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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/12/2008 7:01:09 AM | HAHAHAHAHHA!!! Clearly I misread your profile and inserted an R where it would be horrible to have one! I apoligize for that Shink!
Regarding your profile, I see you made some corrections, and I think it's much better now. Still think that your screen name is not the best, the meaning is pretty obscure, and I think you'll find other people seeing an imaginary R. Good luck though with your fishing!
oh Change your lead picture. It's not your best photo! | |
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cees
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Joined: 3/17/2008
Msg: 4602 | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/13/2008 8:20:05 PM | 
wow cees! i dont see a single thing wrong with your profile!
you are one lovely lady, you know exactly what you are looking for in a mate and you're not afraid to ask for it! thats great and sure cuts out alot of the guess work  ...and i bet you are smart enough to weed out the players you are bound to meet on here as well ..there just seems to be a no nonense side about you and thats a good thing!
all in all, i like the way you present yourself, you take great pics and your obviously a family oriented person who has KEEPER written all over you!
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SomSD
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Joined: 5/12/2008
Msg: 4605 | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/15/2008 9:20:52 AM | OK, here's the critique and you're probably not going to like it.
First, you need a much better lead photo of yourself. A nice closeup of you smiling would be terrific. I would lose the photo of you with the girl. Is she your sister or your old girlfriend?
Get rid of the first paragraph in your introduction!! It shows you have a real attitude about online dating. The rest is pretty good but I found the BOLD print very annoying. I'm sure you were trying to be clever but it's not working.
On the positive side, you wrote a lot about your interests and some of them are unique and interesting. You need to show more of that through in what you write. Why do you like sewing? Showing a woman your personality is going to get her interested in you, not what you want to be in her life. That conversation comes much later. | |
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SomSD
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Joined: 5/12/2008
Msg: 4607 | |
| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/15/2008 2:26:11 PM | --------------------------------------
Next person posting: please critique the above profile, not mine... I'm just responding.
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Nah, you're wrong... I didn't mind the critique at all. :)
The girl is my sister... but yeah, not obvious.
Yeah, I kind of do have an attitude about online dating... kind of see that as being an honest reflection of how I feel about it -- for better or for worse. I think I'll give more consideration to leaving it out, though.
The bold wasn't to be clever... it was for the attention span deprived. I tend to be verbose and the bold text was meant to be summarized points in case people didn't feel like reading every word. I know it "says something" if someone doesn't want to read the whole profile, but whatever... again, something I'll definitely consider.
Thanks!
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/23/2008 9:51:13 PM | AngelnGa, you've got the soul of a poet. The paragraph about your potential significant other is full of heartfelt descriptions and conveys your sensitivity nicely. It would be easier on the eyes if that paragraph were broken up into three smaller paragraphs, though, instead of being one big paragraph. Also, I caught a few typos which could easily be fixed with spell check.
I notice you did not talk about yourself in your profile. I think a reader would be interested in knowing a bit more about you. Plus, you have great facial features, amazing cheekbones, and nice eyes, but your close-ups don't do you justice due to poor lighting. The 3/4 length photo of you is quite fuzzy so it is hard to see. If you swap those out with clearer pictures and tweak it a tiny bit, I'd say you'd have a warm and very personable profile! | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/23/2008 10:31:44 PM | Hi Chiaretto,
Since you are female, could I suggest that you might want to change that last letter in your name from an "o" to an "a" being that San Diego is linguistically so based in romance languages? (unless of course you put on a photo and its then visually obvious that way).
The profile is very informative. As such, I wondered why you wrote in there that you're a "woman of mystery". I didn't see mystery, and rather then just surmised that you yourself possibly had not read it enough (ie: the first commandment of profile writing is to "know thy self"!), or wondered what you might be trying to 'hide'. Then for myself, it also was sort of tedious to read in its newspaper column like format. Of course though, that however may just be more about my ADD than it is any reflection upon you and whether it conveys what you want it to or not. Finally, I wanted to take just a moment to suggest just looking at the headings alone and the order you've put them in. As it starts with "work" on top, it suggests that either consciously or unconsciously you might really be looking here more for a job like as if with a resume, than for a relationship with a significant other. I know this is a lot, but there ya go from a stranger..... I hope you can graciously accept the suggestions, even if not for anything more than food for thought.
Oh, and about your reason for not posting a photo....the fact is, once you've e-mailed a photo, anything can happen to it just the same as if you had put it on your profile. You might want to 'take the risk' as it will get you more traffic, or otherwise, be very cautious about providing ever photos at all.
Best wishes!
