| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/9/2006 7:22:39 AM | | I don't think you need any more comments on your profile, but as I do know you for your posts, but never actually took the time to see your profile... I must say, it is impressive.. no, it did not crack me up (your posts do very often, so that's fine =P), but I did like every line of it (especially the interests' list.. ;) | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/9/2006 7:51:54 AM | nothing...profile perfection. Entertaining and beautiful. The way you discribe yourself as a crazy girl...nice touch. I like it!
you are right...I got comments from two people...one said I was pretty (!!) the other said I was funny...pretty funny.
so I must comment...I have not seen any posts from you lately...where have you been hiding?
Very pretty girl...and you have met your crazy other half? Excellent! Bravo! Muy Bueno...
I wish I had saw you first, but all for the best. He is very handsome and I am , well, sort off ok in a rugged kinda way...
my best feature is my teeth. I can nibble on a ladies neck and drive her absolutely crazy. can you imagine that?
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/10/2006 3:52:48 AM | Hey another deafie here!! Yaaay!!! This gal is great and her kitties are purrrrfect!! Very funny pics! Hmmm whats wrong with the profile? Nothing at all, sorry to disappoint everyone.
PS: Thanks for the nice compliments and I am hoping to get hearing aids in a few months. Do you sign? | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/14/2006 6:27:25 AM | Here.. I fixed it for you... ( it's the little things that bother me)
Retired military. 37yr old. Money is not a problem. I am also a contractor. I love to spoil my baby, but I don't have one. I had to return my ex- baby she wound up being defective. All humor aside, I am a loving, hard working man who needs a loving, honest, loyal lady to join me and build an awesome life together.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/16/2006 10:04:26 PM | ^
ibdaman,
Generally a good profile but some suggestions. So it's qualified upfront, what I say isn't personal, it's just about making your profile more accessible.
- Change the "Let's see what happens!" It doesn't, to be honest, sound confident. Women like men who know where they are going and have a plan. Maybe you could pick something that was a little more eyecatching or was a good summary of your profile.
- Says "Does Not Want Children" to children, might want to clarify if you mean you are cool with single mothers or not. Since there are so many single mothers, you might want to clarify whether you do not want more children period or just not anymore from this point forward by your own doing. You might want to discuss the general age ranges of your own children, so someone else can take a rough guess about your time commitments.
- Says you are "Divorced", might want to cover how long ago you were divorced, i.e. if it was recent, most women probably won't find that situation desirable. They don't want to be a rebound, deal with lingering feelings, etc. Not saying you have to go into gory detail, but some light specifics in the timeline would help a little if the divorce was distant.
- Talk about your career a little. Women will key off of your career and what they perceive you will earn. If you are in charge of others at your job, say so. If your job gives you alot of time flexibility, say so. Push the pluses. Sales is a pretty wide open field, some guys make heavy scratch, some make nothing. You might be more specific about what kind of sales you deal with on a regular basis. (To be honest, if you say you are in sales, your profile should be very very polished, anything less red flags your perceived ability at your job)
- Your First Date is vague. Sounds like you are unsure of what you want and are ok with anything. Which is cool, since in real life, chicks choose anyway. However in this medium and this context, it would help to show confidence, goals and decisiveness. Be specific about what you'd like to do.
- Your About Me has negativity in it. No one wants baggage and bitterness but it does you no good to actually say it. Say you are looking for someone "who is looking for a healthy committed relationship and sees each new situation as an opportunity" That's an example of saying what you want to avoid in a positive way. Push the positives, push what you have to offer.
- Add at least one full length profile shot of yourself, so women can gauge your entire physical appearance. Dark colors help. Showing yourself in some activity you enjoy helps. Try taking photos that are a little more clear and have better lighting. Maybe have a shot where you are dressed up a little more, a nice collar shirt and clean shaven.
More than anything, if you say your profession is sales, you have to have a very polished profile. Doesn't mean you have to use all my suggestions, but would you want a dermatologist that was covered in poison ivy treating you or your kid? See what I mean?
Like I said, what I said isn't personal, it's meant to be constructive and in your best interests. Good profile overrall.
Good luck man. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/16/2006 10:30:25 PM | MrGordongecko,
Those are some good tips, and I appreciate your input. I guess I didn't put alot of thought into how I wanted to come across. I do get alot of responses the way it is, but I see your point and it couldn't hurt to polish it up a tad.
Thanks and good luck to you! | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/17/2006 4:02:06 AM |
She don't like walks on the beach, other then that very nice.
Of course I love walks on the beach. But Ive actually done that on a first and second date, and it was just a bit awkward. Save it for a few dates later. Plus, I am just making light of the fact that nearly EVERYONE has that in for a first date, and seems though it would be crowded. Plus, I iike to be original! LOL | |
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Posted: 10/17/2006 12:17:51 PM | His default picture looks like he's had a stroke on the right side of his face. Change the pic, brah!
(Though if he's really had a stroke then I apologise... but at 18 years of age I'm thinkin' it's unlikely.) | |
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| above you?
Posted: 10/17/2006 1:03:34 PM |
His default picture looks like he's had a stroke on the right side of his face
Naw, thats what I just did after he called me "old"!!  | |
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