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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/8/2006 8:30:20 PM | Uses the word lonely two too many times.
'dunno' under interests - you need to have interests to be interesting (just my opinion).
First paragraph of 'About Me' is crazy negative, dude. Cleverly worded, but a turn-off at the same time. Talk about you. You're funny and intelligent. There's your starter.
The photo is nicely composed, but the crotch-shot perspective is a little wierd. (Again, just my opinion.)
Beautiful hair.
First date section is cute.
I don't know if this is a case of 'little-schooled in the 70s' snobbery or what, but I would suggest capitalizing the first letter in the sentence. Breaks things up a bit visually, and shows that you have separate thoughts.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/8/2006 9:19:05 PM | "Laughing" isn't an interest - especially when you describe it as one of "many different interests". An interest that would be different for a guy would be "doesn't like Baseball" - an American guy listing Baseball as a differentiating interest is like anyone listing breathing, and a Miss USA girl stating a desire for World Peace, or Whirled Peas depending on intellect.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 11:28:09 AM | She seems nice but she spelled "karaoke" wrong twice and her lists of wants in a mate is too long... it is better (and easier) to see who you meet and like them for who they are rather than trying to fill a list of prerequisites.
hmm that might have sounded much harsher than i meant it to. its really a good profile with nice pics and she seems like a great mom :D | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 12:19:50 PM | ^
Good profile
Some suggestions - I'd be more specific in your first date section, also you might want to list the general age range of your children ( so people can kind of gauge where your time/free time would shake out, younger kids take more time) , and I would remove the 'no hair' part out of your description.
Good profile though, good luck | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 12:38:38 PM | Thanks Gord; seems like this site adds that part to your description automatically when you fill out the form... I went to change it but all the other choices would make me look like I was lying and saying I had hair... which I do, just lower ;)
Thanks for the suggestions, good idea about the age thing. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 1:49:17 PM |
Lets start with youre headline and take it from there..... Loyal but lonely???? cmon..... You should have just said.... "Hey girls... Who wants to come punch me in the face...."
OMG I almost laughed out loud in the friggin' library cubicle I'm at, dude. When I see the word "lonely" I think "run for your life." I also think "weak sauce." Women say they want a guy with sensitivities and who is "understanding" but c'mon, ultimately what straight women want is a MAN. And no, "prick" is not tantamount to being a "man", it just means you gotta hold your own and most of all, don't be all wallowing in your misery (that is what lonely conjures the thought of). My profile is purposely long to weed out the illiterates. haha j/k, just depends on what demographic you want to attract, I suppose.  Ideally, there should be a lot to talk about initially... unless your life is boring.  Good luck to all  I will stop using these emoticons so liberally now. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 6:19:05 PM | He is a "foum junkie"
Thankfully I am only a forum junkie, and have not yet heard of this new "foum" substance!
Do I take a cross and garlic if we go out, just in case?
Will Lurch answer the door?
No your mom would answer the door, she's loves it hardcore.
Now say my name, and go make me some coffee!
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 7/9/2006 6:24:54 PM | I would take it with cream but god knows that your mom already gave me enough of that.
You can try saying my name three times though and we will see if that same pitch runs in your family.
**sings Mary Poppins song**
Feed the birds, tuppence a bag.
Tuppence, tuppence, tuppence a bag... | |
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