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Joined: 3/13/2006
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 9:23:32 AM | clairdloon,
I absolutely love your profile. You have some wonderful photographs of yourself and have shown quite a variety. I'm quite impressed.
Your 'About Me' section is well written, informative and not ****y or negative at all.
BTW...I too LOVE the movie, Shirley Valentine. Spoke to you, didn't it girl?
Good Luck, whether it be in St. Augustine or possibly...Greece??  | |
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 9:27:35 AM | RandomSanta,
Love your header.
You are a handsome man but one picture does not cut it. See my review above^^ and try to mirror some of the shots she has. Nice outdoor photo, body shots and close up of face with a big smile.
Your 'About Me' section is not very exciting and you kind of set up the reader to feel that way. I understand that you need someone who likes cats, because you have one, but why do they need to like coke? That's weird.
Otherwise...looks good.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 9:32:39 AM | jjkk,
I see two glaring problems with your profile. #1 you don't have a good pictue of yourself. It's way too blurry. Also, you need more photos. See last two reviews and follow same advice.
#2 You are 34 years old and you have your preference setting to 18 year old women. In the words of my own 23 year old daughter..EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
If you are really into 18 year olds...good luck. If you aren't then you are probably turning off all the women your own age who now think of you as a cradle snatcher.
Something to think about.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 9:40:03 AM | budley,
Header is negative. Make it lure the women in, not piss them off.
Third picture should be your primary one. Not the tattoo.
Your 'About Me' section is supposed to be humorous and tongue-in-cheek but I'm wondering if you aren't losing many of your readers before they even get to the end. Kind of a turn-off.
In the 'First Date' section you describe a first date quite nicely, then you go and describe other dates. Don't. Just the first date.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 9:44:12 AM |
Bryantinfl,
Thank you for your kind words (positive feedback coming from a woman is always GOOD!) and your suggestion. I will do as you say!
May the goddess of love Aphrodite look favorably upon your quest and grant you what you're looking for! :)
You're quite welcome. I hope Aphrodite listens to your requests and is feeling very generous. Thank you! | |
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 11:42:14 AM | Bryantinfl,
Thank you for reviewing my profile, i was expecting alot worse, but was supprised and pleased with your input, and advice, i now have a didgital camera, so just got to get someone to take some outside shots,
Your doing a great job here, as i have spent some time reading through your advice to people,
well done and keep it up, your a star !!! | |
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 3:34:43 PM | justagreatgal,
Ok, you are a beautiful woman and you have a GREAT photo of yourself but you must add more. Need a body shot for sure and just a couple more photos to show us some versatility.
'About me'...All I know 'about you' is that you are a mom with a family who loves you. So what? Who cares? If I am a man looking for a 'greatgal', I want to know about the woman, not the mother or the daughter.
Tell us about you. Who are YOU? What makes you tick? Why are you such a great gal? C'mon, you know what you need to put here. Sit down and give it some thought and sell yourself. If you're such a great gal, convince me.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 7/9/2006 3:40:29 PM | dariqueen,
Bryantinfl,
I'd love you to take another peek at mine...I really appreciated your feedback earlier, and I've changed some things.
Thanks!
I don't recall reviewing you before this. Did you have a different screenname?
Well, at any rate your profile looks fine except for the photo. My personal opinion is to NEVER put your children on the internet - EVER, but especially on a dating website. You just NEVER know what could happen.
So, I would remove that photo and start over with new ones. If you've read any of my previous reviews, you will know what type I recommend.
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| And a quick clarification...
Posted: 7/9/2006 3:43:26 PM | Original Beautiful Blue,
Wow...uh, you need to remove the last picture immediately. It's not flattering at all.
The 'Interest' and 'About Me' sections are not good. If all you are interested in AT 23 YEARS OLD is children, that is a scary thing. I'll bet it's scaring away all the elegible men out there in your area.
Talk about YOU. Not your kids.
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| Love the work you're doing.
Posted: 7/9/2006 3:45:30 PM |
Bryantinfl, I'll make sure to get some body shots in there. And I'll edit the text. (any other comments on the text?)
VERY nice. Great job. No changes needed. Looking forward to the new photos. | |
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