me' section.
#1. Why should I e-mail you?
#2. If you could only take three items on a long (6 month) journey...what three items would you take and why?
#3. How do you feel about women?
#4. What is your most wild experience.
#5. What is you idea of an exotic vacation?
Remove the blurry photo of yourself and replace with five new ones. All must be clearly in focus and should include the following:
1. Close up of face with nice smile
2. Full Body shot
3. Photo of you outdoors.
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Posted: 7/4/2006 10:04:04 AM | RileyRouge,
Bryantinfla,
Sorry for hijacking your thread. You have an amazing stamina that I admire. Have enjoyed reading your reviews. Good work you are doing
No hun, not looking for a review. Just wanted to say Good Reviews you give
Well you just made my day Riley. Thank you. I've had a few people tell me that they have started receiving e-mails as a result of the changes they've made and that just delights me beyond belief.
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Posted: 7/4/2006 10:24:04 AM |
I think your profile is incredible. Seriously. It is kinda dark and surreal but you are consistent with that theme throughout, so it works.
ONLY thing I could suggest as an improvment would be to add a body shot. It can be as ethereal as your other shots if you like, just need to see the whole package.
Wow - thank you... seriously...!
I *am* kinda dark and surreal so the theme is 'me'... and the body shot... Hmm. #
I'll have a think on that one. Don't want to put people off, the "whole package" has a few extra bits thown in that I didn't order!
(oh and I SO don't mean I have extra limbs or random un-female genitalia littered about my person - I'm a mother of four and you can TELL, you know what I mean?!!)
Thanks very much for the positivity though!!
Bring on the men!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 7/5/2006 5:34:52 AM |
Wow! I'll stay anyway,but good suggestions. I did change it however. You were right, and I'm not going for negative. I do have a phenomenal sense of humor, just not alot pics. It happens, but I'll ask friends and family for couple,"happy ones"! Thank you for your time.
GREAT improvements so far Mikey...really great. Looking forward to that close up of your face with a beautiful smile!
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Posted: 7/5/2006 5:38:14 AM | mcmlxii,
I think your profile is nice and sweet. Not exciting or intriguing though and I think that is a problem.
Your photos are fine, however, you are missing the main one that will attract women. A nice close up of your face so we can see those eyes that everyone says is your best feature. SHOW US! We also want to see teeth. So, please take a close up of your face with a nice smile, NO HAT, and ensure it's not too dark like the others. Would also like to see an outdoors photo.
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Posted: 7/5/2006 5:40:39 AM |
Allright, I have done as you suggested. I will be getting some new photos of me baring my teeth. Do you think snarling would be too much?. Lol, just kidding. I am really thankfull for your input. Please tell me what you think of it now.
OH NO....what is that second photo? NO, no, no, no. Please remove. You can put one of your cowboy hat photos up, just don't use it as the primary photo.
This new primary is a very good shot of you. Like a lot.
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Posted: 7/5/2006 8:30:54 AM | redtauri,
Your pictures aren't that great. Web cam photos, right? They all have a red haze to them and they are blurry. None of them are flattering. Here's what I think you need.
1. Close up with a smile. I wanna see your teeth.
2. A full body shot.
3. Something outdoors with the sun, and trees, and the blue sky.
Your text was very hard to read. It was like two or three continuous run on sentences. I have no idea what you were saying. Consider rewriting and doing a spell check.
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Posted: 7/5/2006 8:35:10 AM | phuquit,
You need a visit from the "Queer Eye for the Straight Guy" team. Seriously! I know you used to be a biker, but since you no longer are...perhaps it's time for a make-over.
I'm not a big fan of any of your photos.
You have a legitimate profession. Why don't you list it?
You do write well and I enjoyed reading your 'About me' section.
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Posted: 7/5/2006 11:00:23 AM | gent72,
Photos are decent, but you need one with teeth showing. Want to see a genuine smile. Also need a body shot and one taken out doors. You live in Wyoming for God's sake....where's that big sky? Or is that Montana?
Occupation - I don't want to know later. Tell me now.
'About me" - Whooaaaaa.....WTF did you say? I got so confused by the run on sentences, lack of punctuation and misspelled words. And that last sentence...what was it supposed to mean? Clueless.
Re write, run spell check and have someone give it a reality check before you post.
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Posted: 7/5/2006 1:44:08 PM |
There we go! I finally got my profile all spiffy'd up. It's worked quite well already, got a couple messages in the last week. Gotta love getting messages from others first!
Thank ya's for your help! If you have any other constructive critism, I would gladly listen to it and take it under consideration!
LOOKS MARVELOUS! Great Job. I'm so happy to hear that you are getting e-mails now. Woo Hoo!!!
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Posted: 7/5/2006 3:25:43 PM |
You have a legitimate profession. Why don't you list it?
Quite simply because I don't make any money from it, hopefully this will change, but at the moment I live on benefits (welfare I believe it's called in America). I don't want to put writer as profesion as it would give the reader the impression that they could get their claws into someone who is highly paid and can give them something akin to the Hollywood lifestyle. I believe in being honest on here and I know putting writer as occupation isn't lying, but somehow it feels like it should be. | |
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Posted: 7/5/2006 8:16:57 PM | Questions for you to ask yourself, then post the answers in the 'About Me' section.
#1. Why should I e-mail you?
All my answers to this seem cheesy to me....
cause I'm a nice guy
cause you're tired of being alone
cause you want a guy who will love you for you and treat you like a queen
#2. If you could only take three items on a long (6 month) journey...what three items would you take and why?
Not sure I'd ever go on a 6 month journey alone.
#3. How do you feel about women?
I wouldn't be here if I didn't want to share lifes experiences with one, not sure what you're looking for here. I'm not looking for anyone to control and want no one to control me, maybe I just don't know how to explain it.
#4. What is your most wild experience.
Roller coasters.
#5. What is you idea of an exotic vacation?
Define exotic.
As for photos, I have extremely few, as I'm not photogenic. I'll see what I can do about getting this one a little better since its my most recent ( about 2 years old), but my only other picture I have was taken 10 years ago. | |
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