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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 3:57:00 AM | omg time to go to bed... I'm reading stuff and not remembering any of it.
I WISH there was a website for it.
I also wish there was an edit button on this goofy site. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 7:49:55 AM | other
get photos
check typos
are you really married? cause that's going to reduce your hits right off the bat.
add more interests
I like your story. It's a pretty good one. Romantic, but not cheesy. Hopefully -- even though you don't say too much about what type of person you are and what you are looking for --- the story will affect enough people so you get emails. Give it a go and if it's not working for you--- try a different type of about me section.
Might be helpful to explain why you are married and on a dating web site. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 7:52:40 AM | shed_2005
If you really enjoy everything life has to offer then why do you only have 5 interests listed? hehe
shy at first but opens up quickly type of guy -- This is a great comment
I'd like to see more sentences instead of a long list of descriptive words.
Won't hurt to say what type of person you are looking for. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 7:56:01 AM | whatsgotbillysospooked
I'd like to see a pic of you smiling.
Nice to add pics of artwork.
Do you have any outdoor interests?
I really like your profile. Well written. Good description of yourself and what you're looking for. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 7:58:19 AM | unito infinito
check typos
you've got lots of pictures of different people so it might be a good idea to say which one is a picture of you
good changes | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 8:44:41 AM | LaurenB
Your profile is pretty short but I like how it sounds.
Maybe add a list of interests so you better your chances of attracting people with stuff in common with you.
Having no interests listed and not saying much in the First Date section kind of gives an I don't care attitude. You'll probably be able to get away with this as you are cute....but you might be missing out on the people who like to know a BIT more about a person before they message them. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 8:48:01 AM | toonsmith
hehe funny heading
out of the first three photos the second one is best--- the others are a bit deer in headlights.
do you have any outdoor interests?
check typos
Really great profile..interesting, funny, says what you want and who you are
You meet women who think Star Trek is real??? | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 10:44:22 AM | You are good at analyzing! I didn't even think of outdoor things.
Science Fiction and comic conventions can sometimes be scary places.
I once sat in a large room with 300 trekkies, as a Paramount public relations person gave a slide presention on which galaxies the Enterprise was presently exploring. As dozens awed and ohhh'd, I wanted to scream "People! It's NOT REAL OKAY?"
Good job!
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 10:56:14 AM | Thanks for your help. I am unhappily married. Are there other sites you would suggest that better suits me. Doug. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 10:56:15 AM | Hey there,
I'm new to POF, so if any of y'all have a minute, I'd appreciate your feedback on my profile, too.
Be ye kind. (Ephesians 4:32)... or really harsh, which is fun too. ;)
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 12:16:31 PM | Hello again, darlin'.......
My profile's changed again to represent my new status as a resident of Dumpsville population 1.
:^(
I also added to it influenced by your suggestions. | |
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| Let ME analyze your profile for you Posted: 3/4/2005 1:33:46 PM | But Dancing Pants,At 50 and richer than Howy Houghs I am just a tech GOOFY...(-; My not being a computer wizkid I like to play with the Icons...(-;
Most of us old fart's do...(-; | |
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