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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 8/3/2006 2:49:44 PM | well, I deleted the whole revision mess for now anyway...
This is one of the best lines in your whole profile and quite frankly on anyone's profile, EVAH! Also, not draw a blank stare when asked what the last book you read was.
I realize this weeds out the masses, but hey, that's the intention.
wow...the highest compliment from clearly the master of professional profile reviewism...
THANKS!!!
Some well meaning person suggested I not be too vague with my occupation. Two three line paragraphs are hardly overkill.
Another well meaning individual suggested expanding the kids thing a bit.
off thread got some good advise on putting that together a bit better. You know who you are...Thanks
Well, all I can say at this point is if that sexy, funny, intelligent (restraining the idea for more adjectives here)---AMAZING woman in Florida...is pursuing some additional conversations...maybe the only revision I'll need is the delete function.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 8/4/2006 9:44:59 AM | wifeymaterial35,
I'm so confused. Your screenname and header say wifey. Your occupation is housewife, yet you are claiming to be single and looking for a long term relationship. WTF? I don't get it.
Don't you see the discrepancies?
PHOTOS: You are a beautiful woman. And you take gorgeous photos. Kudos!
INTEREST: instead of one sentence with a few items referenced. Why not type them in the way POF recommends? One interest separated by a comma? This way it all lines up nice and neat in 'readable' columns?
ABOUT ME: WOW...this was so negative and demanding that I would have deleted the entire thing if I'd had the ability. Truly. It was awful. Look, with online dating, you have to accept the bad with the good. So you get a man occasionally who doesn't send a photo...don't stress. Just block him and delete his message. Same thing with anyone who is rude, disrespectful or ugly.
Don't scare away the rest of the (GREAT) men because you're tired of the losers finding you too.
Seriously rethink the whole 'About Me' section. Please.
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 8/4/2006 3:05:22 PM | Hi again, Bryantinfl - I've tweaked my profile a bit, and was wondering what you think of the changes. I'll have new photos posted as soon as my friend finds the usb cable for her camera, and I still have the Glamour Shot up (for now - don't worry, it's going, lol). I also changed my username from bigbrowneyes257 - too ordinary. I may be a lot of things, but ordinary sure ain't one of 'em.  | |
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Posted: 8/7/2006 7:17:22 AM | theengineerguy,
HEADER: Great, love it
PHOTO: Like the photo (SINGULAR) but it doesn't show your eyes. Need to expand this section. Want a body shot and some outdoors photos.
ABOUT ME: At first glance, I thought it was too long, but I changed my mind after reading it. Very clever and interesting read.
FIRST DATE: Witty, but too much reference to alcohol.
jmho
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| WHY DOESN'T ANYONE CONTACT ME? And other cries for help. Profiles reviewed here for free!
Posted: 8/7/2006 8:16:39 AM | Was wondering if you could give my writing a read through. I made a thread asking for help and learned that it was best to just get rid of all the pictures I had, which explains why the one I have now has me in a cap and glasses. It was the best one I have (which is ironic as my hair and eyes are my best features).
I've changed it quite a bit this morning with the help of others but I enjoy the reviews you've done for others and would appreciate your input. | |
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