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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/15/2006 12:13:34 AM | I dont know bro,
where do i begin......................you are a virgin (and you are letting the person assume that you just cant get laid)
you go no abtions
you want to just get by
you have never been on a date
i don't think that is the image you want to portray | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/15/2006 6:23:30 PM | DEAR ARTJUNKIE,
IM NAME IS JASON.THANKS FOR BEING OPEN TO REVIEWS.FIRST OFF,I CAN TELL YOUR PROFILE IS POPULAR,YOU HAVE 30 OR SO MEMBERS THAT HAVE PLACED YOU ON THIER FAV. LIST.NO WORRIES.
IN FACT,YOU COME ACCROSS AS A VERY APPROCHABLE WOMAN." PLEASE HAVE A CAR"."JUST DON'T LIVE WITH YOUR PARENTS"IF YOUR GOING TO DATE ME,HAVE YOUR LOOSE ENDS TIED."ALL OF THOSE REQUEST ARE,PERFECTLY REASONABLE.NO PERSON COULD POSSIBLE FEEL YOUR STAND OFFISH,OR OVERLY PICKY.THAT'S WONDERFUL.
TRUELY YOU ARE ANY MANS DREAM.FOR YOU CHOOSE TO EXPRESS YOURSELF THOUGH ART.YOU MAY HAVE AN ICLUSIVE,CREATIVE NATURE,SURE TO ENRICH OTHER
HEARTS.YOU EMIT A SENCE OF BEING COMFORTABLE TO BE AROUND.I'M SURPRIZE
BELOW 40 PLEOPLE FANCY YOU.BUT SOME OF THOSE ARE PROBABLY GOOD FOLK TOO.
I'VE BEEN ON THE (P.O.F. SITE) FOR OVER A MONTH.NOBODY MARKS ME ON THIER
LIST.SO ,I READ HOW TO MAKE A BETTER PROFILE,UNDER LIST OF FORUMS,THE OTHER
DAY.I'VE LEARNED ONLY TO USE PICTURES THAT SHOW OUR FACES CLEARLY.ALSO TO
TRY AND PLACE THE ONES THAT VIEW US FROM HEAD TO TOE,SO LOOKERS CAN GET THE HOLE PICTURE OF US ,SO TO SPEAK.MAY I SUGGEST KEEPING NUMBERS 1,AND 2 OF
YOUR PICS.AND ONLY MAYBE 3.PUT BE AWARE OF WHOM ,THAT ONE MAY ATTRACT,
IF YOU REALLY WANT TO JUST GO ONE SOME FUN DATES.IM' OPEN TO IDEAL TOO,PLEASE FELL FREE TO SEE MY PROFILE.FISH,JASON | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/15/2006 7:08:11 PM | | Everything is in caps..... plus poor grammer and punctuation. I know he is trying and I will give the man an A for effort and I believe he is an honest, real, genuine and compassionate person but he needs to get the basics down or this profile is on the fast track to an extended vacation at lake nowhere with nobody. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/15/2006 8:07:33 PM | Ok... heh.
Firstly, your post # is 666... which is awesome.
Second, you're wearing blue shorts, with a belt, with a freakin blue shirt. Too much blue man! And, it appears that you are trying to show off your redicolously cut legs (that's not necessarily bad).
Actually, the only thing I could find wrong, is your wardrobe, otherwise, great profile, if I was a chick, I'd let you take me out.
p.s. I could probably pick it apart a bit further, but I see no need to be petty, I'm sure everyone will agree with me about the shorts/belt/shirt combo. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/16/2006 9:02:58 AM | Your welcome Jason....as I said.... I think you are a righteous dude ..... you just need to fine tune your punctuation, word spacings and only use capitol letters at the beginning of each sentence or only to perhaps highlight a specfic word or thought.
To Raymond8371 @ post 667:
Yo bro .... what are you doin checking out my legs man ? Whassup with that !!!
You one of those sweet guys ? LOL :) | |
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Ahhh!
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Joined: 3/11/2006
Msg: 666 | |
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