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Posted: 3/9/2005 8:00:05 PM | I would like to hear your advice on my profile. I have enjoyed the perspective you have on most of the profiles you have analyzed. Of course like most I hope mine isnt too bad lol
Great work,
Take care,
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Posted: 3/10/2005 1:46:14 AM |  Perhaps it would be best to ignore Dancing Panties,and continue to just be my self, if women are not intrested in me now, how much more aluring could I become if I started writing like Dancing Panties??? (-;   
Nope, I'l just remaim truly myself...(-; | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:14:08 AM | UNVRKNO
Interesting selection of photos.
The Zorro one is dark. Need a happy one for balance.
Caps lock = shouting
fill out the interests with commas like they tell you to and people will be able to connect better to profile.
DARK/SELFISH MOODY
-- good that you are up front with what your personality is like.
-- might want to talk about your good side for balance or give an example so it doesn't sound as bad as it sounds | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:17:45 AM | Velp
nice is kind of a bland word... if you are getting responses keep it but if not change heading
more pics please and a list of interests
i’m not good with writing about myself... so i’m not sure what to say.
-- not a lot of people are
-- not good to start off the profile so timidly
some people have told me i’m cute, but i don’t think so.
-- hmm knocking compliments??? hmmmm
tell me what do you think?
-- they can't... they haven't met you
but you know what they say nice guys finish last
-- I've already written in this thread my views about nice guys finishing last.
Good first date section.
Basically, you kind of insult yourself for the entire profile. You HAVE to have something good going for you. Everyone does... so talk about it! | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:27:11 AM | marciminda
more pics of you and less of the car
more interests
im searching for my princess where are you sweety pie
-- knight in shining armour syndrome
-- need to be needed and put someone up on pedestle
-- better to talk about what you have to offer, what you are like, what you are good at etc...
Basically, you are showing with your few words that you are willing to drop your life for some chick. That tells me that your life is not that great if you are willing to drop it so quick.
Let people ask you for your email or wait for them to say something significant that makes you want to give it to them.
People-- emotionally healthy people-- look for people to compliment their life... not for
die hard romantics to give up everything for them.
Read the other profiles in this thread for ideas on how to look like a good catch.
my first date must be romantic
-- I think of first dates as being casual get to know you and see how the chemistry works thing...especially when meeting people online. Less pressure that way. | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:32:47 AM | | wow. i can't beleive how many people asked you to examine their profile. good on ya' my pants dancing friend !!! cheers | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:36:08 AM | AngelicPassion:
I like your writing style.
Would like to see more pics.
If what you are doing is getting you attention from people you like..then don't change the profile.
I think that if I was reading profiles I would say that yours is too romantic.
There's a strong burning yearning thing that's really coming through your words.
What you've written is beautiful but is better suited for private journals or love letters to people you've already created a strong relationship with.
If you wanted to try something different... I would suggest that you write something 10x more lighthearted. A hey let's get together and see if we click sort of thing. Keep in mind that lots of strangers are reading the profile. You aren't going to approach a stranger in real life with poetry that comes from the depths of your soul, right? Especially one you know nothing about. Good luck buttercup. | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:38:54 AM | CEC93013
your profile is decent anyways... I think it got cut off at the end though.
and it's PANTS not PANTIES
completely different | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 6:23:20 AM | Hey sweety...you may have done mine already in the thread that got deleted...but could you give it another whack? Thanks milady..you rock! | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 9:52:59 AM | | Welli might as well join the fray so let me here it as having read all u do good job now if u could just get the women to answer emails and not just delete or read and echoooo nothing returned u would be my princess hahaha | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 3:36:37 PM | danceinpants,,,, submitted for your approval.. Wait that is the start of the twilight zone?
Anyhow.. I tried some of the changes you recommended.. Let my know what ya think when you get a chance.. Thanks. | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 4:46:52 PM | txbiker
I want to know who the girl in the picture is...
I have been running into two types of girls lately, the kind that is too immature and plays games, and the kind that acts like they are 40 or too good to act a little goofy and have fun.
-- I'm not big on people complaining about game players.... but you weren't killer negative about it...maybe just mention "games" once in your whole profile. Whining about games makes me think you have baggage.
I like to test girls on the first date
-- test = too much pressure
Find a different way to say this. | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 4:52:57 PM | looking2meetsome1
hmm I'm not too crazy about your name. You're an artist, I'd rather see a creative name that reflects more of what you are about.
It's like, thanks captain obvious.. 90% of the people on here want to meet people.
get more pics
the one you have is good
if you're not too attached to the mustache-- take a pic without it.
check typos
Unfortunate as it may be. I am finacially in-secure. Can't have it all.
-- none of their business
-- you already said you were a starving artist
Good description of yourself. | |
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Posted: 3/10/2005 4:58:29 PM | willhuntley
I'd like to see a head shot.
More interests
Your profile was pretty short and sweet. You totally let people know that you were not into committing in an easy going casual way. You come across as being likeable.
It wouldn't hurt to add more about what you really like to do for fun or what type of people you want to meet. | |
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