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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/20/2008 1:37:19 PM | His photo has the shocked expression of a blow-up doll.
And instead of saying in the first-date paragraph: "let's do something exciting and different", how about putting an exciting/different idea in there.
Other than that, if I were a chick, I'd totally do him. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/25/2008 10:51:18 AM | hmm........ ........
....ok...i give up!  
theres absolutely nuthin wrong with this gals profile!! she's perfect and i think i will order my next starbucks just like hers 
...i think she's a floridian pretending to be a californian or something...haha..so i am going to let that cat out of the bag right now! wahine is just one cool chica from what i can tell from her profile! | |
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SomSD
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Joined: 5/12/2008
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/25/2008 9:59:37 PM | Dumb it down. Shorten it. Add some "lolz" and "omgs" and add periods in triplicates throughout your paragraphs.
It's been scientifically proven that good guys don't like pretty girls who are smarter than them and the really really good ones don't have the attention span to get passed the first paragraph.
You can't argue with science.
- Som
(You're profile is spot on. Maybe a little elaboration on the first date... are you a coffee/walk kind of girl, a dinner/drinks kind of girl, a ice cream/movie kind of girl, etc.) | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/25/2008 10:24:03 PM | Hmmm the biggest thing I see wrong with his profile is that IT"S BETTER THAN MINE!! Haha I liked it. Kinda reminded me of me hahaha. The part where he said if you can't make fun of me, you can't keep me interested was just like me and it was funny!!
Good Job Dude!! Do you mind if I just copy and paste it to mine?  | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/25/2008 11:32:34 PM | chsmith112
You don't need to borrow the other guy's profile, since your's is great! Good pictures (a 23 year old with a new red 'Vette?... Gotta dig that...), nice flow to the text, and a positive and upbeat tone.
Only one tweak is needed--slightly revise some of the sentences that begin with "I", as there are a few too many.
Otherwise, nice work. May a thousand hot babes pounce upon thee... | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/26/2008 8:16:29 AM | First of all, her POF Screen name is a perfect choice, since she truly is a SterlingHeart
Triumph Brought About By Courage in the Face of Adversity. She could teach a master class! This gal has wisdom attained in the school of life. She is not bragging when she makes this statement, as it is a fact.
My only criticism of her profile is that her "About Me" section is a bit sparse (like EMPTY), but I know that it is under construction right now and that her profile will be a witty, interesting and charming picture of who she is when when she has it completed.
She is a jewel and worthy of a setting that will show forth her many shining, sterling qualities.  | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 6/26/2008 8:37:42 AM | whats wrong with cali's profile? hmmpf!
i'll tell what's wrong with it! location, location,location!!!
3 THOUSAND MILES WORTH!! cause thats about how far we are apart in land distance...but if you were to measure the space between our hearts.....
.......................just snap your fingers and smile! | |
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