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Posted: 2/28/2007 3:28:03 AM | Hey Pooh bear,
If I could get a girl's perspective I would be very grateful! Thanks | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 3:41:49 AM | @sander
If you go to your inbox, there is a link at the top that says sent messages. If you click on the link, it will show you the emails you have sent and whether or not they were read/unread and or deleted.
Personally, I delete any emails in there before anything because I certainly don't want to drive myself nuts with "well, did he read it, did he delete it?" I just let them respond and if not, oh, well. | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 3:47:12 AM | @photomik
Overall, the profile is good. You don't really need to repeat any of your interests, you already covered them. Not the part about how much you enjoy the outdoors, that pretty much was expected of you. But then you say something like you enjoy gardening, etc. It's not needed.
I'd also avoid saying things like "possessiveness isn't something I look for" (sorry, forget exact wording.) I'd say something like, I'm looking for a woman who is independent. | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 3:55:54 AM | @red
I'd change out your main picture for picture 3.
I'd burn pictures 2 and 4. I am sure that they are "you", but man, they are some scary. *shivers*
Smilies get a  from me. I'd lose them. I don't need them to laugh, I already laughed. They just distracted me.
I'd change the who you'd like to meet...did you really sign up here and say, "Ooh, I hope I get a new drinking buddy?" Of course not. That very well may happen...but that isn't your goal. At least state that you're looking for friends and if more develops, great.
Your profile is fine overall though. | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 4:02:09 AM | @little things
I think your profile is fine. A lot of it just needs to be rearranged...for instance, you mention your family quite a bit through your profile. So perhaps you could group all of your family together and state how important family is to you.
I'd also stop emphasizing about how you're not looking for a daddy for your two-year-old and how you don't get out. I think it's safe to say that any good mommy of a 2-year-old doesn't get the chance to get out very much.
I think that there are better ways to state that you are looking for a friend first, then dating, and then maybe move in together. Personally, I'd concentrate on the friends first/dating bit. You can cover all of those bases...including the fact that you are not looking for a daddy for your daughter. But it's kinda scary that you want to mention about not moving together in in a profile...
I like the fact that your pictures are dated. However, one or three can go...they're the exact same picture.
You can also put more interests in, even possibly moving the yard sales bit to interests. | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 12:51:41 PM | | If someone would like to do mine, I'd appreciate it as well. I'm open to any suggestions as far as changes or anything I should add or remove. Thanks! | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 4:54:48 PM | go immediately to msg 1078.
ok...now you are on board.
"enemys" is spelled "enemies" and now...you do have some very good looks going for you...you are the shit babe.
more later
*poof* | |
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Posted: 3/1/2007 5:17:50 PM | I want an honest review of what is written. Suggestions on what I might add to my profile Also If I should change my pictures. Grammer and spelling would be appreciated.
Thank you
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Posted: 3/2/2007 12:05:00 AM | pooh bear fan
It seems I made a comment or two for someone in your thread accidently...
oh wow ...I am sorry...I had your page open to request a review...and I also was posting reviews in my own thread and I got em mixed up...I just realized this...at the time we both had the same # of pages (46) and that was where part of the confusion came from...
no I do not hijack threads LOL! too funny..
I look forward to my review as I recently changed my profile!
thanks
O you are doing a fine job here girl.
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Posted: 3/2/2007 6:29:06 PM | @weird revolutions
I'd get some new pictures. You admit that you don't look like that anymore, that you dress differently and your hair is shorter...well, show us.
I'd use a human picture as your main picture.
Number one profile killer...repeating your interests. What you might want to do is take one of those interests and make it seem so exciting that I'll have to drop everything to try it myself.
Please don't say you're not too picky about who you date...there's another word for that and that's desperate. Take the line out and mention what you do look for in a woman.
What do you bring to a relationship? | |
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Posted: 3/2/2007 6:32:35 PM | @Jaki
I really do like your profile. Which is kinda weird, 'cuz I think you stand for everything I don't. 
I just have a feeling that mostly everyone falls in love with you and for good reason.
I wouldn't fret about not having a boyfriend at your age, hon. You're still young. | |
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Posted: 3/2/2007 6:35:31 PM | @searching
I like your profile. You have some great photos, they show you off beautifully and they show you in your element.
Your profile says who you are looking for and what you have to offer. It has all of the necessary details.
Great profile.  | |
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Posted: 3/3/2007 11:55:56 AM | @beachybachelor
First paragraph, great. Third paragraph, great.
Second one...I'm not a fan of.
You've already told us you are single, not divorced. You've already told us you don't have kids. Hopefully you have somewhat of an education and really, saying so doesn't make you wonderful--it's what you do with it. You don't have a criminal record...well, you know...a lot of other people don't either that I wouldn't date...
So why would I date you?
Lose the stuff that isn't important. I don't think anything in paragraph 2 is worth keeping. Why would I want to message you? | |
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Posted: 3/3/2007 11:59:32 AM | @bill
No worries. I've opened your thread by accident on many occasions instead of my own. 
You know I love your profile and would only change one little thing:
It's carnIval, not carnaval.
Unless it's supposed to be carnaval...
And again, with the last line, you'll get a blank look from me when you ask me the last book I read...but that's because I can never remember which one I read last (because of how many I read).  | |
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Posted: 3/3/2007 12:08:49 PM | @katie
Of course Bill would only notice one spelling mistake and then notice your looks.
Sorry, these are just some pet peeves of mine--it's I'm, I've, a lot--not Im, Ive, or alot.
I probably wouldn't say anything, you seem so loveable, but you say you're smart...please, I'm not saying you're not smart, I don't know you, but I can tell you right now that with your looks and grammatical mistakes, you'll get hounded by jealous people like me.
(Well, I'm not jealous of you. I correct everyone's spelling. I even corrected the spelling of my godfather, my most favorite person in the world.)
Your profile is fine, even without correcting mistakes. You have 23 on your favorites, you must be doing something right. | |
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Posted: 3/3/2007 12:18:12 PM | @harley
I am not your typical Women I am not a women who allows themselves to be driven by their emotions and desire in order to have a desired fullfilling relationship. I have that desired fullfilling relationship with myself. I don't need a man to fullfill my needs. I am a kind person with a very big heart, funny, and very giving, I love my boys more than anything in the world. So hit me up if you want to know more about me. I would like a man that loves himself and who is Real like I am. Love and Peace
It should be: I am not your typical womAn. I am not a womAn who allows themselves to be...
However, you can remove that line. Completely. Start off with "I have a fulfilling (only one l after the fu)"...and go from there. Tell us what you are, not what you're not.
Ok, so you don't need a man to fulfill your needs. Why are you on a dating site for? Are you looking for someone to share your time with? If that's it, then tell us that. Don't tell us why you're not here...
You have a big heart...you're funny...and very giving. How are you those things?
I'd remove the line about "hit me up if you want to know more." It's assumed.
What else do you want in a man? You want someone who loves himself and is real...btw, why did you capitalize real for? Not needed. | |
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Posted: 3/4/2007 1:34:50 PM | Hi Shauna,
Could you please review. I am looking to fix any problems, content, spelling any thing that helps.
Thank you! | |
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Posted: 3/4/2007 5:56:59 PM | Hi, I'm curious as to your opinion of my profile. Give it the once over when you get a chance.
Thanks in advance, Bob | |
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Posted: 3/4/2007 7:16:38 PM | Thanks Shanamarie. you are doing an awesome job here
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Posted: 3/4/2007 9:31:54 PM | | I have been on a few of the so called dating sites and it's bocome obvious i haven't got a clue what I'm doing so any help you can offer would be appreciated. | |
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