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/23/2008 10:57:09 PM | | o4, I think overall your profile is very good although I had no idea what you were referring to in the "second paragraph". I would suggest either filling in the story for new visitors or deleting it all together. And then of course, people always like more pictures! The two you have up now are good. I would put up a couple more showing different sides to your personality! Good luck! | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/25/2008 7:41:11 AM | wow! theres not a thing wrong with this gals profile!
she's HOT! she's honest, loyal to her husband, beautiful to the bone, sexy as all get out, and shes very open about what she's looking for...i think thats commendable!
also by getting out and being active in the forums shes taking the time to interact rather than just flip thru the profiles on here,...so that shows she's looking for more depth than just a sexual encounter ........theres alot more to this gal than meets the eye!
its more like you are looking for a close friend, a sister who will enrich your life in more ways than just one and i hope you find her....the way you have written your profile shows that you spent alot of thought and time on how you worded it..theres more here between the lines than you realize . your heart is also revealed.  | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/25/2008 10:25:25 AM | Only thing I can find wrong with it is it doesn't YET contain my testimonial about how nice, sweet and friendly the lovely Di is.
You really can't find a more uplifting profile in this place.
Congrats on your books, Di. I'm jealous! | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/25/2008 6:26:54 PM | Well, looky here!!
That thump ya just heard was Lonsureman falling off his chair...LOL...I can't. Ready Gil?
Ok, this is going to be very easy because I know the person above me VERY well.
I am going to be totally honest here...Control all impulses to break his chops...
The only thing wrong with this profile, but it is kind of a biggie, is simply that it does not really portray his personality properly. It's light, then goes heavy, then is light, then sounds a bit defensive...like that...It is kinda all over the place...Oh, wait a second... Maybe it does portray him well...LOL j/k (sort of)...
No, really it does not properly show his best qualities (He has alot of good qualities) Ok, a for instance, and the one that really stands out to me.
His incredible wit. It lacks his wit. He is sharp as a razor... You just don't get that from his profile, at least I don't...
He really is a heck of a guy...One of my favorite people in the world. Not for nothing, he is a very gifted writer... So, not knowing what is up with the not so great profile. Does not do him justice.
Now, I know my profile stinks...ya can smell it from here!! So feel free to skip me. "Fricki"!! LOL!! | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/25/2008 8:43:30 PM | It's just my interpretation, but I think "friki" might be the fast version of "freaky", which also my impression of your profile. I think everyone is a little bit freaky - everyone has their own idiosyncrasies.
Liked the video.  | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/26/2008 7:40:02 PM | Well, bodewell, while I'm not all that fond of checking out another man's profile, it seems I'm stuck with yours.
Ya know, you really could beef it up a bit. Just keep adding so you can keep a woman's attention a little longer. Also, while crocheting may be fun, maybe you could tell about some of your more manly hobbies.
Now, as far as judging one's charector based on their profile, daaanngg buuuddd, I gotta pat you on the back! You nailed it when you said the girl above you is a F R E A K!!! That she is..but in a cool sorta way.
OT-Ey D, I mean Ana whatevadafuk the rest of that is, thanx for being so nice..even if you did say my profile ain't all that..ya rat
Hey, bodewell ain't got no favs. You oughtta throw him on your list. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/27/2008 1:26:13 AM | Hmmmm....
Your profile is a bloody trainwreck. I don't even know where to start.
You might want to try Dictionary.com ~ Then perhaps you could spell at least 3/4 of the words in your profile correct. With that said, I am going to be kind and not even mention the grammatical nightmare that is your profile. Oh, gosh...by saying that I guess I kind of did. Oh well.
The really sad part is that you do offer decent information about yourself, but it is so poorly written that a 5th grader would question your intelligence.
Not for nothing, just how does your statement, "Your to old for me and you live to far away." Critique the profile above you? I will tell you how, it does not.
Reading is fundamental. I suggest you read the title of the thread you are posting in before you hit the keyboard. If this thread was named "Why would you not date the person above you?"...Then your response would make sense (sort of since that was a mess too)... Alas, this is not the case, thus making you appear all the more silly.
When you speak of the above person, please do so with some respect. Thank you.
Have a wonderful night.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/27/2008 6:46:58 AM | Well, I trolled myself over here after reading one of Ms. Beaverhousen's posts.... checking her out to see if she's the reincarnation of someone else that *used to* hang out here on PoF.
Yup. She is. In all her "Marilyness".....
I enjoyed your profile. I understood it..... And wouldn't change a thing because it seems to be "all you"... without giving much up, ya know?
A protected woman, for sure....
One thing.... I would take a shot of you sans all the makeup. I see beauty under it all, but it would be kewl for the boyz to see it. Take some armor off and show thy true self darlin'.....
Show that facia bella and take one brick off the wall. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/27/2008 8:20:10 AM | Bullielover has a funny and interesting profile. I wonder if she had the dog "snot" cleaned from her window yet? 
She should make her profile longer and show more of her humor. Open up a little more, don't be so guarded. Shame on you for being a thief! | |
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